AutumnRhapsodyhide bio
Author has written 96 stories for Haiku, Fantasy, Love, Romance, Nature, General, Life, Friendship, Essay, and General. I'm trying to work on fiction right now...poems will be few and far between, I expect. And any stories will be taking a while, what with the story that I'm probably NOT posting that I'm working on for the next two weeks and 3 AP classes and piano and the final revision of dandelionia's and my novel. Because a publisher is looking at a couple chapters, so we've got to get the rest done before they reply, just in case *knocks on wood*...Just thought I'd let anyone who cares know. I'm a sixteen-year-old girl in Michigan and I've been writing poetry for a little over a year. I love to read and I love music. My favorite book is the Lord of the Rings, although I like most things I read and remember. I play piano, was teaching myself wirestrung Gaelic harp, and I love John Mayer's music. John Mayer above all else, and the only others I will mention here are Graham Colton Band and the Old 97's, but I like lots. Dandelionia (here on FP) and I have written a novel--I don't think we're going to post it here, though. That's been taking up my time lately, editing and revising and rereading and revising... I believe in returning reviews. I might take a while at it, though. My entertaining wit is not apparent in this profile. Oh well. |
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the front yard by europeanson reviews
i don't know. sort of a hope for the future. i thought of marisa after i wrote it, if that's anything.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/12/2005
Settlers by Deirdre reviews
I guess it could be under "spiritual" but that sounds so prayery and slightly affected to me...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/11/2004
Golden Light Tears by dandelionia reviews
With trepidation I submit this poem to the users of fictionpress. Yes, I'm being dramatic, but this is my baby. It is one of my favorite poems, and also very true to life. So, with trepidation I send out this poem.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/25/2004
Concerts! by dandelionia reviews
The title kind of sounds like a really really horrible poem, I know. But I just got back from two concerts adn I think this poem captures and exaggerates the feelings and emotions people have at such events.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 548 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/9/2004
stuck by catchcolt reviews
a complicated crush? i was very confused. september-that's over now. i'm tempted to call it 'stuck again' as those are the repeated words, but that doesn't quite make sense.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/8/2004
I think I'll Light a match by dandelionia reviews
"Disillusionment/and I cannot think." I feel that the spirit of the human race often follows cycles, such as the water cycle.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/27/2004
Good Flowers On A Gray Day by LizardoftheLastMoon reviews
Not exactly a poem, but not exactly prose. Sort of a cross-over. So one day I wasn't feeling too good. So I wrote this.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,390 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/16/2004
falling sky by escape into reality reviews
forever ended today, and we can't be saved now.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 362 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/16/2003
Hopeful Agony by dandelionia reviews
This poem is pretty abstract, so maybe a summary would spoil it for you...oh well. I wrote this poem after Homecoming, it's basically about my feelings after the dance.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/1/2003
Not Yet Dead by dandelionia reviews
Hmmm...how to summarize...hmmm, well, I was once startled at how still people are when they sleep...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/25/2003
Dwelling in the Nineties by dandelionia reviews
Oftentimes (what a funny word), we experience deja vu (I hope that is how you spell it-but what if you were trapped in a type of deja vu, where all you could do was count!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/21/2003
Ambra, Heroine of Twenty Great Battles by dandelionia reviews
Omar and Galienne are from warring civilizations...but that doesn't matter for they have each other. But when Galienne dies, how will Omar survive?
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,312 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/10/2003
Autumn Lass by Mainecoon reviews
A love poem to an autumn spirit.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/22/2002
Work of a Dragon's Lifetime by Dark Mage Raistlin reviews
PG--violence (later) and goriness (minimal, I hope). This is in a more serious vein than WiaS. I actually wrote this before WiaS, but never got around to posting it. **New this Ch: more about Aiban**
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 8,409 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 9/6/2002 - Published: 8/27/2002
Lesson to a Young Poet by Mainecoon reviews
Live for the moment. Life will flow on its own time...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 414 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/20/2001
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Psychoanalysis reviews
Overanalyzing is stupid and only results in being upset.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 309 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/9/2006
Your Presence reviews
His person is gone but his traces still engulf her, almost unbelievably. What a great summary. But I really like it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/21/2005
hands clasped tight reviews
pretty self-explanatory. the parenthetical comments are supposed to be indented but I can't get them to stay that way on here.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/21/2005
Miss You reviews
"I miss you,/poetry" Missing writing poetry, and writing prose instead-because excitement has fallen away
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/16/2005
And So She Wandered Blindly reviews
proper stanzas now...About being sick of change-always growing and then having to re-evaluate who you are. About being lost in your present, and knowing the present's more important than the past.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 471 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/30/2005
Kindred Spirits reviews
There are two ways friendships can go...
