WhisperBlack
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Joined 04-19-03, id: 351111
Author has written 57 stories for Life, Love, War, Friendship, School, Humor, Haiku, and Religion.

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A pair

Of mismatched newlyweds,

One of whom still feels very insecure,

I keep turning to God

Saying

¨Kiss

Me¨

-by Hafiz

beauty´s hard to pin down

and love is hard to stop

hatred won´t get you very far

though it´s easily begot

time is moving forward

while i´m just standing still

and no one, not even damn seers,

knows what tomorrow wills

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Gardeners
and what debt I owe him
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Published: 11/3/2007 - Complete
May there be questions
for without these we cannot seek.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Published: 11/3/2007 - Complete
A Note reviews
on the things you don´t notice.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/23/2006
The Tummy reviews
when you´ve got the grumbles
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/22/2006
to you reviews
Look
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/19/2006
The Beautiful reviews
what is beauty?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/21/2005
true meaning reviews
plain words and feeling
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/12/2005
Separation reviews
degrees of separation...how close are we?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/2/2005
Open
a poem with a slightly buddhist bent, to remain open to the world or close off
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Published: 7/25/2005
poeetical
looking on from afar
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Published: 7/25/2005
fall reviews
she's of no talent
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/28/2004
Possess Me
Old poem from my angsty love prolific writing phase. rated for language.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Published: 11/16/2003
Heaven smells like reviews
a poem inspired indirectly by a line in Sentinel fanfic. not depressing, not passionate. just kind of weird and off-ball amusing
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/13/2003
Adjusting reviews
a melancholy lament for a broken friendship. not too depressing
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/13/2003
A lone reviews
what am i?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/21/2003
tribute to ee cummings reviews
one of my favorite poets
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/21/2003
Detritus of Youth reviews
growing out of childhood
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/2/2003
How does it work? reviews
i don't understand how other people relate to each other. how does socializing work harmoniously? short poem!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/14/2003
Heartfelt Sighs reviews
more unrequited love stuff, as i always write. enjoy.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/2/2003
Unsuccessful Weeding reviews
grasping the tendrils of you and pulling, the weeds of my love refuse to be pulled.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/28/2003
Softer Kind of Angry reviews
still loving someone against my will
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/19/2003
Hose reviews
a poem I wrote a few years ago, which today reminded me of an eerie amount. different boys though.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/19/2003
Reality or Illusion reviews
Illusion is so much more beautiful...and deadly
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/16/2003
You Look So reviews
the way the loved one looks at any given time...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5/16/2003
Young, Dumb, and Full of reviews
a silly haiku about teenage boys. funny, I promise
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: M - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/15/2003
Loved Enough reviews
trying to stop loving...it's too hard. Reviews to anyone who reviews mine
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/13/2003
Trip Over My Soul reviews
another angsty love poem. he's in love with someone else.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/11/2003
Rhyme with the Time in the Slime so you Shine reviews
Another poetic rant, this time about rhyming poetry. Flames are welcome! And yes, I know, SOME people can rhyme effectively...not most, but some.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 5/8/2003
Your Power Over Me reviews
love is physically painful to the one unrequited
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/7/2003
Living Within My Head reviews
More angsty loveness courtesy of my fickle emotions. I extremely apologize for the formatting, it sucks. Remember, you R&R, I R&R for you!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 292 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/6/2003
Soft and Gently Falling reviews
falling in love and how it happened to me
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/6/2003
Rain in the Willow Grove reviews
another rain/love love/rain angsty love poem. joy joy, those who review get reviews in return!!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/6/2003
Painted reviews
Broken spirits of the painted princess
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/2/2003
Trimming Away the Branches
families always know how to tug on your heartstrings...after all, they tied them there. I don't like leashes
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Published: 4/30/2003
Lonely Blinds reviews
more loneliness poetry.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/28/2003
Happiness the Elusive reviews
about my very first concert
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/28/2003
Inked from the InsideOut reviews
everything whispers black to me
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/28/2003
Hateful Sense reviews
the world sucks. sorry about the formatting, tis a bitch
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 366 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/28/2003
Teenage Cliche reviews
I guess I am one after all...how depressing.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 384 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/28/2003
Lung Cancer
A poem I wrote a while ago, when I first found out my advisor at school has lung cancer.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Published: 4/28/2003
Wingless reviews
Cross between my thoughts about La Femme Nikita's Michael and my thoughts about my current (and idiotic) obsession
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/28/2003
He reviews
Another battle between Mind and Heart.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/27/2003
Reflection Illness reviews
I can't look at myself in the mirror today...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/25/2003
Practical Joker reviews
The universe exploded, I wrote a poem that attempted to rhyme! I hope it's funny, I've never written anything this lighthearted before. R&R please! feed the author!
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4/23/2003
Rabid Chemistry Teacher reviews
Wrote this sitting in Chemistry class. A humor-filled expulsion of my absolute disgust for my Chem teacher
Poetry: School - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/22/2003
Last Kiss reviews
Rather gruesome poem about war.
Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/22/2003
Crab reviews
Feeling happy?
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/21/2003
Soulless reviews
Not in MY name; though you may own my soul, I remain opposed
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/21/2003
Clearly reviews
Those idiotic teenage obsessions that strike you without warning...can't eat, can't sleep, they give you heartburn when you see them, you want them and you shouldn't...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/21/2003
No Place reviews
A friend who feels nothing but for herself...I miss who I thought she was.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/20/2003
Smut Writing Nonos reviews
What NOT to do if you're writing about sex. A Poetic Rant by WhisperBlack against horrible smut writing everywhere.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 9 - Published: 4/20/2003
Guillotine reviews
Thoughts of the future... Not entirely happy with this poem, please critique NICELY. thanks!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/20/2003
Beaten in Spirit reviews
My country used to cultivate my optimism. Now it tears it from me gleefully. What the hell?
Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/19/2003
Blood Addict reviews
Hurting yourself isn't always the awful thing everyone pretends.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4/19/2003
Ode to Ewan McGregor reviews
Sexy, short piece summarizing my thoughts on Ewan McGregor
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/19/2003
Tears of the Universe reviews
It was raining, I was crying
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/19/2003
Tired reviews
The world is exhausting. Commiserate
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/19/2003