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Joined 06-17-03, id: 360319
Author has written 183 stories for Life, Friendship, Love, General, Nature, General, and Spiritual.

.name: char
.age: fifteen
.gender: female
.location: nc

3.26.05 well i'm sort of winding down on the amount of stuff i write. i'm writing more for me now and i have a lot of stuff on my computer that i've stopped posting, mostly because i'm experimenting with my style of writing and a lot of them have the same feel and are about the same person. so basically, for every poem you see up here, there are roughly five or ten more that are sitting on my computer that i messed around with in ideas to get the final product. and even that isn't perfect, as i'm sure you can tell by reading. plus i figured it's pretty boring for you guys to read about the same person over and over again.

12.17.04 i just found some old poems i started and messed around with at the beginning of the summer, put my words to it now and i think they make very interesting mixes of emotions. it's funny how i can come back to something like that and the colors become more vivid from that time in my life. i'm still writing about the same old person all the time, i doubt that'll ever change. i'm trying to write about losing friendships but it's harder than i thought it would be, probably because the emotions so raw and untapped that it's too blount for me to use yet. i find that happening a lot these days. my emotions aren't as beautiful as they used to be. oh well, with one hundred fifty eight poems, i guess you guys have enough reading for a while, anyway. i've really been slowing down on poetry though. stupid school draining me of all my time and brain washing me to the point that i can tell you every supreme court case ever but i can't say something that will mean the world. funny how that works.

8.08.04 i think i have writer's block. darn. i have run out of things to write about. i guess that's the downside of having 132 poems. damnit. well, hopefully i new year at a new school with new people will give me plenty of...NEW things to write about. hmm. we'll see. but all the things i could write about right now, fresh from the beach, seem so petty and inane. there's nothing that hasn't been covered when writing about the waves pounding the shore, or the streching expanse of a sunlit sky. it seems pointless for me to try, yet it makes me sad that my most boring and predictable and least favorite work is that which gets the most reviews from you guys. oh well.

6.17.04/6.18.04 ONE YEAR!!! since i joined, and then since i first posted a poem. in that time i've gotten 106 things up here...which is sort of pitiful, i think. however, i didn't put all of my stuff up here so yeah i've definitely written more than just 106 things. enjoy what i have so far, and look foward to another year of lots of writing!!!

6.12.04 hit the 100 poems mark. i was gonna try and save it for the mark of one year since i got this thing, but i keep writing so much poetry that i know i'll have more by then.

6.08.04 i used to always write about stuff that happened to me, and a lot of the times the rhyme schemes i used were pretty confining. all the poetry on here was written within the past 3 years, but the vast majority of the poems from 6th grade aren't on here because, frankly, they sucked. every once in a while i had some good ones, and please forgive me for all the cheesy-rhyming-sappy stuff...what's a girl to do when she gets happy?! well anyway it's interesting to see me grow through this poetry. there are lots of different people this poetry about, and some of it is just about me, and some of it, as of late, has just been completely randomly insprired and i wrote it about something rather than someone (which is a rarity for me). so enjoy, with 95 and counting.

My ideas on all poetry: I think anyone can write great poetry. Everyone has strong emotions, and that's all poetry is. Poetry is expressing yourself and those emotions. No one can fully put their exact feeling into words, and the closer they get, the better a poem is. That's because the closer it is to what you're feeling, the closer it is to being beautiful, because all emotion is beautiful. So have faith in what you are writing and if you love what you are writing it will show through and you can all write beautiful poetry. Good luck!

