Angelic Wings
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Joined 05-10-03, id: 354269
Author has written 50 stories for General, Love, Fantasy, Nature, War, Haiku, Friendship, and Life.
To read or not to read: That is the question. You choose the answer~read it or leave it.

About Angelic Wings:
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Eye colour: Deep brown
Hair: Black
Heritage/Native of: I am Chinese Canadian. Don't you dare make fun of me about it. *glares daggers and bares teeth*
Other Stuff: I suppose I get my writing skills from my mother. I play piano (ninth grade...mwahahahahaha...I beat all of my other piano playing friends at piano except for a few) and flute (only just begun). I hope to learn the violin next, partly because I like violin music, and only partly so I can torture my sisters with some good screeching when they annoy me, although I'll probably get a year's worth of punishment...

TYPES OF POETRY:
Tanka: Like a haiku, again, instead of 5-7-5, it's 5-7-5-7-7. Thanks for the definition, Songbreeze Swifteye!!0.~
Cut: Introduced by Princess Mulan, known as Queen of the Haiku. It's like a haiku, but instead of 5-7-5, it's 7-5-3-1. That's for those of you who don't know.
Couplets(just one): A rhyming couplet/couplet is made up of only two lines that rhyme. Sounds really cute when you're done, try it sometime!!
Haikus(got a lot up now...): I think we all know what a haiku is.
Normal Rhyming Ones(pretty much a lot): I think we all know that.
Non-Rhyming(coupla those...): Poems that don't rhyme, if you can't figure that out. [Just joking!! ^^]
*more shall be added as I explore different types of poetry

I'm not exactly the spunky type. I'll be hyper, but that's about it. I'm sort of a tomboy...you know, one that likes the wicked fighting scenes in movies, hates skirts(*gasp* OMG!!! *scream* IT'S A SKIRT!!!), hates lipstick and makeup, likes to wear pants or jeans, etc. But not totally. If I were a tomboy, would I be a part of the family of writers?

Review mine, I'll review yours. I rarely say ANYTHING like: 'Oh God. Your story/poem totally sucked.' Actually, I NEVER say anything like that, because I review others like I'd want them to review mine. I'll give 'Constructive Criticism', if you'd like to put it that way~you know, suggest. And before you use anything of mine, remember to ask me first. After all, it's COPYRIGHTED to me. (That's one thing I like about . Another thing I like about it is that writers can be so friendly. Not ALL of them, though.)

Hmm...now that I think of it, I don't think ALL my poems are that good. Sometimes I'll say that it's not good, but review anyway, so I can improve. Why do you publish them anyway?, you ask. To see if people will like them the way they are. And please try to review as much as possible~I don't get that many reviews, unlike some authors.

I'd very much appreciate it if you don't flame, but rather give 'Constructive Criticism' as mentioned before. And if you do choose to flame, then that's a piece of my sanity you're taking away.

Well, that's all I have to say. I think you guys should read my poem 'Dream Forever'. I worked rather hard on it, and the idea just struck me pretty suddenly. Review, and please do not flame.

ENJOY!!!

~Angelic Wings~*

P.S. :If you see a poem that has zero, one or two reviews, please be kind and read it and review.

STUFF I SAY FROM DAY TO DAY: I'm getting a bit of writer's block...but I still have enough poems, right? *glances down* Hmm...BTW, I'd like to thank Heart of the Sword, Lovelorn Genius, Songbreeze Swifteye, teresa7(I think), and many others for taking the time to review my haikus/senryus, and poems. ^^ I really appreciate them!

