swirlygirl
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Joined 08-08-03, id: 368921
Author has written 59 stories for Life, General, Love, Haiku, Nature, and Politics.
Hello my name is Pamela and I am currently a nursing student who loves to read and write poetry. I also have many poems under the pen name Thaiswirl.

Ok well here are a few things to know about me. I currently live in Illinois surrounded by fields and fields and fields of corn (oh yeah lovely) corn, corn, corn, as far as the eye can see. It does get quite boring. I am 26 years old and have an orange tabby cat and a chinese sharpei (you know the big wrinkly dogs). My favorite color is green, although I also like blue. I am of mixed race my father being Black and White, and my mother being Thai. I love culture and languages. I was born in Illinois and spent most of my years in Florida until hurricane Andrew blew everything away. Now here I lie a city girl in a country world deprived of anything life has to offer me. Well actually it is not all that bad. I do plan on moving back to a big city once i graduate.

I have always loved poetry although I do not like english classes ZZZZZZZZ they are so boring. Some of my favorite poets are Walt Whitman, Langston Hughes, Robert Frost, and Maya Angelou. I also love to read novels of all sorts.

I love browsing through all the poetry on this site and submitting reviews. I hope that everyone who reads my poetry will also submit reviews. Even if you don't like my poetry tell me so. I am open to all opinions. I always try to review everyone who reviews me.( Thanks to all the wonderful writers that submit their reviews faithfully.)

I would like to especially thank The B.A.T, spiritfire, MJibBe, simpleplan13, JJR Meerraf, and greenbug67 for putting me on their favorites list they are all wonderful poets as well! Also, many thanks to those who have put my poems on their favorite stories list it means a lot to me. If you happen to be reading this check out my favorites authors list it is full of amazing poets. Well thats all I have to say for now...hope to hear from everyone soon!