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,196 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/16/2005
One Night Is Nothing reviews
I wrote this originally only for myself, but I kind of love it so I'm posting it. I guess it's a look into my beliefs in life.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 584 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/1/2005
Inexplicably, Inextricably reviews
This is from a while ago, and it doesn't mean anything to me any more, but I really like some of the phrasing, some of the words. About someone taking up all your thoughts for no real reason, unknowingly.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1/1/2005
Survival reviews
About centering your life around a countdown of days, surviving just so many more. Needs a better title, can't figure out formatting on this new thing
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 817 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12/7/2004
Empty reviews
I wrote it almost w/out realizing it...pretty self-explanatory
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11/30/2004
Forced Evolution reviews
A little bit rough still, but-SHORT story of an unrelenting, useless crush. I don 't know about the title, I just came up w/it now
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,076 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/29/2004
Lightfilled Dreams reviews
About idyllic daydreams of my future...if you're an ardent feminist, don't kill me. Looking it over, maybe it is mostly inspired by being cold.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 761 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/24/2004
Apparently, That Hope Was Very Strong reviews
Refers back to "failing hope"...Basically, it's a stupid idea, about a guy I like not being in any of my classes...I like a lot of the formatting, though
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/31/2004
Rewind and Start Over reviews
Replaying the same daydream again and again.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,968 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/28/2004
failing hope reviews
An almost certain feeling that it's hopeless, that it won't happen. This poem, actually, makes me feel better about my poetry, at least.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/26/2004
Alone reviews
I've lost all confidence in my poetry, with all the failed attempts this summer, but I decided this one was better/I may be confused. About feeling alone, no matter what.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/26/2004
Memories Flash and Freeze reviews
Keep getting reminded of what I thought I no longer cared about. Don't know if I should've posted it, but it's all I could write tonight.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,258 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8/4/2004
Fallen Into Memory reviews
Don't really know what this is, but it's about something bringing back a memory and getting stuck in it. A bittersweet, pointless memory.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,101 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/24/2004
Can't Think To Write reviews
Didn't know where I was going, then my mind was so full and then...I'm not quite sure. Sad, though, I think. I think it's forced and kind of dumb, actually, but some clever lines.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/19/2004
Nothing reviews
Surprisingly I remembered this through a night of sleep and until tonight...about realizing he's been nothing/always was. Kind of simple, about the same guy yet again. AGAIN. Haven't seen the kid since June 10, though.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/18/2004
Finally reviews
Summer wasn't feeling right, but then I was looking at the really not-that-great sky the other night, and it was suddenly just /right/. I really like this one, I think.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6/19/2004
Spring: Dreams Walking reviews
This is from...May? The title is odd, I know. "Points to remember from walking home [I’ve these dreams I’m, walking home, home where it used to be (fights urge to listen to “83”" It's thoughts during a walk, about nature and dreams?
