Tormented Romantic
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Joined 06-25-03, id: 361632
Author has written 63 stories for Family, Love, Life, General, Friendship, and Nature.
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Hey guys, High School Hell has once again started for another monotonous year so I doubt I'll be getting too much posting done until my first break or so, but bear w/ me I'll post the second I get a chance to write. thanks. ^-^
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Name: if you really want to know...ask.
Age: 14
Sex: Female
Location: Hell on Earth (aka Arizona)

lil bit of info. about my life:
I lost my dad three, going on four, years ago, I've seen my mom go through two divorces, I'm currently very love struck, as the majority of my poems reflect, and am going crazy because the guy I like is like my best friend. I just write because I love being able to vent on paper instead of to actual people, because people make me feel even worse. I, as most of us do, LOVE reviews, they just make my whole day, especially good reviews. If you do review my stuff I make a concious effort to read through most if not all of your work and review what I like. Hm...I do believe that's about my life in a short summary. If you want to know more about me feel free to drop me an email or an Instant message.

a little background on my work:
I really only write about three things (max [my current obession, my dad [whom I lost a few years ago, my crazy fu*ed up life [enough said]) and once in awhile I'll throw in a piece about the few wonderful friends I have just for some variety. unlike my wonderful friend brittany (exceedingly eccentric) I am a "deprived, soul-searching, love-lost, everything-is-the-colour-black" (Minus the 'u' in color because I don't pretend to be british, lol.)sort of person. And all of my work reflects it. Although I tend to stay away from the darker aspects of life like suicide and cutting because they are just too hard for meto write about right now, although if you look hard enough you'll find the inuendos all over the place.

I'd like to especially thank the following people for either adding me to their favorite(s) list(s) or for numerous reviews, you guys and gals are wonderful and constantly keep me encouraged enough to keep writing:
Damaged, insert name here, exceedingly eccentric, escapist, SilentlyScreamingForHelp, XOXOChibiChibiSM, Tresparadise, Sarah Parker, Young'n'HopelessKid, Chikemuri, Cindy Moon, Writerofascientist, Kitty Ryan, Princess Claire, The-Black-Kitty

I got my first flame today, something to be proud of, I was gettin kind of sick of the same old type of reviews. Thank you very much Cosmo-The-Bard. lol.

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Monsters Under the Bed by Haven of the Shadows reviews
They thought she was too old, but really she was so young, they saw the monsters that they had become.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 346 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Published: 12/5/2003
And I Will Carve by Dancing in the Ashes reviews
This has got to be one of my deepest ones, R/R please
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/21/2003
The Most Popular Girl In School by echoes of chaos reviews
People will definitely remember...
Poetry: School - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 351 - Reviews: 115 - Favs: 58 - Published: 10/5/2003
Familiar Tears by Sarah Parker reviews
yay.. I was afraid I was stuck in strictly assignment-writing-mode.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/23/2003
Waiting by SweetGrape reviews
For someone to stop me
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/28/2003
Die of a Broken Heart by Sarah Parker reviews
Wrote this a couple weeks ago, but it needed fixing up, so here you go.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/10/2003
Desolate Slumber by n-nirvana reviews
I was feeling kinda dark and depressed when i wrote this so tts how it is... darkish, depressing... one of my better pieces.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/3/2003
No More by soulspring reviews
Basically, this poem is trying to convey emotions of being in a friendship where you're called a friend but not treated like one.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/30/2003
True Pain by XOXOChibiChibiSM reviews
Rated for language. It's about My life. There ya go. Review if you want to.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 356 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/30/2003
Me by Sarah Parker reviews
Meet me. Oh yeah, I also like my friends.. the line didn't fit with this piece, but I do love you guys!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 257 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/29/2003
Find Me by insert name here reviews
this is a poem about being not knowing anything and wondering what happened to life n stuff, r/r
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/29/2003
Who Am I? by No1 Cares reviews
Not knowing who you are but knowing who you are no longer
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/28/2003
The Darkness by Kelly Grint reviews
Uh, yeah, depression...huh.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/28/2003
Care For You by Phercraban reviews
Is this a song or a poem? I'm definetly not sure, so please read and review with your opinion. Thank you!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/23/2003
Anatomy of a Breakdown by shiniwa reviews
A fictionalized account of the flood of emotions and events after my girlfriend broke up with me. Please read and review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 292 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/22/2003
Silent Saviour by Heather Montgomery reviews
You seemed to know/Just what to say/ When I told you/I couldn't take another day...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 4 - Published: 1/22/2003
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Take Another HitWatch Me Die reviews
My best friend of 6 years aren't friends right now because I finally stopped biting my tounge and confronted him about how hard it was to watch him get in his car high every weekend...this is the product of that, tell me watcha think...it's been a while s
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 366 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/13/2004
An Ode to Gretchen reviews
Regret is all that I'm left with now that the opportunity to pour my heart out has passed me by with little more than a passing glace. Kind of morbid, very heart felt, worth an R&R.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/31/2004
Nostalgic reviews