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Saonam's song by mmoonsshiner reviews
This is really beautifull poem about the rainy season in Thailand
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/21/2004
Grace and Fallen Glory by destinee ariarti reviews
This can be improved on..but I really like the idea behind it. Like...feeling like the pain of falling makes flying not worth it. This is my first poem to post here, so review away, por favor! Gracias!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/9/2004
My Inbetween by unwritten reviews
its about being no where basically, about not feeling like your self. im not sure how to explain it, the poems suppose to do that. so please read, review, and i hope you enjoy!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/9/2004
Hope Smiles by Emi Amara reviews
Hiya! This is a haiku, which i really hope you like! Please review! Enjoy =)
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/28/2003
Last Moment by JJR Meerraf reviews
Ever see Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon? This is a poem about when she jumps and emotions during that time, sort of...
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/10/2003
Flower's Heart by JJR Meerraf reviews
This poem isn't really about anything, it's more abstract, but I really like it, please R&R
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/20/2003
Blindness Comes to Those Who Love by thegildedrose reviews
Love can make us blind to what is right in front of us.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/7/2003
What is Pain? by Cid Yakawashi reviews
This is a poem to answer the question 'What is Pain'. I'm proud of this poem, but I dunno if my friends liked it... Haven't asked. ^_^ Ah, well. Read and review, please.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/4/2003
Blessings by simpleplan13 reviews
Knowing your blessings
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/25/2003
Depression by simpleplan13 reviews
Yea self-explanitory
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/24/2003
Behind Me by Herman Greek reviews
Ever coin, no matter how rare, has its flip side. and so does life.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/19/2003
Hope Of Sinners by Bicadian reviews
Not necessarily religious
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/16/2003
Flower Called Love by Keep it 100 reviews
Love is a good thing, if its not forced...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/14/2003
Better to Fall by godawful teen-angst poetry reviews
than to be dropped.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/11/2003
Rusty Nail by Keep it 100 reviews
Sometimes when you don't forgive it eats away at your heart and ,before you know it, there's nothing that can be done...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 35 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/9/2003
For Fear Of Another Race by Namir Swiftpaw reviews
Just my own personal take on slavery...to be so hateful of another race of people because of color...is it because we were afraid?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/3/2003
Maybe by Lassanti reviews
Maybe...Maybe... I don't know what I want to do with my life! I'm scareed I'm just going to die and be forgotten...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/10/2003
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American Politics reviews
who we pick to lead us...
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 2/6/2004
Within Our Hearts reviews
Sometimes we ignore the love within our hearts.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 4 - Published: 1/9/2004
Angry Storms reviews
Thunderstorms are just clouds angry at one another!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/24/2003
Midnight Market reviews
Midnight market in the streets of thailand!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/19/2003
Missing You reviews
The worst way to miss someone is when they are right beside you!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 10/19/2003
Like Leaves in The Fall reviews
My love drifts away...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 5 - Published: 10/19/2003
Pride reviews
Feelings of pride as I watch a birth!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10/19/2003
Fall Laughter reviews
Kids playing in the fall.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 10/19/2003
On a Rainy Day reviews
One rainy day in Thailand when visiting Grandma...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 10/19/2003
The Life of a Fish reviews
Watching my fish swim around...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 10/19/2003
A Fallen Star reviews
Falling Stars!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10/19/2003
A Tiny Spider reviews
I am terrified of spiders so they mock me!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/19/2003
A Soul Set Free reviews
watching a shooting star!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 4 - Published: 10/12/2003
My Secret Place reviews
Every one has a secret place where they run and hide!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 10/12/2003
A Heart of Glass reviews
A heart of glass is easily broken
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/12/2003
Fall Approaching reviews
as the title says...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9/24/2003
Wishing reviews
wishing on a fallen star!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9/24/2003
Thai Temple reviews
a temple i visited while in thailand
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9/24/2003
Peaceful Shores reviews
Sitting on the beach is so peaceful!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9/24/2003
Sleepy Sundown reviews
The sun falling asleep
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9/24/2003
Dragonflies reviews
dragonflies above a pond
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 9/24/2003
Lilacs reviews
ahhh the sweet sweet smell
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/24/2003
Strawberries reviews
Strawberries always get me in trouble
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/24/2003
Living Free reviews
What would it be like to actual live free...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9/23/2003
Nature's Serenade reviews
The sounds of natue as I sit on my porch.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/23/2003
Country Child reviews
a moment as a country child
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9/21/2003
Insects reviews
insects and flames
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9/21/2003
Soaring Eagles reviews
Eagles soaring in the big blue sky...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9/15/2003
Mustangs reviews
Mustangs of the west...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9/15/2003
Pieces of Me reviews
everytime my heart breaks i feel like a piece of me has died!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/13/2003
Within a Wall of Ice reviews
protecting yourself from heartache can hurt too!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/12/2003
Tornados reviews
just like the title says...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9/8/2003
Footprints Of The Past reviews
even if you run you cannot foget...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9/7/2003
Love Too Late reviews
realizing your in love when it is too late.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 5 - Published: 9/7/2003
Price Of Forbidden Love reviews
Forbidden love has a price R n R please!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/6/2003
Deprived reviews
My heart is so deprived *sigh*
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9/6/2003
Secrets reviews
Wanting to be told...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/6/2003
Mountains reviews
Mountains...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9/6/2003
Smoke reviews
smoke rising
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/6/2003
A Stolen Moment reviews
Ever had a stolen moment? Please R n R!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/6/2003
Waterfalls reviews
What more do i need to say...R n R!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9/5/2003
Lonely reviews
A feeling of lonliness the morning after...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9/5/2003
River reviews
Wish i could be a river sometimes and just run far away R n R
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/5/2003
A Rainbow reviews
Rainbows after a storm are promises...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9/5/2003
My Dreams reviews
when you wake they are gone *poof* like that!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9/4/2003
The Spring reviews
Springtime as all the pretty colors come to life
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/4/2003
My Shadow reviews
My shadow lurking behind me...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9/4/2003
Goodbye reviews
Have you ever wanted to say goodbye, but it was too late?
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/4/2003
Sleep reviews
Overcome by sleep...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9/4/2003
Nervousness reviews
Yes...another haiku by me
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8/25/2003
Indiscreet reviews
Ever flirted behind someone's back?
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/25/2003
Hesitant reviews
Feeling hesitant...please r nr
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8/25/2003
Memories reviews
What r memories? R nR please
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/25/2003
Tears reviews
Please r n r !
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8/25/2003
Anger reviews
Please r n r !
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8/25/2003
In My Heart reviews
sometimes you don't say what is really in your heart
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/8/2003
Dreams reviews
what happens to our dreams when we wake up?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/8/2003
What Should I Choose reviews
you know those annoying bubble sheets that say pick your race...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 268 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/8/2003
A Woman reviews
What it is to be a woman
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/8/2003