Darkness falls swiftly by cael reviews
Hold on to life. You never know who's counting on you.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/4/2003
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You
[2.05.06] it's been a while. little cobwebs from the corners of my mind.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Published: 2/5/2006
Terrifying
[11.26.05] so i didn't realize i was terrified until i wrote this. but how cliche can being terrified by love be? i never knew i had it in me. he's amazing.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Published: 11/26/2005
One reviews
[9.27.05] WOW it's been a while. so this is the first poem about this person-and probably finally the end of poems about walker.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/1/2005
Trust reviews
[7.26.05] SO this one was cheap and easy, pretty much. four line stanzas, abcb rhyming scheme (except for the last-abab), and a pretty basic idea. but it really had to be written-so many people don't get it. about...yup. him, as always.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/26/2005
Space reviews
[7.26.05] i really guiltily like this one. the title comes from the repeat, of course, and also because being weightless, dizzy, & euphoric can come with just floating out in the atmosphere. it's about summer, and this feeling i have-this amazing vantage
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/26/2005
Clipped Replies reviews
[7.16.05] occasionally i'm finding myself guilty of this, too. in some ways, inspired by the poem "no time" by my-vision-even though the subject isn't really the same, it led me to this poem after i drew on what was really happening to me.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/17/2005
Right Back At You
[12.02.04] i just recently found this one forgotten in my microsoft word folders-who knows what it was written about, it doesn't strike any recognition in me. but hey-i felt this way at some point and it does have quite a bit of raw emotion.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Published: 7/17/2005
Speed of Love reviews
[7.13.05] sprung up from several ideas, but mostly from the sparkling energy of the feeling. and something about the way we milk our happiness from the relationship brought me to the analogy of transmission through wires, like a telegraph.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/13/2005
Senses Fail
[6.28.05 & 6.29.05] i wrote the poem today and the rant yesterday. yes, there is a rant in this. yes, the poem sucks. yes, the whole thing is a bit shocking. it just was overwhelming me and i was tired of it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 462 - Published: 6/28/2005
Stop All the World Now reviews
[12.20.04] i have no idea where this came from. i don't remember why i wrote it. i just found it yesterday, a coincidence that both of my recently updated titles have World in them. well i lied. BUT READING IT AGAIN, i feel the same way now.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/8/2005
Our World
[6.05.05 & 6.06.05] hmmm. i've been feeling this way a lot. it's like a little safety bubble i have where i forget about everything else. our words mean a lot to me. about the same thing as always, is my subject matter getting boring?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Published: 6/7/2005
Beach Presence
[5.27.05 & 5.28.05] wrote the first stanza and the "chorus" i guess on 5.27, the rest yesterday. so hmm if you don't know what this is about you fail at life. pretty much.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Published: 5/29/2005
Unplanned Sin reviews
[5.13.05] so it's been forever and a half since i last wrote. or a month, whatever. i'll probably start writing more: this is about several people, not so obvious as usual.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/13/2005
Electricity
[3.28.05 & 4.11.05] wrote first two stanzas and stopped, then came back and finished it. in my more preferred rhyme scheme, as well as my preferred subject-same person as always. i like this one, nothing's a stretch.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Published: 4/12/2005
I Love You More
[3.24.05 & 3.26.05] i wrote the first half, then stopped, then wrote the second half two days later. it's pretty self explanatory what it's about, even though the title and the "chorus", if you will, don't really capture the over riding feeling i've had a
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Published: 3/26/2005
Perfect Night for Nothing reviews
[2.25.05] i can't believe this is the first poem i've written about this...recently. about missing somebody and just knowing that if they were with me, i'd just be content to sit and do nothing with them and i'd be happier than ever. (guess who.)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/8/2005
Dreams
[2.20.05] i didn't mean to end the last two stanzas with the same word but that's where the title comes from. some weird format i whipped up from the top of my head, about him again. and another perfect instance.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Published: 2/20/2005
The Visit on the Floor
[2.20.05] i know the title's sort of weird, but that basically sums up the content. it probably doesn't say much to anyone else, but it says a lot to me. i wrote it in the same format at the one above, and right after it, too. about THE SAME PERSON AS ALW
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Published: 2/20/2005
Try Again
[2.11.04] about someone different than lately. (although i have written about him before.) whenever i think it's gone away, it comes back again...maybe we should try again?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Published: 2/12/2005
Brand New Thoughts, Same Old Day reviews
[1.28.05, 1.17.05] all from 1.28 except for the second to last stanza. you can tell, but i just stuck it in there cause otherwise i'd forget it. i feel the urge to write so strongly but nothing makes sense. always about him.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/1/2005
Snow White Love reviews
[1.19.04] no reference to the disney character, but rather the form of precipitation. i guess the weather got me thinking. you can read the first line and the last line together as one. about the same guy as always.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/20/2005
Tremble reviews
[1.07.05] i was gonna post this later, but i decided to tonight. maybe because i wrote it in about five seconds about something that was happening at that moment, or because brick's playing on the radio, or because i feel beautiful tonight. you know who i
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/7/2005
Aftertaste
[1.06.05] uhhm my poems are officially no longer SAD. they're more haunting i think, though. to me, it's harder to write about what's bothering me now than what i want. or, maybe that's just because my relationship with HIM has changed. for the better. mm
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 264 - Published: 1/6/2005
Fate
[1.01.05] WHOA. first poem of the new year, alright alright. anyway, this one sort of came from nowhere, and it's pretty weird i think. oh well, something about it just makes me happy because it says so much to me.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Published: 1/1/2005
Regrets reviews
[12.28.04] well, it's a bummy feeling and it's so hard to describe that it's very frank but hardly makes sense. as uneloquent as it is it still requires analization.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/28/2004
Sealed With A Kiss reviews
[7.31.04 and 12.17.04] do NOT let the title mislead you. from "would the sun still shine if our blood ran cold" on is tonight's stuff. you can definitely feel the mood shift, at least i think so. but it's interesting to have found this, considering i feel
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 241 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/17/2004
Metaphor
