E.m.p.t.y.H.o.r.i.z.o.n
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Joined 11-26-03, id: 385152
Author has written 90 stories for Life, General, Love, Fantasy, Family, Haiku, Religion, and Friendship.

Hello, I'm Melanie. Be my friend?

Whatever. Here's what you need to know:

Age: 15

State: oblivion

Status: who knows?

Favorite bands: Death Cab for Cutie, Interpol, The Postal Service, The Clash, Disturbed, Manson, Skinny Puppy, VAC and more...

Movie: The Nightmare Before Christmas

Writing
Style: I try different things out, but my classic style is the whole
'4-line, second and fourth rhyme' thing. I come here every once in a
while with about 6-8 new poems, and then I'm gone for a period. Sorry
about that. I tend to hate most of my old stuff.

Now, go read.

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Shalem by Faithless Juliet reviews
Shalem and his beauty
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/23/2004
Listen by StARrY EyEd oX reviews
This is a poem about changes and friendship- what surprises life can really give (sorry its really long, just please read it- it really means something)
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,120 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/1/2004
21 21 by DeerDance reviews
This is the kind of life and person I completley disagree with. I believe you should NEVER change yourself for anyone else. Reads and reviews appreciated, thanks.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/11/2004
Cut Me by second hand reviews
This poem makes me laugh as I look back on it something like two years after I wrote it. No one makes me bleed my own blood.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/6/2004 - Complete
Who Am I? by Lorelei Kayeri reviews
who am i? sometimes i wonder, do u?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 3/24/2004
Mute by LadyAnesta reviews
for when words are not enough...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/19/2004
Broken Crayons by mandi michael reviews
A group is growing up...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/17/2004 - Complete
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Home Alone reviews
R+R Here's to regrets.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/13/2005
Hell reviews
R+R seeing that the surreal is real.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/13/2005
Control
R+R who needs it?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Published: 3/13/2005
Carpe Diem
R+R Seize this.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Published: 3/13/2005
Break Me
R+R are we coming, or are we running?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Published: 3/13/2005
Bass Line reviews
R+R "Save us"
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/13/2005
Lead
R+R We're sinking again...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Published: 3/13/2005
Fake Roofs reviews
R+R When are we going to learn?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/13/2005
Drink With Me reviews
R+R Sobriety is for the stars...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/13/2005
Don't Wait
R+R
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Published: 3/13/2005
Your Winter reviews
r/r - your chill was so inviting, and now i miss the warmth
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/20/2004
Break You reviews
r/r - let me in to knock me out
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/20/2004
The Root of Hatred
r/r - dedicated to my father.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Published: 11/20/2004
Oceanic reviews
r/r - the waves have escaped you
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/20/2004
Exit to Exist
r/r - it's only civilization...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Published: 11/20/2004
New York Nights reviews
r/r - Can't see the brightness of the moon for your eyes
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/20/2004
Obstacle
R/R The pessimist is thirsty
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Published: 11/20/2004
Scab reviews
r/r A final definition written long ago.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/23/2004
A Lack of Deity reviews
r/r here's what I believe in.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/23/2004
Hermit Crab reviews
r/r Written after an interesting bump in the road... think what you like.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/23/2004
Talk reviews
r/r Talk is cheap, but lust costs even less
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/23/2004
Breathe reviews
r/r Exactly what I can't do when I'm with you
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/23/2004
Unholy Angel reviews
r/r the beauty of grotesque
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/23/2004
Instrumental Devastation reviews
r/r The crash and boom of melody.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/23/2004
No Use for Your Name reviews
I've got nothing to say. r/r
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/23/2004
Take It Back reviews
r+r Take back all the things you told me
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/21/2004
Final Goodbye reviews
r+r Just read it.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/21/2004
Shoulder's View reviews
r/r Scaring me behind my back; surely tou just want to see me crack.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2004
Come Away In Sleep
r/r Come dream with me in neverending sleep
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Published: 7/21/2004
Empty Poetic
r/r. Don't know what to say through burning lies.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Published: 7/21/2004
Razors reviews
r/r. Watch the silver blades dance on pale pale skin.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2004
Trippy reviews
r/r Dream on, it'll save you from real life.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2004
Chasing the Stars
r/r Chase your dreams.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Published: 7/8/2004
Work of Art reviews
R/R What you are, what I want you to be, and what is better than both.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/8/2004
Everpresent Night Light reviews
r/r I'll be your constant, everpresent night light.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/8/2004
Absinthe reviews
I don't... really... know... r/r
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/5/2004
I Want Fireworks! reviews
r/r life and everything like it, but with fireworks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/4/2004
Quiet reviews
R/R it's a feeling, it's love, it's hate, it's passion, it's all so quiet.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/4/2004
General reviews
R/R Being generally well-known is no fun.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/29/2004
The Art of Flirting reviews
R/R Because anyone can be like this.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/29/2004
Want reviews
R/R I want you.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/29/2004
Blue Eyes reviews
R/R, of course. Deceitful blue eyes/tell me no more lies/ put my heart to bed/ enough tears have been shed.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/27/2004
My Return reviews
Haven't been here in a while. R/R
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/25/2004
A Prelude reviews
Kind of goes with 'My Kind of Stranger'; guess what kind of mythical (or nto) creature it's about :)= R/R
