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Joined 12-24-03, id: 389553, Profile Updated: 01-01-09
Author has written 67 stories for General, Life, Love, Politics, School, Essay, Young Adult, Religion, Family, and Friendship.

The Cinderella story revisted and edited

Ashes to Ashes
Dust to Dust
With heartbreak you need me
Forever you lust

The Belle of the Ball is a beauty unknown
The Prince awaits his future on the seat of his throne
She is the daughter of Mother Earth
Words cannot describe her worth

She is purity
She is venerable
She is charity
She is honorable

The Belle of the Ball is not blonde-haired and blue eyes
Her hair is the texture of the cotton over which her ancestors died
Her skin is the hue of the soil
In which her ancestors toiled

She is purity
She is venerable
She is charity
She is honorable

The Belle of the Ball is true royalty
Who will honor her black prince with peace of spirit and loyalty
Her eyes are dark water and her figure is all curved
The Belle of the Ball is the most beautiful woman on earth

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Dinner with family by AceOSpades reviews
A typical dinner at home ... gone horribly horribly wrong (extremely twisted poem warning).
Poetry: Family - Rated: M - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 939 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Published: 2/21/2006
The Church of Holy Prada by Akhenaten reviews
A poem from a girl's POV about women objectification. Come my sisters, let us worship/at the church of holy prada
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 347 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/31/2005
Notch by Youneek reviews
For all the girls that have ever been used...this one's for you. Explicit language, 3 stanzas. R+R please.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/19/2005
he was velvet by citrus scented reviews
and a hundred and ten unsaid words.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 72 - Favs: 55 - Published: 7/17/2005
White Girl Rhymes by Faithless Juliet reviews
I will never forget Christina’s gospel on hell.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 894 - Reviews: 35 - Favs: 10 - Published: 5/5/2005
skyline by Quirin reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/12/2005
Another Gay Marriage Essay by g21lto reviews
Read and be offended.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 886 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 12 - Published: 1/5/2005
A Man Drenched In Blood by c0nquestri0n reviews
The story of Christ... it's touching. His grace. R & R
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/1/2004
Sutra No 7Eleven by llorana reviews
Caitlin explores Tantric sex while undergoing chemotherapy
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,085 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/28/2004
Tell Nefertiti I have Nothing for her by K.A.-Neo-Souldier reviews
Admiration of African-American Women
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 444 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/17/2004
Incident by nikki o'neil reviews
Just a poem i had to write for english about racism between black and white people. Especially during the times of segregation. Get from it what you will, it still needs some work.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/4/2001
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If I Were a Boy
Inspired by Beyoncé's song but with a little bit different ideas...PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 702 - Published: 7/2/2009 - Complete
The Number 9
An exploration into numerology and the number 9's effect on my life.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 360 - Published: 6/19/2009 - Complete
More than love
Far greater feelings than most will ever know...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 399 - Published: 6/19/2009 - Complete
Mona Lisa reviews
Just wondering what that smile is all about!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/19/2009 - Complete
A Rough Draft of One's Feelings reviews
An initial look into how romance makes one feel...::CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM GREATLY APPRECIATED::
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/19/2009
Lessons in Faithlessness reviews
My cousin reviewed this poem and said "That poem is heavy...and it's gonna make me think." Come read and see if you feel the same-topics in love, friendship, and life. ::CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM GREATLY APPRECIATED::
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 937 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/19/2009 - Complete
A Poet's Task
Poet's pride themselves on being instruments of influence...but we are not the machine" A description of what a poet faces and how we are supposed to overcome the ills of society. :::CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM APPRECIATED:::
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Published: 4/29/2009 - Complete
I am the Honeybee reviews
I attempted to define myself-then I realized I was beyond definition.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/10/2009 - Complete
Love me for Real
Wedding vows neglect the most important aspect of love-that it be genuine. ::Constructive Criticism Greatly Appreciated::
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Published: 4/10/2009 - Complete
Treasure reviews
DAMN! I'm ::DEFINITELY:: in LOVE! ::Constructive Criticism Appreciated::
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/18/2009 - Complete
Love is a Difficult Game
Because not EVERYONE has a Valentine. ::Constructive Criticism Appreciated::