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 652 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/14/2004
yawn reviews
wrote it in chemistry, that might explain some of it. Formatted diff, w/ indents and italics... um...it means many different things on many levels-levels of thought and levels of reality. I guess you could keep in mind the school year's ending-a year h
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/5/2004
This Afternoon reviews
Um...what can I say? I love it, I think, and I don't want to give anything away. Whatever it was was there is all I'm certain of, but that's not the point. Point being...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/26/2004
Hopeless reviews
School is ending, chances are fleeing, nothing will happen. PLEASE review, no one is reviewing me anymore really. Not sure about the word 'context', but I kind of like it...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5/24/2004
Waning reviews
Hmmm...it's a very not obvious poem for a change...chances are ending, school years coming to a close, and also...well, your ideas about it would be very interesting
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/28/2004
It All Depends On You reviews
Dwindling feelings...but could it build up again? I don't know, that's a funny sounding summary. I have no idea if I like this.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/18/2004
Old Dreams reviews
Remembering old dreams, that haven't come true and no longer can, and therefore realizing new dreams might not then either...it's really depressing, exaggerated from what I feel, I think.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 241 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/8/2004
Nothing More reviews
My thoughts seem all repeated, every last one of import-this was the only poem therefore that I could write...oh well. Read and review, please?...not really about writer's block, but about thinking about the same things again and again
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4/3/2004
You Are Not reviews
...read it please? It has a lot of repetition..that makes it easy to read...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/2/2004
Starless But WishFull reviews
...what a great title (that was sarcasm)...just wanted to clarify it wasn't the adj 'wishful' but that it is full of wishes...not really that much about nature maybe
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/1/2004
What's Better? reviews
just read it, I don't want ro give it away ...btw I do NOT LOVE the real person, that would be strange
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/1/2004
Talking reviews
Really, truly, very much so talking! It was exciting then. Not so much though now.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/1/2004
That Which Will Never Be reviews
The rhythm of this scares me-singsongy? Basically, I have been confused about the tear-prone-ness of my eyes lately. A lot. And, yeah...don't. make. up. perfect. boyfriends. Actually, it's great fun.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 296 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/1/2004
Reality? reviews
So reality is becoming confusing...that's what happens when you and your friend have a 400-page novel that includes yourselves with fake characters...Just read the poem as a poem, it's about imaginings and possibiliites melding with what's real
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/1/2004
Happily I Cry In Sadness reviews
Not happy crying-happy and about to cry, at the same time. How can this be so? Seriously.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/1/2004
Softly But You Heard reviews
Talking to myself but he heard and looked at me
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/30/2004
If Only What Was Fair Ruled Fate reviews
...yeah...that break, I was really kind of depressed, wasn't I? The injustice of feelings not returned?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/30/2004
Why reviews
Why-the depressing reality of why I shouldn't like him...is that what this poem is? It's sooo depressing
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/30/2004
Something reviews
It's not enough, glances aren't
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/30/2004
Now I Can See reviews
The depressingness of the sky mixing with being stuck alone and bored and depressed...great break that was
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/30/2004
Reality Drifts and Bends reviews
All I want to do is sit here of think...fantasize...think of you Title not completely relevant? I love this one, so much.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 276 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/30/2004
Now Today Thinking I Realize reviews
Realizing that what I'd been reading into meant nothing
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/30/2004
Please Stop Looking At Me reviews
The confusion of not knowing where to put one's eyes...avoid, or stare? The funniest part is that I wrote it later that day, while sitting right next to him...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/30/2004
It Scared Me reviews
read it...basically, the scariness of this glance? ugh it is ALWAYS eyes
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/30/2004
Walking Away for the weekend reviews
...eyes meeting eyes, again-but this time staring almost? How obvious it must've been.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/30/2004
You Saw Me reviews
Simple, just as the title suggests...not sure if it's worth it, but the ending is powerful, I think, and I just like it-I never wrote more, I never finished it-that was all there was to say
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/30/2004
Decreasing Importance? reviews
about coming back from a break, and him not mattering as much, and why was it-desperately in need of a new title, suggestions welcome
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/30/2004
So Close To You reviews