[7.04.04, 7.30.04, and 12.17.04] i'm not sure why this one was so scattered. the first two and last three lines of the first stanza was all i did tonight, the rest of the first and last stanza was 7.30 and the middle two were from 7.04. it's about the sam
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Published: 12/17/2004
Confining My Mind reviews
[12.09.04] this one to me seems so elementary and basic, but something about the chorus (yes it's in song format) says so much for me. i've written a hundred plus poems about this person, but i'll never get it just right.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 338 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/10/2004
Sunlight reviews
[12.09.04] this one is sort of-okay, REALLY-sparatic. it was inspired by an image of sunlight coming in through subway windows...long story. somehow for me it was about being alone when everyone else is together, although it's probably something else for
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/10/2004
Dreaming With Closed Eyes reviews
[12.07.04] i've been needing to write poetry with no followed format for a really long time now.i'll never be able to write enough poems about this situation, because no words can sum it up. although i think this one can be understood from afar.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 284 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/7/2004
Once in a While reviews
[12.03.04] i really do feel like this. it was so raw that i didn't post it for a while, and it says so little to those who've never been seperated like this.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/7/2004
Looking For You reviews
[11.24.04] hmmm i think it speaks for myself. very much in the style that i like writing in the most.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 224 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/26/2004
Love is a Disease reviews
[11.23.04] yeah i've been trying to write about this for a while. funny how much the feeling behind this subject of poetry has changed so much from when i first started writing about the relationship. we'll see.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 281 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/23/2004
Skeletons
[11.16.04] this one's not as direct as it could be. the verses are about me and the chorus is about everyone else and i tried to tie it together at the end. but it's how i feel these days.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Published: 11/16/2004
Unfitting Tribute reviews
[11.14.04] yeah the title says it all. i had to write something about this subject and i just couldn't capture the amazingness of it. so maybe the hidden perfect lines will for me instead.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/15/2004
Mid Afternoon Poetry reviews
[11.11.04] yeah this is me like itching to write but being so devoid of emotion this is what comes out...and i wrote it mid-afternoon. hence, the title!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/15/2004
Living Without You reviews
[10.27.04] wow i guess i got rid of writer's block. as cheesy and simple as this one is i just had to write it and get it out there. and yeah, you guys are write, they're more in song format these days.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 352 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/27/2004
Lessons In Not Letting Go reviews
[10.25.04] i guess the muse thing is coming back. really, i could give lessons for five bucks an hour =) it's a quite simple philosophy. this says things in many ways...and apply them to more than one person, remember. (but not too many)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 437 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/25/2004
It Matters To Me reviews
[started 10.15.04, worked on 10.16.04, finished 10.23.04] what that means is that i wrote like four lines one day, four the next, and then left it cause i'm still suffering from writer's block. but i finally conquered it today...and this is what's inside.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 513 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/23/2004
The Kiss reviews
[9.29.04] FINALLY! i conquered my writer's block, well at least long enough to write a poem. this one is...just a charlotte poem. song format, i guess. i really hope this means my muse is back...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 303 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/29/2004
Free Falling
[started 9.01.04, finished 9.12.04] i had the idea for the poem and wrote one and a half stanzas and then left off. this is how i feel all the time: life is going so fast, and it feels so good, i'm just so afraid to hit the ground.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 341 - Published: 9/12/2004
Seperation
[8.31.04] if you get it, great. if not, then just enjoy the words...but i'm not even sure what i'm trying to write about (feeling wise, situation wise i do know.)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 244 - Published: 8/31/2004
Rain II reviews
[8.31.04] yeah well this was just a really short brainstorm for the poem above. it's nice though, i suppose.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/31/2004
Sunset on Top of the City reviews
[8.23.04-started, 8.28.04-finished] yeah i sort of forgot about this one and then came back and finished it. it's short, for me.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/28/2004
Walking Away reviews
[8.22.04] another one that took me a while to publish. this is about both love and friendship relationships...and again i don't feel quite the same way. well i did for both and then i didn't for both and now i do for one. haha.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 318 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/28/2004
Temptress
[8.21.04] took me a week to publish this one! oops. anyway, the first block is from someone else's point of view, the last one is mine. i still feel like this, but in less of a negative way.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Published: 8/28/2004
So I Stumble reviews
[8.21.04] take your guess for what it's written about, it's too soon after the fact to actually say without hurting someone. i'm stumbling.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/21/2004
Don't Tell Me
[8.16.04] hmmm i guess this comes from people always trying to tell me who i am and how i'm gonna feel and what's wrong with my emotions. and at the end it's all swirled together with the good things in my life, too.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 247 - Published: 8/16/2004
One Way Mirror reviews
[8.14.04] inspired by the two people who compel me to write poetry the most.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 381 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/15/2004
Held Under reviews
[8.11.04] i haven't felt this bad in a long time. i just feel helpless. this is how i feel about school, and the first part is when i was being mean to my mom because i had such a bad day and...yeah. my muse is coming back, but poetry is not. however, you
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/11/2004
Colliding Dances reviews
[8.08.04] the title is simply the only thing i could think up to name it. the words are more of a muse form than poetry, but the format i wrote it in is more poetical. i am diving deep.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 317 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/8/2004
Freeze reviews
[7.30.04] pretty random. i needed to write about something that wasn't very personal, for once.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/31/2004
Waiting for the Moment reviews
[7.27.04] i like this one. it's...pretty straight forward. it doesn't capture the feeling quite right, for me it's not so urgent or direct, but it's still helping me out of writer's block.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 338 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/27/2004
Did I Ever Tell You I Love You?