It's amazing how one person can devastate hundreds simply by moving away..."No, you weren't God, but you were/the closest thing some of us had" Just sort of a representation of how one person can touch so many lives and how now all we can do is reminisce.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 244 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/25/2004
My Daily Battle reviews
What do you do when your heart is telling you that he's right for you and your head is screaming not to dive in head first? This is the battle with which I'm faced on a daily basis...please take a minute to drop me a review, I'll make sure to check your w
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1/2/2004
My Path reviews
Just because I don't walk your path/doesn't mean that I'm lost...kind of a weird metaphor for life and I was experimenting w/ new line breaks...tell me whatcha think and drop an R&R for me...rating for some strong language.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12/22/2003
Gracious reviews
What do you do when the one person you love most walks out of your life without even thinking twice and all you yearn for it to have them back? Would you even take them back? The title is meant to be extremely sarcastic, please R&R if you get a chance.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/20/2003
Upon Your Mantel reviews
All the other girls rest brilliantly upon his mantel, all high and mighty and I sit painfully within his closet...I dunno sort of a weird analogy but I'm testing it out...R&R pretty pretty please, I need some feedback.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/3/2003
Crimson Defeat reviews
She attempts to reach and unresposive world, locked away in a sound proof room she waits for someone to find her. I'm experimenting w/ new line breaks and stuff, tell me whatcha think...R&R thanks much!
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/10/2003
NumB reviews
I've finally reached a point where I just have to say goodbye to him, the pain is just too much. I've been in a really morbid mood lately so plan on seeing a lot of stuff w/in the next few days...R&R pretty please.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/10/2003
Fire reviews
I know..boring title, but this it's not a boring piece at all. It's a poem I wrote for my creative writing class about the mass fires taking place in Cali. right now. R&R if you get a chance, I'd love feedback.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/28/2003
Just Smile reviews
Last night was homecoming...I got something that I've yearned for for FOUR years, a slow dance w/ the guy all my love poetry is about. It was the most amazing thing ever and this is the product of that emotion. It's very lighthearted and definetely not my
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 300 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10/12/2003
Standing Before Me reviews
He didn't know I was watching...but I was and it's actually what got me cutting again, as crazy as that must sound. I wrote this a few months ago though, never got around to posting it, so it doesn't really apply anymore. R&R please!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10/8/2003
The Last Tear reviews
Why cry when you can laugh your worries away? I only cried one tear for him, never again will I cry in the name of love. Pretty proud of this one, give it an R&R if you're feelin generous and not looking for angst.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 290 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10/8/2003
A Token of Nothing reviews
Sometimes the laughter is just too loud, and the silence all too deafening...a very morbid poem about suicide. Please R&R, I'd really like some input.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10/8/2003
He Never Knew reviews
One of my best friends moved away a few months ago and I've been having a really hard time coping because there's so much I should've said to him when I had the chance, now it's too late and my hapiness is once again lost. I'm really proud of it, R&R plea
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 332 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/24/2003
So I Can Believe reviews
Do you ever want to control just one aspect of your life? One without any outside influence, lately I feel like I can't believe or act like I want to and its suffocating, this is my plea for freedom. R&R pretty pretty please.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/23/2003
My Only Hope reviews
I seem to be just hitting brick wall after brick wall when it comes to love lately. yet, there's still that haunting tinge of hope that lingers in every thought I think. This is much different that my prior work, tell me what you think.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/23/2003
Too Much to Ask reviews
I never realized that some things really are too much to ask for and far beyond mine or anyone else's control. I've been very fed up with relying on people lately only to end up hurt, I'm only second best to all the prissy-perfect girls out there. R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/23/2003
Picture Perfect reviews
A fairly decent object poem I'm having to write for my creative writing class, it's due friday (9/12) and I'd REALLY like some feedback before then if at all possible, thanks.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9/9/2003
And I Will Cry reviews
How can I be so genuinely happy now and still cry myself to sleep every single night? It just doesn't seem right. It's a bit lengthy but definetely something worth a read and maybe some constructive critisism beacuse I know it could definetely use a bit o
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 659 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/3/2003
The Past Within the Present reviews
Sometimes you miss someone so much and yearn for them to a point where you start seeing them in other people around you, to a point where you can no longer seperate reality from a fantasy, and it's scary. This is a work in progress so please leave constru
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/19/2003
My One Weakness reviews
I can be strong or I can be ever so weak, which would make him happier? Just something I was thinking about late one night, when I realized "who am I being strong for" No one appreciated my strength and it only causes me pain, so why bother? R&R please!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 330 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/19/2003
Your Little PingPong Ball reviews