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Published: 2/6/2009 - Complete
Best Friend reviews
I finally decided that I need to tell you, how much I HATE YOU. This is a real situation that I went through recently. ::Constructive Criticism Greatly Appreciated::
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 244 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/29/2008 - Complete
Heartless reviews
Kanye asks how could she be so heartless. I decided to explain why. Please Read and Review! ::Constructive Criticism greatly apprecited!::
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/27/2008 - Complete
Accidental Seductress reviews
Damn...I didn't mean to make you want me...::Criticism appreciated:: It's a SexY poem! :
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/9/2008 - Complete
Born Fi Dead reviews
The title is Patois, a jamaican dialect, meaning 'born for dead'. It's a philosophical musing. ::Criticism is appreciated::
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/17/2008 - Complete
Testify! reviews
A poem about prejudice. ::All criticism appreciated::
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/20/2008 - Complete
A Thousand Words reviews
The saying goes that picture is worth a thousand words,but they could all be lies....::All criticism appreciated::
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/20/2008 - Complete
My Knight in Tainted Armor reviews
Love has a twin brother...can you guess his name? ::All criticism appreciated::
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/20/2008 - Complete
Worship ME reviews
I hate essay questions that ask if I have a role model. This explains exactly why.::All criticism appreciated::
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/20/2008
Affirmative Action v 20 reviews
They say it's just because she's black.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/5/2008 - Complete
Harlot in the Window reviews
I hate Christian whores.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Poetry/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/29/2006
Unsung Heroine reviews
ABORT IT! They say...but thank you,mother,for not listening.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/23/2006
I was Born to be a Racist reviews
Americans were born to discriminate.It's what we do best. -end sarcasm-
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/14/2006
Broken Love Song reviews
You forgot the part where you said you'd love me forever...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/22/2006
Like A VirginAgain reviews
It's called a hymenoplasty-an artificial hymen a woman can get implanted in case hers was broken swimming,bike riding...or losing her virginity.REVIEW
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 2/10/2006
Lost in a Second reviews
It's so eay to give into temptation isn't it?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/5/2006
Wool Over Our Eyes reviews
She said Christians are Blind Sheep.I say what is that blind sheep need to see?
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/5/2006
Anarchist's Song reviews
I am so anti-Bush administration.God,send us a Savior.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/4/2006
Lilith reviews
Adam's first wife never wanted to submit
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/27/2005
What About Her? reviews
The idea that a MAN should also decide whether or not a woman should have an abortion is absurd,right?
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 11/5/2005
George Bush Doesn't Care About Black People reviews
or anyone else for that matter.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/26/2005
Used Goods reviews
I've got something against whores and the men who take them.Love is not an excuse.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9/5/2005
Nobody's an Original reviews
The title says it all
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 261 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8/31/2005
Fluid reviews
Just a poem about how it's hard for me to fall in love with boys since the only man in my life(father) showed me that love just might not be genuine.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7/22/2005
Choices reviews
/Of boys and their desires/Ready to use me like a condom/Fill her with semen and then throw her away
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/20/2005
Corpus Christi reviews
Fellow believers in Christ,this one's for you-most likely will be considered offensive-based loosely on Romans 12:5
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/17/2005
How to be a Lady reviews
A short story about how girls act just to get the attention of boys.My how we've grown up...from Barbies to Boys.(R&R)
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,028 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 5/28/2005 - Published: 5/27/2005
Dancer,Dancer reviews
A poem about three friends and I.Three out of those four girls are no longer virgins.Which one am I?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 4/18/2005
Never Ever reviews
I told him I'd never break his heart.I lied.R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 4/12/2005
The Selfish Bitch reviews
What my mother thinks of me.Rate the poem,not the parent.
Poetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/12/2005
Religion is a Joke reviews
Don't rate me until you've read the whole poem through.And another thing,rate the poem,not the religion.Thank you
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/29/2005
My Boys Are Back! reviews
My friend is back from Drug Rehab after just a week. I wrote this poem because I missed him,but I still feel angry.Please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/21/2005
When I Last Saw Their Faces reviews