[7.27.04] i just had to write this. it took like five minutes. it was complete reckless abandon, no format i just wrote what was inside me. cause i can't ever tell...him. well, maybe one day i will. but...well read it and find out.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 602 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/27/2004
Perfect Imperfection
[7.26.04] about the other one. this one is a very different style than the other one, just like the situation, person, and feeling. but it means nothing.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Published: 7/26/2004
Imperfect Perfection
[7.26.04] this one is a bit...shallow. sort of like the subject. it's not exactly good, but it captures they way i'll feel about the situation. but...i'll get over it i'm sure. like the last stanza suggests.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 281 - Published: 7/26/2004
Beautiful
[7.24.04] just because life is beautiful.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Published: 7/26/2004
Us
[7.24.04] i wrote this when i couldn't take yelling "i love you" at the computer screen anymore while talking to a certain somebody. it's about the infamous...person. you know, him.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Published: 7/26/2004
Lies
[7.22.04] wrote this one with an emotion that's hard to label or pin down. not about anyone i normally write poetry about, but it is specific. it connects to four people over all. but...no one will figure it out.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 298 - Published: 7/23/2004
The Story of Love reviews
[7.20.04] uhhhm...shins style. that'sbout all i can say. again, away from personal experiences.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 295 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2004
If Only reviews
[7.20.04] uhhm i like this style, sort of short and to the point. about everyone. not pinpointed toward a particular situation, either.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2004
Cool Skin on Hot Nights reviews
[7.18.04] about him again. i like this one a little bit better. it took me longer to write than normal. i hope the few perfect lines make up for uncharacteristic uncreative rhymes.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 244 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/18/2004
Waiting reviews
[7.18.04] about...him. it's not a very good poem, my favorite part is the beginning of the chorus like section. i think i'm developing writer's block again. it's a good aspect, i just needed to work harder on it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/18/2004
Check Yourself
[7.13.04] i love this one! WHOO SHEA this is the one about the person i told you about. it's semi about the person i've been writing about...ish. i like it. PG for one bad word. yes, ONE. heh.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Published: 7/13/2004
What We Need
[7.13.04] eh, this one was written in a song format but i dunno if i like it that much. i'm gravitating towards one particular person at this time, if you didn't notice.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 369 - Published: 7/13/2004
Love II
[7.08.04] uhhm another good idea that was poorly executed, but heck. this one was more off of life experiences and the way i was getting caught up with myself last week. enjoy.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Published: 7/13/2004
Risk
[7.08.04] uhhhm. i don't know...? well i do, it's cause of a book i read. but, it sorta sucks. i just thought i'd put it up here anyway. it was a good idea at least, but i don't like the way it was executed.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 280 - Published: 7/13/2004
Ride the Train of Life
[7.07.04] apart from the title, i like this poem. it's not too wallowing or specific, it just sort of breezes by how i'm feeling with a few references. something about it picks me up and carries me along.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Published: 7/7/2004
Empty Promises reviews
[7.05.04] uhhm...same person as the past few. i don't know why...i'm writing so much about this...don't know if i believe in it or not...or if it's just in my head, like the poem says...well just read it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/5/2004
Layers reviews
[7.03.04] uhhm...sort of uncertain exactly what this is about. it was inspired by last night, but has nothing to do with it. it has more to do with stuff i thought about a couple of days ago...still that person. augh!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/3/2004
Always There
[7.01.04] same as below for who it's about. there's some particular references that i like...even though it's not that great of a poem at all, it's just this feeling in me and i had to get it out somehow.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Published: 7/3/2004
The Last Thing On My Mind
[7.01.04] mmm not much to say on this one, really. it's about...someone who most of my early poetry was about. it's talking about me thinking of the options i have...and how i can't believe some of my options are still open.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Published: 7/3/2004
Me in 199 Words reviews
[6.25.04] totally and completely random...enjoy! (obviously...199 words isn't enough...but it was worth a try)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/25/2004
Stay
[6.25.04] hmm again with the lyrical format. writer's block still? i dunno we'll see. this one is about four people...see if you can figure it out.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 421 - Published: 6/25/2004
Realizations reviews
[6.24.04] a different writing style for me. very interesting, mostly. real, raw emotion, mostly. truth, mostly. it was sort of hard to write about, though, and say the actual words...so not many people will know what i'm talking bout.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/25/2004