Do you ever feel like people completely disregard the fact that you are a human and not an object to be played with? Well this conveys that emotion as well as a few others, please take a few minutes to read and review, I'd love the feedback.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8/9/2003
Someone elses Shoes reviews
This is a very different poem about walking is everyone's shoes but your own and realizing yours aren't as bad as you thought they were after all. Please review, I'm not finished w/ this and would love the feedback.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 455 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/4/2003
Goodbye by any Other Name reviews
This poem just discusses how no matter how you say it, goobye is always going to be hard and painful. I'm pretty proud of this one so please take a few moments to read and review it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/3/2003
Colder than Stone reviews
yes...I'm a hopeless romantic...I can't help it...n e ways, sometimes it hurts to watch someone just pass you by when on any other day they'd at least say hello. Reviews are greatly appreciated.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 338 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/29/2003
Drifting reviews
Sometimes all you can do is watch as someone forgets about you, it's painful but sometimes it's the only options. The structure is a a little bit less organized than my norm. but I'm VERY proud of this one. Pretty please take a few minutes to read and rev
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 320 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/28/2003
Walking Away reviews
This isn't very well done structurally but it's packed with emotion so it's definetely worth a read. I used running through an airport, due to being late for a flight, as a metaphor for my relationship with my mom. R&R please.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 449 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/28/2003
The Darkness reviews
Sometimes the things we fear most can only be seen in complete darkness. Most of us avoid our darkest fears instead of confronting them and I'm no different. Reviews are always appreciated, I'd love the feedback.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 377 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/12/2003
Childish reviews
this isn't my best work, it's a lot less figurative then my norm. but it conveys the feeling of standing infront of someone you love and feeling like a child again before you learned how to talk. Worth a read, reviews are always greatly appreciated.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 581 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7/12/2003
My Little Angel reviews
This is about my baby (8 yrs.) sister and how I see so much of the hell I've been through starting to happen to her and how I wish there was something I could do. If you know me you know how much I despise my sister so this may be weird to read for you.Wo
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 391 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/11/2003
Carrying Your Hope reviews
This is sort of a sequel to "Carry My Hope" only from the other persons point of view, I thought it'd be fun to think from someone else's shoes, R/Rs would be greatly appreciated.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 313 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/8/2003
Carry My Hope reviews
Sometimes hope just becomes painful and overwhelming and you yearn for someone to just get rid of it for you. Kinda of odd way of thinking, R/R please.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 257 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/8/2003
Damaged reviews
It's rough watching the one you love, also your best friend, loving somebody else, because as a friend you are supposed to listen...even when it hurts. R&R please, I really would love the feedback.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 328 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/5/2003
The Worst Teacher Ever reviews
This was not written by me it was actually written by one of my best friends and I found it so amusing that I wanted to see what everyone else thought. Please review, I'd really like all the feedback I can get. Thanks.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7/3/2003
Pressure of Mine reviews
We've all felt pressure but who puts the pressure upon us? this is about identifying the least suspected person, yourself. R&R Pretty Please, I'd love the feedback.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 436 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6/29/2003
Welcome to my World reviews
This is one of my darkest pieces yet and I'm not exactly sure what inspired me to write it, I just sorta let my mind go and wrote up a storm. It is a tiny bit hard to follow but definetely worth and R&R.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 403 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/28/2003
Please, Critisize Me reviews
There isn't really a way to sumarize this, it's a completely sarcastic poem written out of pure anger. you sorta just have to read it. Reviews are always a blessing.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 329 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/26/2003
Not Without a Fight reviews
Sometimes you have to fight to keep your friends close because you are the only one who feels the friendship drifting. Reviews are always appreciated.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 341 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6/25/2003
Could You Cope? reviews
This poem is another one of my love-sick poems only with a more angry style and I think it's one of my best yet. worth a read and review.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 507 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
Am I Invisible Yet? reviews
This poem depicts the confusion and frustration living in a household where there is no escape, just constant nagging. There is some profanity but nothing too out of the ordinary. This is probably my most passionate poem yet, R&R please.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 640 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/25/2003
Ever Erasing Smile reviews
This poem entails the yearning to see that special someone glace in your direction and the thought process that follows that need to see his tender smile. Reviews are always greatly appreciated and I'm not too sure about this poem so even more so here.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 280 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/25/2003
Digging Deeper reviews