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I am not the hunter, but the hunted by someonelse reviews
This was a sleep deprivation? Odd? poem. It's about someone that is a 'watcher' of the world in the sense of the fantasy genre. Take a look, it's worth the time.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,233 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 10/28/2003 - Published: 6/12/2003 - Complete
Angel of Dreams by Tristus reviews
To fly away into dreams...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/26/2003
Resentment by angelbratt1387 reviews
The only reason i rated it pg is cuz it has shit in it...basically like the title says, it explains the resentment i feel towards my parents...
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
Stolen Hours by midnights shadow reviews
A pool side memory of my love on a "sent home from work" fire drill day...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/17/2003
Inspire Me by crimson-darkness reviews
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Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/11/2003
The Purgatorial Sieve by The Jaguar reviews
My first poem. Death is only a few storkes...
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Horror/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/28/2003
This Angel by Angel Of The Storms reviews
Sad poem about an Angel who's... lost is all.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/23/2003
A girl called Lovely by Keeper of Seas reviews
beauty isn't everything
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/20/2003
I Only Ever Love People When They Hurt by sangriastrange reviews
"My neighbours have a crab apple tree, and as we walked beneath it's branches the wind blew, and purple-pink flowers fell on our hair and shoulders."
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/10/2003
music by obsidian katana reviews
haiku about the nature of music
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/6/2003
The Sun by Crucified Sanctity reviews
Corny name, Yes. Bad poem, I don't think so! Dedicated to The Nice Bits of The World
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/2/2003
A Passing Angel by Crucified Sanctity reviews
If you've ever been in love, you will understand Dedicated to and written For Satin Pheonix
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/28/2003
Wanting Something More by ForgottenTears85 reviews
Lydia Holland has always been in love with her best friend, Jordan. She's never told him how she feels, but at the beginning of her junior year, Jordan starts to treat her differently,and she wonders if they might BOTH want something more. *Complete*
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 60 - Words: 112,003 - Reviews: 820 - Favs: 188 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 2/28/2003 - Published: 5/18/2002
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A Frightening Place reviews
A horrific sort of fantasy town...I like the last line. I'm so proud of myself! *puffs out chest*
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Horror/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 7/14/2003
Amethyst reviews
Strictly speaking, this is actually a senryu. And not exactly that descriptive, but please R&R anyway, thankz!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/14/2003
Spider reviews
This is not exactly a haiku; it's a tanka, which is 5-7-5-7-7. Learned that from Songbreeze Swifteye!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7/12/2003
Piano Player reviews
A senryu describing what the piano player does...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/12/2003
Cloud reviews
A haiku on a cloud...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/12/2003
Foolish reviews
About a foolish girl who did naughty things...kinda sad...R&R!
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/7/2003
Goodbye reviews
This is rated PG just in case it's not suitable for young children. And if you do not like poems relating to suicidal topics, then I suggest you DON'T read this and then flame. You have been warned. To the other people, please read and review.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 7/7/2003
Blood reviews
Nope, this isn't a real haiku, but it's related to a haiku. It's a cut poem, which was introduced by Princess Mulan.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 7/7/2003
Chinook reviews
A haiku about the wind called a chinook...please R&R!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/7/2003
Lapis reviews
I'm sorry, Heart of the Sword. Here is the REAL 'Lapis'. If you don't know what lapis is, check the definition I gave at the end. 0 .~
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7/5/2003
Jade reviews
Jade is one of my favourite stones. This is a haiku on it.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7/5/2003
Song reviews
A haiku defining song...well, you could sort of say that. ^^
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7/4/2003
Heartbroken reviews
It's pure angst. Well, most of it. What I call a SAS poem-short and sad.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/4/2003
Death reviews
Acrostic poem on death, what do you expect? (hey, that sorta rhymed...) I don't know why I put it in the 'life' section when my poem means completely the opposite...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/3/2003
Welcome To The Club reviews
Kind of silly, and sorta weird, but please read and review, and for my sanity, DON'T FLAME, PEOPLE!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7/3/2003