Do You Think of Me
[6.24.04] hmm and so beings my writer's block. oh well. this is really how i'm feeling right now, but there's not enough experience to make a good poem about this person. sorry.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 312 - Published: 6/25/2004
The Waves Washed Away All Pain
[6.22.04] i'm tryin to figure out what kind of poetry to write about this particular event. i feel sort of guilty, going from something like "don't you remember" to this, but i'll live.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Published: 6/22/2004
Answers
[6.17.04] just wrote this randomly. it's a different style of writing for me. comment away because i'm trying new things (i.e. the narrative poem and the song-like poem before this). don't read this through tears//don't read this after laughter//just read
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Published: 6/17/2004
Never Be the Same
[6.15.04] this isn't written from my POV...i bet you could guess who it's supposed to be if you know me. i am the "you" in the poem. i love this one...wrote it pretty quickly, too. if only i could come up with a tune...PG for one bad word.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 293 - Published: 6/15/2004
Remember When reviews
[6.14.04] you have to hold on to the memories somehow..."what didn't you like about//leading me around with my eyes closed trusting you//you could have asked me to fly//and i could have, just for you" remember?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 370 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/15/2004
Up All Night reviews
[6.13.04-6.14.04] i was halfway through writing this last night when my mom came in and made me turn off the computer =(. so yeah i finished it this morning. again...my poetry is getting shorter. and i'm playing around with rhyme schemes.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/14/2004
Big Complicated Lives
[6.13.04-6.14.04] i wrote the first stanza yesterday morning but to me it didn't seem like enough, so i wrote the second one today. i still like the first one better, though. maybe i should just stick with that one...?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Published: 6/14/2004
Spinning
[6.12.04] i wrote this after i said the first line to myself, and then i just wrote this poem. i'm writing stuff that's beginning to get shorter these days
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Published: 6/14/2004
Silence reviews
[6.12.04] 100th POEM! goodness. i wrote this after the 1st stanza just came to my mind. i tend to that A LOT these days. this one is supposed to be happy...and definitely from a different POV than normal.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/12/2004
Understand Me
[6.11.04] strange mix. if you get what i'm saying...yayness and pie! it's a different style of writing for me somehow. maybe more direct & frank than usual? less eloquent? even though there are some metaphors...we'll see.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Published: 6/12/2004
Forgetting to Remember reviews
[6.11.04] i just woke up and wrote this. the first stanza came to my mind so i finished it off with a poem.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/11/2004
Temptations reviews
[6.09.04] this is sorta how i'm feeling right now, but it's kind of a good thing.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/9/2004
Thunderstorm
[6.08.04] with all these thunderstorms, it's a wonder anyone can resist trying to capture their essence with words. i did my best =)
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 750 - Published: 6/9/2004
Labyrinth reviews
[6.07.04] i wrote this late at night. dunno why i didn't post it when i wrote it. make sense of it if you can.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 307 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/9/2004
The House
[6.07.04] hrrm i seem to be writing about random things today. i was reading a book and it was talking about this old house and even though it didn't say much i was compelled to dash upstairs and write this. forgive me if you don't like it...but i just im
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Published: 6/7/2004
Two Ships reviews
[6.07.04] obviously supposed to be a song, inspired by a great shins one, you may have seen the lyrics on my away message. i'm hoping this one will show up with stanzas...and i wish i could come up with a tune beautiful enough to capture the depth of emot
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 398 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/7/2004
Summer Storm reviews
[6.07.04] completely randomly inspired. i seem to be writing more about nature lately...this one makes me happy.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/7/2004
The Moon reviews
[6.03.04] inspired by the full moon last night. it's supposed to be sad...even though i didn't say it in the poem...i wanted to be with someone while i watched it travel across the sky.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/3/2004
Sleep
[6.03.04] i woke up and wrote this. at first it was going to be about my continuous analogy of dreams vs. nightmares, but then suddenly i found myself writing about hope. i hope (har har) that's a good sign...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 321 - Published: 6/3/2004
Fireflies reviews
[6.01.04] very inspired. even though i didn't really say directly the things i was feeling (like i tried to in "broken), i somehow managed to capture it much better in this one. makes me want to cry.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/1/2004
Broken reviews
[5.31.04] these are no where near enough words to say what i was trying to say, but i decided to give it a try anyway. i wrote a prose about it, too, but i highly doubt i'll post that. not for a long long while, at least.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 311 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/1/2004
