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Joined 04-26-03, id: 352077
Author has written 15 stories for Love, Life, Fantasy, Fantasy, and General.
I love to write poetry. However, I am rarely happy with the outcome of my attempts and I'm very self-conscious about my poetry. I'm hoping to get a lot of reviews on here. I need some feedback and constructive critism to better my writing.

name: jen

age: 19

birthday: may 24th

zodiac: gemini

state of residence: michigan

hobbies: music, concerts, poetry, rollerblading, snowboarding

ambition: to graduate college & work for a record label

fav bands: *thursday, the beautiful mistake, mae, armor for sleep, 311, third eye blind, incubus

fav films: finding nemo, bringing down the house, dude where's my car?, zoolander, gigi

fav books: the witch of blackbird pond

bands on current playlist: armor for sleep, 311, thursday, the all-american rejects

fav quotes:
"light a match for i deserve to burn" -- *light a match* ~ the beautiful mistake
"i guess you found a way to make ten minutes last forever... i pray you fall" -- *the end of an era* ~ hopesfall
"i look at the cross then i look away/give you the gun, blow me away" -- *change (in the house of flies)* ~ deftones
"i wake up as if dreams are real, i sleep so i don't have to feel the truth that you will never be the one person that won't ever forget me" -- *dream to make believe* ~ armor for sleep

Please review my work and I'll try my best to do the same for you! Thank you!

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Downstar by phish2phish reviews
you're even more beautiful out of perception
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/5/2003
Her Eyes by phish2phish reviews
"she's like watching the stars collide..."
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/30/2003
White Rose by phish2phish reviews
"look into my eyes and we'll kill the morning"
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 7 - Published: 4/29/2003
Date Rave by TragedyLovesMisery reviews
In the fire of ecstasy
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/23/2003
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unbreak me reviews
"unsent messages waiting, patience forever expired"
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/12/2003
your first sunrise reviews
description of a dream... needs R+R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/12/2003
iced shadow reviews
a metaphor for broken lines of communication
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/12/2003
an angry cloud reviews
just a silly little story with a serious undertone
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/5/2003
when seasons don't change reviews
a seasonal metaphor for conformity.... everyone looks the same
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/7/2003
the forgotten kiss reviews
just wanting to let go... (an older poem of mine)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/7/2003
a touch of soft reviews
pretty please R+R!!! i really want this to be absolutely perfect & i need all the help i can get
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4/30/2003
pressure reviews
emotion overload... needs major revision - please R+R, thanks!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/30/2003
les chansons de nuit reviews
nos amour ne mort jamais
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - French - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/29/2003
look ahead reviews
poem is better than title... trust me
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/28/2003
a chill in the air reviews
starchasers
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/28/2003
lachrymose reviews
sadness is the most infecting emotion.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/28/2003
between reviews
the pains of insomnia
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/26/2003
seasonal inferno
a fight against time
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Published: 4/26/2003
aimless inspiration reviews
waking up next to you...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/26/2003