Thank You reviews
Say thank you once in while, won't you? Not poison...read the A/N inside, I'll prove it to you...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/2/2003
Peaceful Summer reviews
Relax, poets of fp.com, a peaceful summer is here...hope this calms the spirit and frees the soul...or is it the other way around?
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6/30/2003
Morning Dew reviews
A haiku on morning dew. Must we have summaries for haiku and other types of poetry!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6/29/2003
Pain reviews
A haiku on pain.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/29/2003
Ghosts reviews
Ghosties...*imitates ghost* WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6/27/2003
Rain reviews
Summary: *whine* Do I have to? *points to title*
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6/27/2003
The Silver Dragon reviews
Whaddaya expect? It's a poem about a silver dragon, silly!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
Sun reviews
A little haiku about the sun. Haiku fever is hitting...I must try to write different forms of poetry...*walks around like zombie*
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/25/2003
Full Moon reviews
A haiku about the full moon, like I promised.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6/25/2003
Crescent Moon reviews
A poem about the crescent moon...another moon one comin' up...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6/25/2003
Night reviews
Describes what night is and does.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 6/23/2003
Fire reviews
Guess it's kinda dramatic. About fire. Again, it's the stupid title. *glares at title again*
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 6/22/2003
Hell reviews
Well...there's nothing much to say. The title says it all. *glares at title*
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6/22/2003
What A Wonderful World It Could Be reviews
No seriously, it COULD be a wonderfulz world. If we hadn't done all those bad things...(R&R)
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/17/2003
Find Truth reviews
just read.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/17/2003
Sea Of Rage reviews
Related to my poem 'Red'. Pls. R&R!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6/17/2003
My Dream reviews
Yes, related to my 'I Once Had a Dream' poem, but I think this one is just a TAD bit sadder. R&R!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6/16/2003
A Part of The Shadows reviews
I don't really know why the he*l I wrote this poem. But a lot of people are like this...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/16/2003
Don't Cry, Friend, Don't Cry reviews
Kinda sad. REVIEW(after you read, LOL)^-^
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/14/2003
You Have My Word, Good Friend reviews
The title explains the first line.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/13/2003
Dream Forever reviews
People say this is my best work so far. Please read it! R&R!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/12/2003
Red reviews
Red as in anger. R&R!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/12/2003
Tears From Them reviews
You can suggest another title if you like. I just randomly picked one. Haiku, don't think it's too good, but R&R anyway! : D
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6/11/2003
Angels, Please Make Things Better For Them reviews
Kind of sad. I believe in angels. R&R!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/11/2003
the angel that will not fly reviews
no capitals in this one. mentioned inside. please read, and no flames!=)
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/10/2003
Born To Kill reviews
PG, just in case. Were people really born to kill?...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/9/2003
I Once Had A Dream reviews
Sort of a fantasy. Kind of like Martin Luther King jr.'s speech thingy. KIND OF. R&R, pls.!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5/23/2003
What Shall Happen When War Strikes? reviews
The title inside is 'War', because I was too la-Z to change it. NOt VERY sad, but a lil. R&R pls.!
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/23/2003
Mirror reviews
Dunno why I put in PG, but you can guess by what the poem means by the title. R&R, pls.!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5/22/2003
Sometimes, Sometimes Not reviews
Has some parts of nature in it. The last four verses are not about nature. On with the fic! Read and Review,pplz!
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/20/2003
Why Is It? reviews
I mean drama as in 'dramatic'. And this poem basically is made up of questions. Read and Review, pls.!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 349 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5/20/2003
Some Cry, Some Don't reviews
'Some cry, some don't. You will, I won't...' Poem. not VERY, TEAR JERKING sad, but a little sad.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5/19/2003
Land of Dreams reviews
Aw, come on, please read it...I worked really hard on this fantasy!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 5/16/2003
I Can Pretend reviews
Love poem. Read. REVIEW!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/16/2003
I Can Spread My Wings and Fly reviews
The original title is 'I can Spread my wings and fly, dream a dream come true' but it wouldn't fit. Poem about setting goals.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 5/10/2003