A poem about my two friends who got arrested two weeks ago. Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/19/2005
It's just a FETUS! reviews
PRO-LIFE BABY!YEAH!I am proud of this poem,and no one can bring me down.Especially since this poem does not reflect who I am,just how I feel.REVIEW PLZ
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/17/2005
God's Groupie reviews
I'm a Christian,not ashamed of it.I don't care about your scientific theories,disbelief,or blasphemy.Not even Satan could make me change my mind.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 6 - Published: 2/17/2005
Broken Doll reviews
I should have come in a box labeled 'handle with care'. you would have been gentle then.Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 2/16/2005
This February 14th reviews
This is my first V-day without a guy to bring me a teddybear and roses since the seventh grade.How do I feel?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/14/2005
Wade in the Water reviews
MY VERSION OF OLD NEGRO SPIRITUAL.It's freakin' great.PLEASE R&R
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/7/2005
Insanity is a Goddess reviews
my favorite poem EVER!Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 1/24/2005
The Blaze reviews
Watch as your words catch souls on fire,it looks pretty good to hurt others.But wait until that flame catches you.Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/17/2005
White Boyfriend reviews
This is a lil' "rap" is done by me.There was a temporary 'trend' at my school for the black girls to have white 'boyfriends'. The teachers were gladdened by our willingness to diversify.Please R&R
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 734 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/15/2004
I Believe reviews
This is the reason why I believe in God. For those who are more intellegent than me and more eloquent,this will seem a weak explanation.I'm not trying to influence anyone's beliefs or belittle them for it.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,284 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/11/2004
Yellow Earth reviews
How my African-American friends feel abut the new Chinese girl trying to be
Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10/25/2004
Pot Princess reviews
Marijuana smoke clouds in the sky/River of alcohol in front of my eyes/Drug Princess on her throne/Lots of pot being blown...A poem about the rise and fall of illegal intoxication.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/16/2004
The Remedy reviews
It's a poem that describes the difference between outer communication and internal being.The person you see is never the person within.So many deal with the conflict of hiding their true selves to impress others.Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/27/2004
A Girl Called Cutter reviews
I would like to start out by saying that I have never considered self mutilation or suicide,but if you have,I suggest you read this.I am guessing this is how those people feel. I wish someone would notice these scars as I cry for help rather than for atte
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/27/2004
Glass Girl reviews
If my love could see into my heart,it would be so much easier because I find it difficult to express my feelings through words and actions.R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8/3/2004
RAP Retards Attempting Poetry reviews
THis gothic boy told me how much rap music sucked.He was very bold considering I could have broken his ass like a twig. But I taught him a little thing or two about rock music that changed his tune completely.True story.Please R&r
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 437 - Reviews: 43 - Favs: 14 - Published: 7/7/2004
Seduction reviews
Title explains it all.Please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/6/2004
I AM reviews
A poem about who I am just so ya'll who are wonderin' finally know! PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5/30/2004
Earthbound reviews
Why give a bird wings,if they are meant to be flightless? I am a flightless bird who dreams of flight,and I wallow in my depression because I know I will never be able to fly.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/29/2004
Guilty reviews
I have a friend who is a rape victim and after hearing her explain how horrible she felt, I wrote this poem for her.Rape is not only "carnal knowledge of a woman without her consent" but also the robbery of innocence.R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 2/28/2004
Beautiful Dreamer reviews
Every time that I look down t my baby,a feeling of divine serenity creeps over me.I don't want this beautiful dreamer to wake from her dreams,in fear that something will corrupt her.R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2/26/2004
Tupac reviews
Is Tupac really dead?One girl's encounter with the famous man shows what he may be thinkin' and feelin' wherever he is.R&R.PG:13 bcuz of cuss word
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/25/2004
Disgrace to yo Race reviews
Poem about Affirmative Action and how it lowers the bar for minorities and pratically eliminates the easy way in for the majority.Read and Review
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 1/24/2004
Wings reviews
Freedom is what we all desire. How long does it take for us to spread our wings and fly to that glorious place called freedom?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 307 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12/24/2003
The Last Rose reviews
meant for the girls in your life who mean alot to you.Your sister,best friend,mother,wife,etc.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/24/2003