Aged Parent Peggotty Barkis
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Joined 08-01-03, id: 367612
Author has written 18 stories for Fable, Biography, Life, Friendship, Humor, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi, Spiritual, and School.

I am Kate, a 17yr old Australian. I study Extension English at school and thus I value your tips very much as I am likely to fail without your help. Please read and review!

I try to review your work very honestly but being young and inexperienced my comments may have little value. That is why I appreciate your negative comments so much as they help me improve.

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Mr Derret goes to lunch reviews
A poem I wrote about a teacher at my school who is incredibly cruel. It is not a hate poem but a poem of resentment and wonder. Please r and r.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/17/2005
Such is Perfection reviews
A sonnet I wrote to encapsulate my views of what perfection is: dull, boring, empty. Please read and review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/4/2005
The Under Inflated Tyre reviews
This is a short poem I wrote to express my frustration. I tried to write using imagery just like Syvia Plath, but I am nowhere near as talented. I am not sure of its quality but you can tell me that! PS. THIS IS NOT ABOUT A FLAT TYRE OR A CAR!
Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/26/2004
Narrative of an intellectual Snob reviews
I am sick of reading stories and this is why! If you want to be challenged this will sure challenge you.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,001 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12/14/2004
A phantasmic tour reviews
Come on a tour with me potential reviewers. I will unlock to you a few secrets of my world, that is if you are not too afraid. This was my performance poetry piece for which I received 25/25. I lost my voice the next day for talking so loud but it was wor
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 662 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/11/2004
Just a song at twighlight reviews
A spiritual story focussing more on indiduals and their thoughts than actual actions. This was my official assessment story and my teacher gave me 23/25. Many powerful themes such as war and its effects. Very relevant to modern society. Includes Crosby, S
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,895 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/11/2004
Mr Dalloway reviews
This is my favorite story. My extension English teacher gave me 19/20 for it. Read it and be moved by the tale set in the not-so-far-away future. Mr Dalloway is the husband of a MALE political aspirant and is planning a dinner party. Please, please, pleas
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,484 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/11/2004
Old Friends reviews
Read this please! Although it is not action packed or mysterious, it has a very spiritual, emotive quality. My expert ext. english teacher gave it 17/20 and I want to know what you think!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,036 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/29/2004
A suspicious party reviews
I got 18/20 for this story. It is an exciting tale which follows an elderly woman as she tries to discover the whereabouts of her missing husband. Please R/R.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,222 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/29/2004
A hyperbolic view reviews
For this story I got 17/20 The word limit was 400 words, so it is rather short. Which means you will find it easy to read. It is about MURDER! AHHHHHHh
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 532 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/14/2004
Dom, the jolly, corpulent, ice cream eating man reviews
Dom is bored of his life as a gym instructor. Then he meets a strange pair: a man addicted to ice cream and a hate filled misanthrope. I had fun writing this but it might be a little silly. Please R/R.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,690 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/29/2003
Sonnet of awe reviews
This is a sonnet I wrote about an amazing gym instructor and when I showed my Dad he laughed. I wonder why?
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11/24/2003
Prolonged Wounds reviews
This is a sonnet I wrote for english. I am not much of a poet and I hope I do Ok.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/22/2003
Luca's Tale reviews
Are you sexually obsessed? If so this tale is a good lesson for you. It tells of an old lonely man, Luca, who finally meets somone and of how it fails miserably.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,863 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/20/2003
Theta the Unnatural existence reviews
The first human clone looks back on her life and her inferior treatment.
Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 952 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/9/2003
Granny Frangipani reviews
Granny Frangipani is dead! Those who knew her looked back on this crazy ladies existence.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 860 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/3/2003
Like Putty In their Hands reviews
A story telling of a ward of the states loss of innocence.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,278 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/1/2003
2034 The Unheeded Warning
A person looks back on their time in the Big Brother House in the year 2034
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,014 - Published: 8/1/2003