Feeling worthless - RandR please

Ever feel Minded

Maybe fantasy as well. About our general state of mind and our fallibility. PLEASE Read and Review

De amor pero mas de la vida. Para ustedes que me entienden :D - - - For my hugely limited audience please Read and Review.

Los cyclos de la vida If anyone reads spanish please R&R this - About Spring and life.

For those who understand

Un poema sobre la vida, tal vez un poco malo, ojala me alludan A poem about life, maybe a little pretentious or flawed, RnR if you read spanish...

Just an angry monologue for the friends that judged me and turned on me, I hope they rot. Anyone else that likes these bands, dont take it personally, its not about you. Read and review please.

R just in case so I dont get told off. This ones a little dramatic, maybe overdramatic but thats the point. Its about someone trying to deal with reality and such, probably about me. R & R please.

Note: This isnt a Haiku, I hate writing those, this is just a poem that may seem vaguely similar, its about life and its your problem if you dont get it, R&R plz :p

Experimental again, just my mind at times, maybe anger, I dont know, its a bit confusing this one. please RandR

Experimental, trying new style, I dont know or think it works well I just wanna know what you think RandR please

Inspired by a dream my dad told me he had, its really short, kind of weird, hopefully not really bad or messy, R&R please

A free form poem I think thats wrong but its about my feelings about love/life etc, I doubt anyone cares but just read and review and shaddap.

Contains swearing and stuff. Is about me at a party watching my friends get drunk, I dont mind drunkenness I was just cynical at the time

Has two cuss words, its mostly about life and random issues I have with it. Hopefully the formatting isnt too bad (F/P sucks with this) please Review it.

10/10 for english, its an abstract story about my feelings I guess, mostly about love (as always) but I like this one. Hopefully the formatting isnt scrooged.

Has some swearing in the chorus. I left the descriptions of what the sections are supposed to sound like. Lines show spacing cos Fictionpress doesnt seem to show spacing between paragraphs in my poems :S... Please R&R

This is a poem about love in general and its just an abstract representation of my feelings... I guess its also in a bit of a song format.. but you wont notice because the spacing in between lines is destroyed when I put this onto fictionpress.. please R&

One more poem about that girl I talk about in most of my poems. This one is probably the last one and I think it concludes it nicely.

Pretty much about society but more religion orientated. Hence the category

This may seem odd in the friendship section, but its about a stupid friend I have whos really selfish..

About the girl again I think.. yeah, it is

I still dunno why there is no spacing, but this is, once again, about that girl.

A fairly tame poem which I think was half a song..

About all those popular "individuals

I dont know why theres no spacing in between verses but this is when I was about to break at school.

Another poem about that girl

One of many poems about a girl that wont leave my head