It's just a moment, really...a moment first of bliss and then of loss? Having fun summarizing cooly Read it, I guess...I'm not sure-it's pointless?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/30/2004
Keeping Me On TrackHaha, Right reviews
this is a response to another poem of mine, "As You Entered the Room"...I think that I like it...about how I act...yeah this is weird
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/30/2004
Walking Up the Stairs reviews
Well, I like how on the side of the original, unrevised version it says "not paying attention" in a lazy script (I wrote it in Math) but it's about going up the stairs and just knowing someone was there, and actually not feeling stupid-though that might'v
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/30/2004
I Am So Aware reviews
This sounds rather stalkerly, I realized...that's scary. I actually scared myself, typing it up...about knowing when someone should show up, and trying to act normal around them...I'm not actually sure I still like it
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/14/2004
With So Much Time Passed reviews
I hadn't been at school, hence, seen certain people, for a while...ALL of THANKSGIVING break...wow that's just four days...it's really kind of sad actually
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/14/2004
I Know You Looked At Me Today reviews
Um...train of thought, moreso than usual...it is long, but I think it's worth it, this poem meant so much to me when I wrote it...the commas need work I know, but please review it...I was so proud of it
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 518 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/14/2004
Why Do You Have That Face? reviews
Or should it be titled "That Face? I think that the title is pretty self-explanatory...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/13/2004
If I Thought Long Enough reviews
Angst too? Anyway, for real, in my head, it's romance, it's a disappointed love poem, but I guess to the general person it is not that specific. Basically, power of thought over what happens.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/19/2004
I Seemed To Feel You reviews
this is from a point in time when I was just writing the poems, the thoughts, so these two stanzas might not be part of the same poem, and I never titled them, but they are together now-more 'eye poetry'
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/18/2004
That Moment reviews
Okay, this poem is supposed to be merely thoughtful, explanatory-not narrative of my life, although in the second stanza it slips...this is purely what's on the paper, I have never edited it, so it's uncollected, but I was so proud of it at the time, in e
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/18/2004
But Once reviews
For once, slightly optimistic thoughts on people glances, gazes, etc...it's ALWAYS about that, have you noticed? These poems are all pretty old...try September
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/18/2004
You Sit Next To Me reviews
written while sitting next to the person in class...I don't think there's really any more to say
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/18/2004
Snow Does ItYes reviews
Written in Algebra II first hour a couple days ago...since then we've had TONS of snow, but no snow day...should I add the ending and are question marks necessary, 'cause I like the dashes but 's look funny w/them
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1/15/2004
Home Alone I Am reviews
Whenever I have the computer all to myself, alone, and can therefore write poetry on it instead of by hand, I can't think of much to say. But the potential's there. Okay, that's a crappy summary
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12/18/2003
I'm Sick of All This reviews
That's not really the title, I need one. About thinking about someone ALL THE TIME. I like it, I think.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/17/2003
Every Time I Stop Thinking reviews
I've never called anything 'angst' but it probably is. I think that the title basically explains...please please please I want thoughts, especially on the first part
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12/16/2003
Giggling Incessantly reviews
Wrote at hotel the night before a John Mayer/Counting Crows concert thissummer...which has nothing to do w/anything. My friends and I were really hyper, constantly laughing. Had forgotten about it, found it today, thought 'Eh, I'll post it. Why not?
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/4/2003
Perfect Fall Day reviews
Sure, the title's not great, but oh well. Stuck in Chemistry yesterday, wanting a perfectlovely fall day, but thought it was still grey and cold like it was all week. Turned out, it was lovely butcold...I know that autumn is the cooler but fall fit there
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 10/3/2003
Can't Write A Paper reviews
baically, I had a world history paper, and I was exhausted, but I was also hyper-neither of which are good states-of-mind when you are working. Not a great summary...anyway, I kind of like it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 10/2/2003
Autumn Reigns reviews
Well, wrote this in World History yesterday...Monday, all of a sudden it became like it was November...yick, we need more perfect fall days first! Anyway, this is mostly a bunch of cool phrases that popped into my head, and upon rereading it,it actually
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10/1/2003
Black and White reviews
Wrote in in Health class a week or two ago...orginally about boredom, the pages blurring together, but it came out meaning something else, probably. I think it's pretty cool.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9/24/2003
Moonlit Musings reviews
Girl in a tree, during a pretty night, thinking about traveling the world. Final poetry test last year, my only rhyming piece uploaded, it's completely fictitious. I like it, I think...
