Author has written 2 stories for Fantasy. Well hello readers! This is my first time on Fictionpress, and I was thankfully directed to this site from my friend from choir, Marina, or also known as "Princess Chloe" on this website. You should really go check out her stories, as well as my other friend's story, her pen name is Miko-Linka-Chan and her story is really good so far. You should also check out anyone on my favorite author's list. I love to sing, I've been in choir for three years so far,and this is my fourth year in the choir. I love to write stories and this is my first actual cool story. The rest were all crap. You know sometimes I look at my early stories and think (in the words of Princess Chloe) "was I on crack when I wrote this?" HMM, I also play piano and have been playing ten years. I'm currently in ninth grade, and well..that's about it. so...my favorite movies are: LABYRINTH, POTC, Harry Potter 1-3, MERLIN, Arabian Nights,The Storyteller,The Princess Bride,Willow,The 10th Kingdom,the Goonies,Chicago,Back to the Future trilogy,Star Wars saga, PHANTOM OF THE OPERA, napoleon dynamite, LOTR, Mony Python and the Holy Grail, National Treasure,ROCKY HORROR PICTURE SHOW,Clue, Edward Scissorhands..and plenty more. Favorite quotes: "Hello,my name is Indigo Montoya,you killed my father, prepare to die." Princess Bride (Indigo Montoya) "Through dangers untold,and hardships unnumbered,I have fought my way here to the castle beyond the Goblin take back the child that you have stolen.For my will is as strong as your and my kingdom is as great. You have no power over me."Labyrinth (Sarah) "Do not think, become."The 10th Kingdom (Snow White) "Roads?Where we're going,we won't need roads."Back to the Future (Doc) "A thief thinks there's nothing wrong with stealing, except when it happens to them."Arabian Nights (Scherazade) "Fear of a name only increases fear of the thing itself."Harry Potter (Hermione Granger) "Or the time when I pushed my sister down the stairs and blamed it on the dog"The Goonies (Chunk) "Ya know, a heart can be broken.But it still keeps a' beatin' just the same." Fried Green Tomatoes (Ninny) "May the force be with you."Star Wars (many) "Don't Dream it; Be it!" Rocky Horror Picture Show (Frank N Furter) 'You know, people don't really talk like that' 'Yeah, but they think like that'." National Treasure (Nicolas Cage) "Lead me, save me, from my solitude." Phantom of the Opera (the phantom, a.k.a Erik) "In sleep he sang to me. In dreams he came. That voice which calls to me. And speaks my name. And do I dream again? For now I find, the phantom of the opera is there: inside my mind." Phantom of the Opera (Christine Daee) "Sing once again with me. Our strange duet. My power over you grows stronger yet. And though you turn from me, to glance behind. The phantom of the opera is there: inside your mind." Phantom of the Opera. (the phantom a.k.a Erik) "I'm a busy man, patience is not one of my virtues." Merlin (King Vortigern) "Well, you have so few of them, i wouldn't be worried about that one." Merlin (Merlin) "Are you trying to make me look dumb in front of the other guests, Wadsorth?" Clue (Colenel Mustard) "You don't need any help from me sir." Clue (Wadsworth) "We are no longer the knights who say 'ni'! We are now the knights who say...'ECKY ECKY ECKY ZUPONG DUKONG!"Monty Python and the Holy Grail (knights who formely said 'ni') "On second thought, let's not go to Camelot. 'Tis a silly place." Monty Python and the Holy Grail (King Arthur) "I have a complaint on the song you have just aired. I know plenty of lumberjacks, and only a few of them are transvestites!" Monty Python's Flying Circus (a general in a tutu) "And besidesdarling, the owner of that phone may be a beautiful woman, and you may never come back!" The Rocky Horror Picture Show (Janet Weiss a.k.a :cough cough:) "You want to know what the problem is with this country? There's too many people trying to get somewhere, but they try to get there too fast." Anonymous. About me:Let's see,about can I describe me?um...I'm part of the "never be normal" crowd. Books I'm reading: Julius Caesar by William Shakespeare and Realm of the Gods by Tamora Pierce Well, I must leave you all now,but I want you to know I LOVE YOU ALL!!!(especially you StickyElf,J.T Baever,Miko-Linka-Chan,and Princess Chloe, you guys rock!If I left out any other reviewer, I'm sorry, YOU GUYS ROCK TOO!!!) I have a few comments on Elements,even though I have changed slight things,I will soon be going through a very thorough and more extensive revising and editing.This might include taking out a lot and putting in even the new revised version that I'm creating, there's going to be a difference in a lot of the description and a little slightly darker tone to it, as I had been hoping it to be in the beginning.Things didn't exactly go as I planned with this story,and I find it to be extremely uninteresting at times and at times I find some of the more exotic creatures such as the dwarves and others so unrealistic that I need to do a total last reviewer was a little harsh in making me realize a bit of this,but it needed to be recognized nonetheless,so that will be worked on right away.Originally, I had wanted this story to be not very epic, but a tale that all fantasy lovers would respect, because I know that all people who love to read fantasy have once in their lives dreamed they could live in a world like that and that's kind of the feeling I wanted to show throughout the story, so I hope you like the more extensive revising when it comes up P.S I just put up the new extensive revisment of the first chapter and I request all my readers to re-read it, because there's a definite change in the plot that I typed up, so could you please reread it? I also just revised chapter two, but you don't have to read the revising of chapter 2 I just request rereading chapter one 'cause there's kind of a plot change so...yeah. I promise I will update sooner if you do. _! April |