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/8/2004
Button reviews
I have no idea... doesn't seem like the rest of my poems... R/R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/8/2004
Sundays Are Coffee reviews
R/R My friend sent this to me, and I wanted to change it. Badly. So here's my version, enjoy.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/8/2004
Missing You reviews
R/R Just a short poem I found today.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/8/2004
Idea reviews
R/R I added a line, so it's actually finished (finally). It's up to you as to what you think
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/8/2004
A Kiss reviews
Not what I'd expected. R/R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/8/2004
FourLetter Word reviews
R/R This is based off of a response to a question that I'd asked Mike Wengren a while ago (drummer of Disturbed). Well, the title is, anyway. :)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/8/2004
Secrets Spreading
R/R- I really like the ending that I gave this one, actually. About trust.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Published: 6/8/2004
Hopeful reviews
I like this poem, just because it's everything I want to be. It took a different turn than I'd intended in the first verse, but it's still okay. . R/R please
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5/3/2004
My Friend reviews
I'll regret this later, I'm sure, but it's the truth, as obvious as it already is. R/R
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/3/2004
Messiah reviews
Waiting/ For Your Modern/ Messiah/ To Take Away All the Hatred/ It darknes the light in your life... still awaiting I... (r+r)
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/3/2004
Questions reviews
More of how I feel right now. R/R, I'd like to know if my feelings are acceptible.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/29/2004
Confused Pain reviews
A change- I'm not writing from imagination, or from another's perspective. This is finally what I actually feel like.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/29/2004
Mine reviews
Everyone says that haikus are about nature. No, haikus should be about art, and art has never had a theme. R/R
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/27/2004
An End reviews
The end of everything within my mind. R/R
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/27/2004
He Said, She Said reviews
Love and be unloved. R/R
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/27/2004
Darkest Mind reviews
Just, R/R
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/27/2004
To Poke! reviews
I poked my friend's head in computer class. R/R
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/27/2004
Shattered reviews
The pieces have been picked up, but one is missing. R/R
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/27/2004
Music reviews
I really like this one, actually, and so does Cat. R/R!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/20/2004
Teeny Tiny Tragedy reviews
R/R
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/19/2004
Sex For Sale reviews
Written about three people who know who they are.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4/19/2004
The Truth reviews
When the world starts falling apart, it looks like I'm there with a pencil to record it. For everyone, I guess. R/R
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/15/2004
New Race reviews
Feel the poison trickle in/ the new race brings/ a world of sin.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/11/2004
Mike's Poem reviews
I asked Mike to give me something to write about, and he did... the title doesn't fir the topic. R/R
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/11/2004
Holding A Map reviews
My return from writer's block... R/R: you have directions, but you're still lost...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/11/2004
Club reviews
Dance to your death, then enjoy the release.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/11/2004
Writer's Block reviews
Thanks to Kitty on this one. A loophole to writer's block!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/1/2004
Forever With You reviews
Inspired by Join Me In Death by HIM. same subject
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/19/2004
Stuck and A Remix reviews
This is just a poem that I wrote, and then a little twised version of it. They have the same subject, so I just included both. R/R
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/19/2004
Sorry reviews
Um, I got into a fight with someone... and so I wrote this. But I won't show him, only you guys.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/2/2004
Lost and Found reviews
Forget everything and embrace yourself.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/19/2004
You Are reviews
It's like floating and humming and feeling, knowing, smelling, tasting flowery sweetness.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/19/2004
Memory
Success has changed you... I want you back, but I can't kill you.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Published: 1/28/2004
Virtuous Insanity reviews
A rose might prick you without warning, but a cactus always tells the danger.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/31/2003
I Love You reviews
Need I say more? No, because this feeling won't be returned. Even if I die caring.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/14/2003
Rid Me Of Insanity reviews
There's no genre for the strange, no genre for the disturbed. Welcome to my world; now rid me of it.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/14/2003
Family Portrait
This isn't about family... find out on your own, and open your mind. It is the most difficult of all boxes to open. Unleash what is within at your own risk.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Published: 12/14/2003
Rock Star
Never mind the title given in the poem. Devil Horns isn't really the name. Have I taken control of you? Are you breathing now? R/R
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Published: 12/9/2003
Naked
I feel so naked without you as your lovely poison takes my mind.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Published: 11/30/2003
Just For You reviews
This poem is just for you, and now you see how I feel. So naked now, without my mask.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/30/2003
Close My Eyes
No idea what this is, and I'm pretty sure that it's not one of my best. This is one of those things that need help.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Published: 11/30/2003
The Game reviews
I don't know what to really make of this, it kind of just popped into my head. It's not that horrible, but I'm not sure where it belongs, as with all of my poems.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/30/2003
My Kind of Stranger
Ah, it's my kind of stranger. My lone vampire, the romantic, enigmatic presence that lurks in the shadows, just waiting to strike.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Published: 11/29/2003
Sweet Misery reviews
I know that you're gone, but at least you're happy.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11/26/2003
Pretty Request reviews
I'm at my most deranged, tell me what you want.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/26/2003
My Monument reviews
This is an early poem; I wrote it abuot two years ago.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/26/2003