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Joined 05-29-03, id: 357014
Author has written 4 stories for General, and Haiku.
...i never know what to write in these darn things -_-
uhh yeah i know i'm bad at writing but constructive criticism is good o_o
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Parting At Midnight by Namir Swiftpaw reviews
A sonnet. Written in some form of pentameter (I wouldn't say iambic...::cough:: I hate form.) This is an assignment for English class. I'd love some feedback on it...because it came out kinda nice. About lovers leaving in night time.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 4 - Published: 2/13/2003
Love Holds Time Still by Namir Swiftpaw reviews
Love holds the special time in my heart frozen, a soft but sweet memory.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 5 - Published: 10/8/2002
Dueling Views by Namir Swiftpaw reviews
I'm not sure if this qualifies as a poem, but I really don't know what else to call it. I hate not being able to get over someone you really loved. My alternate viewpoints expressed. The rating is for gratutious use of the "f-word". Please review.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/25/2002
Love Me Gently by Namir Swiftpaw reviews
I absolutely love this poem. One of my very best. Just how I would love to be loved...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/3/2002
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Bedtime reviews
ahh...another poem 'bout a little kid^___^ she's going to bed...(r&r appreciated) thought it turned out nice
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/23/2003
Winter Begins reviews
just something i jotted down...again, on a whim. i guess it displays use of some personification [ r&r if you please ]
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 4 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 5/31/2003
From Child to Parent reviews
hmm...came to me on a whim...i guess it shows the appreciation from a child to their parent. [ r&r if you please? ]
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/30/2003
The Crush Routine reviews
I think that almost every girl has gone through this
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/29/2003