A Piece of Life reviews
[5.27.04] this is for the ending of the best piece of my life yet. written on the night before the last day of school. (that would be the one last flick of the wrist needed...to cut it all away). god this is hard.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/27/2004
The End
[5.25.04] i love this one. read it. just read it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 518 - Published: 5/25/2004
Fleeting
[5.25.04] i named this one fleeting because this was a very quick fast poem and it had a grasping quality to it, as if i were reaching for something swiftly passing me by...so it's fleeting. just like these last days of school.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Published: 5/25/2004
Canyon
[5.18.04] funny how the day after i write it in poetry is when i can find the words to say it typcially. this is about how being so happy...makes you so you're always afraid of falling. and life in general is like this, always.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Published: 5/19/2004
Sometimes
[5.19.04] hmm. all my poetry sounds sad and depressing even when it's meant in the most happy way. oh well, i guess that's just how i write best. (this is obviously in a song format)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 339 - Published: 5/19/2004
You're the Cure
[5.17.04] yes, it's official-i'm getting writer's block again. if you've ever heard the song pictures of you-the cure, this poem is based a LOT off the structure of that, even when at the end it has no form the word play is similar. i don't know why i'm f
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 468 - Published: 5/17/2004
Just Breathe
[5.14.04] urgh. i think i'm starting to get writer's block again. >
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Published: 5/17/2004
Rain reviews
[5.11.04] the title sounds depressing but it's really not! how i feel right now...sort of literal...rain would be a GOOD thing right now...what with how awfully hot it is and sick i am...and plus it just fits for him. for us.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/11/2004
The Theory of Everything reviews
[5.09.04] ahh...this is barely barely BARELY touching the surface on everything i want to say about this subject to recall our conversation (chris & me) so yeah i just had to write something about it, even if it gives absolutely no justice.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/9/2004
Nothing
[5.08.04] this is what happens when you're depressed and you don't know why. and you read ender's game. and everything falls apart. and it's all ending. and you can't feel the way you want to feel anymore, no matter how much your heart tells you how you s
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 329 - Published: 5/8/2004
Perfect
[5.04.04] you should all know this is a major over exageration of anything i'd ever do. it's PG for some mature themes. but maybe this will make you think about the stupid things you say to me. the way i am is just WHO i am, and nothing you can say can ch
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,145 - Published: 5/4/2004
Words
[5.04.04] this is how i felt. because i really wanted to write a poem but everything had already been said...and it's all the fault of these words that confine us! i just wish that people could read right into my heart rather than just what i say, which c
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Published: 5/4/2004
The Long and Winding Road reviews
[5.03.04] yeah, about the end of the year...trying to crank out personal poems.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/3/2004
Sorry
[4.30.04] pretty self explanitory.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 332 - Published: 4/30/2004
Guilt
[4.28.04] it's still not going away like i want it too...=(
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 279 - Published: 4/30/2004
Pieces of My Heart
[4.28.04] a lot shorter than my normal poetry...but it's pretty concise.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Published: 4/30/2004
In Love With You
[4.25.04] i guess it took me a while to post this one. hmm.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Published: 4/30/2004
Unity
[4.28.04] does it need an explination?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Published: 4/30/2004
Hatred
[4.15.04] uhm yeah again i definitely don't feel like this anymore. i think that's why they weren't posted yet, i just left off in the middle of them because they didn't apply anymore. oh well, enjoy!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Published: 4/27/2004
Fake reviews
[4.27.04] this is like the side of me speaking that's NOT how i feel, it's only how i COULD feel if i let it get to me. PLUS something happened so that i definitely don't feel like...certain...parts...yeeeah.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/27/2004
For Everyone
[4.24.04] uhh i dunno. there's an interesting change in the poem though i realized...at first it was happy then sad, and then it was sad then happy (as far as the lines go). ISN'T THAT INTERESTING? haha
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 334 - Published: 4/25/2004
Dedication reviews
[4.21.04] awwww. it's supposed to be happy but it doesn't sound like it. oh well!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/22/2004
Didn't Say it Enough
[4.21.04] this is most definitely dedicated both specifically and in general to a ton of people: sally specifically! and also scott, weiruoh, mac...those are the most specific. and of course there's a teeny point that's for others
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 342 - Published: 4/21/2004
Night reviews
[4.10.04] (well, technically 4.11.04 cause it was written past midnight...) yeah see this is how it is on break for me...i stay up so late...and i know it's not the greatest i just had to do a tribute...it's not supposed to be depressing! sorry if it is..
