ChiefO is a pen-named used by ChiefO and Mwegan, but we do our reviews separately. Right now this is the only story we are working on, and we have shelved a bunch of other half-done projects for now. Since we are so busy, we rarely get a chance to do any writing or reviewing. We will do return reviews, however, although maybe not right away...

If you do choose to read and review this story, please comment on the chapter length. We have posted many versions of each chapter, and the latest changes are to make the chapters much shorter. So, let us know if they are too short, or just right, or whatever.

Thanks!