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 4 - Published: 9/13/2003
Accidental Lying reviews
About lying by accident, and feeling bad, wanting to tell someone I lied, but it would give away the secret that the lying was protecting (my only real secret)...but since when do I care when I lie? (not that I do it much)...secret has been told to one
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 298 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/5/2003
As You Entered the Room reviews
truly, it's untitled, but I decided to title it here-suggestions please? In basically the same vein as the other two newest, but I am more satisfied with this one. It's really a basically happy poem, well having him in my class is.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9/5/2003
That Chance reviews
Goes w/Last Glimpse, same set up/rhythm for a bit, I don't like it as much. I need an ending that kind of goes w/Last Glimse, haven't thought much on it yet. What do you think of it, as a poem? I was actually happy-he was in my class...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/3/2003
How Could It Be? reviews
(you/across from me) so school started, and the schedule machine is nice or something. My summaries must be becoming really bad, no one is reviewing my stuff. I want to know, seriously, what people think of this as a poem.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9/3/2003
To Tell or Not To Tell reviews
Should you tell secrets, or not?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8/17/2003
Silence Because? reviews
Why didn't she ask about my poems...the ones I hadn't planned on showing her
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/17/2003
How Do I Know? reviews
(that I like you)...old compared to some of my poems, but pretty recent, I really like the end.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8/17/2003
A Fruitless Recount: He Loves Me Not reviews
You know how you you take straw wrappers and pinch them, turning them about ninety degrees in between each inch and do the whole "He loves me, he loves me not" thing...at least according to my mom...well self-deception doesn't always work.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8/17/2003
Such a Bittersweet Dream reviews
Updated w/another dream that goes w/it. Based on dreams I had, tragedy only to me because I never get to know what happened. How well is it written? although the dialogue's right from the dream, so I dont' think it's too great.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 566 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8/11/2003 - Published: 7/10/2003
I Think of You and Wonder reviews
School's been out for a good bit. Haven't seen anyone but my darling bestest friends and then relatives. See Last Glimpse and Split-Seconds.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/11/2003
They Dance Crazily reviews
Random dancing by friends in the basement, just as the poem says.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8/11/2003
What I Didn't Want to Say reviews
The frustration of having nothing to write/writing rambling poetry.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8/11/2003
Hopelessly Bored reviews
I was really bored the day I wrote this and the haiku, dragged off shopping w/my parents and none of my friends could come. Do you like the [brackets] 'cause they were editing that I forgot to take out but some people like them.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/11/2003
Sitting Here Alone reviews
These are a bunch of haiku that go together, not completely true as I have had no chance to wonder "what we could have been" and I wasn't depressed then; they were just sposed to be bored poems but the other things sounded good. Anyway, this is too long
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/11/2003
Cityglow Sky: No Wishes reviews
The other night I couldn't see the stars, and I wanted something descriptive (not depressing) to write. A couple nights later I realized it just probably wasn't late enough, because if you wait you can see them. I think it's a pretty cool poem.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/11/2003
Faerie Rain reviews
One winter night the rain (I guess it wasn't cold enough for snow) was really, really tiny and barely felt wet...that's basically what this is about. Itwas really cool!
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/12/2003
Winter: Wonderland or Wasteland? reviews
Also from seventh grade, this poem kind of shows the way we tend to get snow in my part of Michigan-when we get enough (I like a lot) it stays forever. Don't get me wrong, I love snow, but the same old snow gets so yucky...
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/12/2003
Ideas reviews
This one's from seventh grade. The simple title explains it, basically.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/12/2003
Fantasy is reviews
Yet another sixth grade poem...it was titled Fantasy is...Magical but that seems a bit silly to me now
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/12/2003
March reviews
I don't know if I should call this March, or March Slips In, as Microsoft word titled it. It's another sixth grade assignment that I still like, using a cat instead of a lion and a lamb.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/12/2003
Autumn reviews
This is a poem about autumn, obviously. I wrote it 3-4 years ago, in sixth grade, but I still like it. I'm not sure the metaphor is completely clear, however. What do YOU think the pillars are? Please tell me.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/12/2003
Last Glimpse reviews
This poem was on the last day of school. As w/my other poem like this, I would really like to know what people think of this, as I have no other source for criticism.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/10/2003
SplitSeconds reviews
Please review this poem...I don't really know if it's good and I don't have anyone here I want to share it with.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 7/10/2003
A Magical Instrument reviews
I still haven't come up with the right title. This is a poem about the ancient, wire-strung Celtic harp, which I am learning to play. It was also a school assignment, but I still like it.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7/10/2003
Haiku 2 reviews
Haiku I wrote when I should have been studying for finals, the two go together
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/10/2003
Haiku reviews
A haiku I wrote for school, but I like it a lot. Incorrect number of syllables fixed...I can't believe my English teacher missed that-or that I did. This is alos posted on a seperate pen name of mine, so
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/9/2003