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/10/2004
No One Left reviews
[2.03.04] now that i think about this at the time i was over reacting a bit. it's definitely very specific though.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/8/2004
Lost
[12.23.04] again, another pretty depressing one. and again, i don't know why i didn't put it up sooner. but these are all better poems than i'm writing right now (because i'm happy now) so yeah might as well show them!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 476 - Published: 4/8/2004
Reflections PoemHappiness
[9.16.03] obviously, i am NOT good at writing poetry about how happy i am...because they all are EXCEEDINLY cheesy and crap. oh well...this one was for reflections this year. i was lazy and didn't try, tsk tsk.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Published: 4/8/2004
Saying Goodbye
[1.03.04] i was inspired to write this one by the civil war, i think. again, i am entirely unsure as to why i didn't put this up here sooner. this one is sooo sad...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 244 - Published: 4/8/2004
This Point of Happiness reviews
[2.21.04] sorry i find this one EXTREMELY cheesy but i don't like not putting my work up here so i will anyway. yeah this one is definitely very...structured and simple, which is uncommon for me.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 247 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/8/2004
Am I Deserving? reviews
[12.16.04] again, i have no idea why i didn't put this one up here. it's actually pretty good, if very depressing...and i can't remember what it was about AT ALL. i mean even though i felt like this on and off...i can't remember specifics.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 411 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/8/2004
Revealed reviews
[3.29.04] this one is sortof difficult to understand, perhaps. i'm not sure why i didn't put it up on here yet, maybe i wasn't finished or something.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/8/2004
What is in a Moment
[12.17.03] wow i just found this one randomly...i was opening another document and didn't recognize the title of this one...sooo yeah here it is. i like it, it's pretty direct.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Published: 4/8/2004
Happiness
[4.07.04] yeah...hmm just wrote this tonight. it took me a while (like maybe 15 minutes) because i have trouble writing about feeling happy. but i think this captured it pretty accurately...yeah.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Published: 4/7/2004
Imaginary Doubt
[3.31.04] ahhhh! if you read my blog this would be about the secret! ok so i know it's pretty basic & elementary & cheesy...but i had to say SOMETHING, eh?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Published: 3/31/2004
I Weep For My Generation: Confessional
[3.29.04] the beginning, if you're smart, you'll recognize from Decisions. i know i know, i cheated =p. but i added repetition and took off the end and added i think 4 new stanzas or more...ignore the crap that's NOT the poem...it was a school assignment
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 330 - Published: 3/29/2004
Strong
[3.24.04] this one isn't as good as some stuff but i was trying to put what i wanted into words...i think it's a bit too structured for me though. oh well!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 328 - Published: 3/25/2004
Decisions
[3.22.04] just wrote this tonight in like...5 or 10 minutes it's sort of how i see everyone around me these days...it's pretty sad the low standards they hold for things and the words they say and don't mean. i don't think anyone knows what i'm getting at
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 380 - Published: 3/22/2004
Flowers
[3.07.04] this one isn't as good as the other two i'm putting up right now, but still...it was after the play...haha
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Published: 3/17/2004
Simply All Over Again
[3.15.04] whoo hoo go me more real life experiences! this is awesome...my life is returning! haha...this is about the person that most of the entries on here are about, which is interesting, cause most of them are sorta mad...but anyway...that's another s
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Published: 3/17/2004
Black and White
[3.17.04] this is about a new friendship...i'm back onto using real life experiences! isn't it great...=D
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Published: 3/17/2004
People
[1.07.04] this one actually sounds really depressed, but it's NOOOOT. i think i whined too much about bad people in the beginning. oh well! dedicated to those wonderful people in my life...
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 466 - Published: 2/18/2004
You Love as Much as Me
[1.10.04] awww. this one's sad...and it's DEFINITELY written about a real life experiene. fyi this was BEFORE the whole writer's block thing. so enjoy! it makes me sooo sad reading it though, cause it brings back the truth that rings in my ear behind ever
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 469 - Published: 2/18/2004
A Life in Love reviews
[2.10.04] this might be the worst of all, considering it was right at the hit of writer's block. =(
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/18/2004
Him
[2.03.04] ehhh...>< bashes head one day i will recover! until then, there's this substitute for poetry.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 371 - Published: 2/18/2004
I Love You reviews
[2.12.04] still suffering from writer's block. enough said.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 293 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/18/2004
Love
[2.14.04] i've been suffering from severe writer's block lately, so bear with me here! quite a few of these poems will be tryin to get around it...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Published: 2/18/2004
Life Without Love
eh...wrote this in about 5 minutes tonight. exactly how i'm feeling. hence the last line. empathize here, people.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Published: 10/7/2003
Mistakes
[edited] it's amazing the way i can get a perfect snapshot of my soul just by writing poetry and then i can look back and read it for the first time and say wow i remember feeling like that.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 640 - Published: 9/21/2003
To Think Now reviews
wow i can't even remember when this was written or what it was about or anything. i mean there are a couple of things it could have had to do with over the summer, but it's under neither of those dates. maybe i just woke up in the middle of the night and
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/13/2003
Thank You reviews
oooh iwas feeling SO rebellious against certain people...hahaha. but it's true, i mean in certain situations when people cancel stuff on me (i'm way over it now but this was written in july) it's the best way to think about it. as i always say, if i'm ang
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 317 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/13/2003
Strength reviews
very very emotional...along the lines of "i'm a survivor...at least...i'm gonna be one after i finish sniveling and sobbing my sorry heart out" hehe uhhmm yeah it was sortof a breakthrough for me as a way for me to think about some bad stuff
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 296 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/13/2003
Somehow
late July! haha i guess you can really see a pattern in the late July ones...a lot of them have the same line or the same variation of a line. pretty easy to pick out how i was feeling and who it's about, eh? (well, if you KNOW me that is)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Published: 9/13/2003
Not Knowing reviews