This poem is about everything that lies beyond my outter appearance and how if people would just dig a little deeper they would discover so much about me. I've been all over the place with my writings lately so reviews are greatly appreciated.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 477 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 6/25/2003
Making Waves reviews
This story conveys my frustration with a friend who has yet to learn that sometimes its ok to make waves in the ocean of life. (R&R please)
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 452 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6/25/2003
The Unspeakable reviews
This poem relays the pains of trying to express your feelings towards someone but not being able to articulate the words. R&R please, I'll make sure to check out your work
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 686 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/25/2003
My Wild Child reviews
Lately I've felt very trapt and realized that what the world sees in me is not who I want to be or who I know that deep down I am and this discusses the struggle of knowing that I have a different side but cannot release it without help.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 499 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
The Weight of the World reviews
This poem is about living up to people's standards and things of that nature, I wouldn't have posted this but I knew a friend (ashley) would be able to relate as many of you probably can. Reviews are always appreciated.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 324 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/25/2003
Teenage Sob Story reviews
a fairly decent poem,not one of my best, but I think it captures the emotion of a fairly common teenage dilemma very well. (R&R and I'll make sure to check out some of your work)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 383 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
I hate her reviews
This poem discusses my inner struggles with my mother, I warn you that there is some profanity due to the angry nature of the poem (hence the rating). (R&R, Pretty Please, I'll make sure to check some of your stuff out)
Poetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 517 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
My Guardian Angels reviews
I never have been able to articulate the words to tell my friends how much they really mean to me so I figured I can express everything else through my poetry why not this? It's a very new style for me so reviews are always welcomes, even negative ones.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 682 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
My Daily Dose
An over dramatization of what my day is like without the presence of the only person who seems to hold the ability to make me smile every single day. Take note that I did write this in the middle of a class and therefore it is not my best work.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 359 - Published: 6/25/2003
From Hopeless to Hoepful
This poem entails the story of an unexpected friend that helped me to my feet when I felt completely lost and alone. (R&R Pretty Please)
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 388 - Published: 6/25/2003
The Pains of Experience
This poem discusses the transition from flat out hating life due to the loss of a loved one to realizing that I can learn from my pain instead of simply anguishing in it. R&R Please I'll be sure to check out your work
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 475 - Published: 6/25/2003
Silent Chaos reviews
This is a sort of abstract poem about sitting in a really quiet office all day and how annoying the silence gets and I dont know, I was really bored and lacking all inspiration, but I'm pretty proud of it, all things considered. I'd love a review.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 639 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
Crazy Confused reviews
This is about the frustration as a result of recieving mixed signals from a crush of four years. Reviews are a blessing.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
Your Confession
This poem discusses the struggle a friend of mine and I under went when we noticed some changes for the worst in a close mutual friend of ours, it isn't my best work but it's worth reading. (R&R please, I'll make sure to check your work out)
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 428 - Published: 6/25/2003
Always Blamed reviews
I've fought an inner struggle with myself for a very long time, trying to figure out how I can hate a girl I don't even know. This poem is not all deep and emotional like my others but its worth a read and review.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 521 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
A Single Second More reviews
I had a dream last night that I have been waiting to have for two years and this is just sort of my way of coping with having to wake up. It's not like most of my other poems so reviews would be greatly greatly appreciated.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 536 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/25/2003
Waiting for Tommorrow reviews
This poem discusses the safe place that we all need to escape to once in awhile and how hard it is to stay there in my household. Pretty sucky summary but I dont know how else to describe it. R&R I'll make sure to check your work out.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 466 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/25/2003
Guidance to my Heart
Similar to some of my other poems, with a new outlook. Basically it just discusses my reaching out for the understanding of a crush of three years. R&R and I'll make sure to check your work out.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 758 - Published: 6/25/2003
A Simply Lost Cause reviews
some suicidal innuendos, basic day to day teenage emotions with a "happy" ending. (R&R please, I'll make sure to check out some of your work)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 597 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
They Were All Wrong reviews
This poem entails the stuggles of a high school crush that ended up to be all worthwhile, even though most thought it wouldn't. (R&R, Pretty Please)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 719 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/25/2003
Just One More Day reviews
This poem depicts a father and daughter relationship that was ended all too soon and how the daughter learn to cope with the sudden loss. (R&R Pretty Please)
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 372 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/25/2003