I wrote this one today! uhhm...it's not supposed to be as sad as it sounds. it's more about 2 people sorta settling for this unspoken thing they know is true but they pretend it isn't and they don't always quite see exaclty eye to eye, ok i'm pretty sure
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/13/2003
My Hero
this one was written pretty recently, and i was just thinking about how i know so many wonderful people and how great friends i have and how we all help each other, etc. etc. etc...haha
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Published: 9/13/2003
I Thought reviews
this is a very interesting format for a poem, i sorta made it up...heh heh. again, it's one of those late July ones (need i even tell you guys who/what it's about)
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/13/2003
I Love the Way
a lot of these are from late July (July 25-around there) and they're just your blatent love poem. again, i don't really feel like this anymore, but i forgot to publish a TON of these...i just uploaded 10 poems that i'd totally forgotten i'd even WRITTEN
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 317 - Published: 9/13/2003
How Do You Cope
a lot of these were written back over the summer...this one's sorta mad and i totally forget what it's about...well, sortof. i think it was actually written on august 11...*ponders* ok no wait it was the 13th...only a month ago, but so what. it's angry an
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Published: 9/13/2003
Shakespearean Sonnet II: Winter II reviews
now THIS is the REAL Shakespearean format. 14 lines pentameter etc. the one i turned in. i don't like it as much as my first though.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/24/2003
Shakespearean Sonnet I: Winter I reviews
this is the first sonnet i wrote...but i had 14 syllables per line instead of just 10. silly me. i didn't turn this one in (obviously)
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/24/2003
Bio Poem reviews
we had to do this for our Social Studies teacher...and I just felt like putting it up. Enjoy.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/14/2003
The Locked Door reviews
i adore this poem...it is entirely the go-round circle that my life is. i want you guys to all think seriously about the last 2 lines, though. i mean...if you have a situation like this. it's so general that really anyone could. just about someone trying
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 386 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/14/2003
What Do You Do reviews
sums up exactly how i'm feeling right now. (written 7/8/03) there's one cuss word, so watch out...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 346 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/8/2003
The Summer of Change reviews
my only real story i've started...it looks like it's gonna be REALLY long so bear with me here! and give me tons of feedback!
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,133 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/26/2003
Trying To Put It Into Words reviews
i really just don't know...this is my most recent work...I was just overwhelmed by feeling and this is probably my worst poem but I just had to write something...I think I'm gonna go write a couple more off of ideas on this one...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
Living Unaware reviews
i think at one point in life we all live unaware
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
Everything's Gone Wrong reviews
is it just me, or is the majority of things i write depressing! hmm, maybe it's just that i write better poetry that's sad because i feel more emotion when i'm sad...we could ponder that one. but it's true, once one thing goes wrong, so does everything el
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
I Am reviews
written for Language Arts class, but I like it enough to put it up here. it's your basic "this is me" poem
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/18/2003
Hiding reviews
this is a majorly edited poem, it's really a lot longer. i don't feel like this AT ALL anymore, this was written January '02.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
Fighting Someone Else
another old poem. i'm not really sure where this came from, cause i don't remember ever feeling like this...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Published: 6/18/2003
Destroyed reviews
this was also written nearly 19 months ago, over a year. there are 2 parts, but they were not originally written to go together. tell me if you think they should stay together or if they do not portray the same feeling. i just felt they were both written
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
Nature reviews
this was written over a year ago, and really i just let the words flow...nothing constructed or organized or anything...the second part, Nature II, was not originally supposed to go with the first half. It just fit together, they both had the same essence
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 585 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
They Lash Out Against Me reviews
this is real life again-people like this do exist out there...beware (PG because some explicit language)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 361 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
Holding On reviews
how everything changes with time and the test of time to see if you can hold on to it all
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
You Think Life's a Fight reviews
for all those mean people out there who compete for nothing...this is about you (PG for explicit language)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
The Nightmare of My Life
probably the most disturbing poem on here...but trust me, i think we all feel like this sometimes...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 680 - Published: 6/18/2003
Strange
isn't it weird how people switch places and they change each other? yeah, well read on...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Published: 6/18/2003
Pride reviews
a poem about how people can be stubborn to hold up their pride, but you can still get through to them...notice, all my poetry is from REAL LIFE EXPERIENCES hmm maybe that gets a bit old...(PG for explicit language)
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
New Love
the title says it all...what can i say, that's how it feels!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Published: 6/18/2003
It Wasn't Just the Onions
very morbid & depressing, but a real life story...you know how onions are supposed to make you cry? ask if you want details (PG for some explicit language)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Published: 6/18/2003
Hate
for all those out there who hate...it's more in a "rapping" style/freestyle but it got across what i wanted it to say...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Published: 6/18/2003
Goodbye
when you regret hurting someone
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Published: 6/18/2003
Falling
about last minute doubts w/ overlapping ideas
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Published: 6/18/2003
Deserted reviews
about losing friends, and how the timing never seems to be right
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
Dead End Love reviews
about giving up when people least expect it...true life story...one of my person favorites
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/18/2003
Crying reviews
[6.02.03] a poem about missing someone...which i am sure we all have done
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2003
An Ode to Friends
friends...what would we do without them?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Published: 6/18/2003
A Simple Wish
my last call for help...yes it was directed at someone (PG for some explicit language)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 645 - Published: 6/18/2003