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Joined 01-07-04, id: 391703
Author has written 122 stories for Life, War, General, Love, Song, Religion, General, Fantasy, Friendship, Essay, Haiku, and Politics.
Well, my poetry has changed a lot since I first got this account, and for the better, I hope. Some of my newer things I know aren't good, and the same goes for most of my old stuff. But I use fictionpress as a sort of catalogue for my poetry, so I can watch it grow (or diminish, but, either way).As is, I highly suggest my newer things, such as the Jillian Porter series of poems.

- These poems are my best!
#- These poems are good
-Nothing means I'm not fond of it or it needs editing (these ones need critique the most! The others are more for your enjoyment.)

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In the Garden by Dinosaurie reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/10/2006 - Complete
Somehow by Frederick Beaudoin reviews
The realisation of one's self is a beautiful experience.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/13/2006
If Only Puppets Knew Romance by Woody S reviews
About romance.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 323 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/22/2005
Wanderer by Dinosaurie reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/10/2005 - Complete
Intoxication by Dinosaurie reviews
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Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/30/2004 - Complete
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hope at last reviews
From watching the inaugural address and trying to summarize everything for myself.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/20/2009 - Complete
Girl
It's not always simple, even when it should be. A villanelle.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
The Sensations
What defines the sensations? In many cases, synesthesia. An older piece.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
String
Remembering innocent things. A lot of the formatting has been lost.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
and then today happened reviews
When days just grow into something fanged.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
SkinClad Love
Interracial couples and the problems with being "colorblind".
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Poetry reviews
My ars poetica.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Penelope
Penelope's response to Ulysses by Tennyson.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 581 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
our love reviews
Some loves or all loves?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Named reviews
We don't always see people when we don't want to. If we try and forget that they exist, might they forget as well? A sonnet.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Morning Yoga
How and why we live in morning.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Julia's Pantoum
Dedicated to Julia. Be well. A pantoum.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
I
Who are you, Women? Who am I, woman? A pantoum.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Essay on MakeBelieve
Sometimes we pretend not to see
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Ballad of the Indian Maiden reviews
Why do we fetishize blue eyes? A racialist perspective. A ballad.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Two Lips and My Knees reviews
Inspired by the idea of Tulips and Chimneys by E.E. Cummings. or ee cummings, if you prefer . A pantoum.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Summer reviews
Summer romances and summer friends.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
River
In memory of Z.M.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 319 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Mourning Sounds
An ars poetica, of sorts. Why do we read and write poetry?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Freya
Completely personal and universal. The story of love and Love.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
The Daphne Tree
A mixture of experience, mythology, and the inspiration of Gerard Manley Hopkins. A modified sonnet.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Centerfold reviews
Sensuality and sexuality. A pantoum.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
because not all rivers rush
Examining sensuality, motherhood, and earthiness.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Persephone's Pantoum reviews
Looking at the story of Persephone with a new lens. A pantoum.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
Are all war poems hymns?
Contemplating the difference or sameness of news and poetry.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
I in turn breathe America reviews
I've marked this as complete although I don't know that it will ever be complete. An honest look at America and how I fit into it. btw Why hasn't fictionpress yet figured out that they should allow indented lines?
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 718 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/28/2008 - Complete
On Snow Watch reviews
Do you ever watch snowfall and hope to find the two elusive, identical flakes you have been told don't exist? A reflective combination of two small forces in my life currently: transcendentalism and contemplating the bonds between people.A difficult read.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/14/2008 - Complete
The Me of Man reviews
A compact version of human experience.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 751 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/7/2008 - Complete
The Dorian Orchid reviews
Vanity and corruption: beauty and experience. See if you can put it all together.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/18/2007 - Complete
Chemical Oblivion
Outoftouch and drunk.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Published: 9/30/2007 - Complete
The Turtle and the Clam
A children's poem, in many ways, and deeper and others. It has a moral and animal characters, so think fable!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 567 - Published: 9/20/2007 - Complete
Once I dreamed I was a fish reviews
Sometimes seemingly lower ambitions are more awesome than others.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/16/2007 - Complete
Radioactive tsvetki
This is a renga, and appropriate style, I think, to address the doomsday implications of the unguarded, untracked weapons of old nuclear powers. Some Russian contained within. Transliterated, the Cyrillic sound like: Tsvetki idut sneg.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - Spanish - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Published: 9/16/2007 - Complete
Freezer Aisle Antics
I'm not sure why we did it, and I should probably be angrier at myself than I am.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Published: 8/21/2007 - Complete
Jade Coffee: My Ego Trip
Idealism doesn't last very long when plans to make changes start to just change you instead. But, not too pessimistic.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 457 - Published: 8/20/2007 - Complete
New Orleans' Haze reviews
Not a lot to say on this one. Reflection and projection. New Orleans, past, present, and future, a little bit.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/16/2007 - Complete
War Song
I didn't think war was an appropriate category, although it is kind of about war. It's more about people and relationships.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 413 - Published: 5/4/2007 - Complete
Insomniac Toast reviews
What makes you stay up late, why can't you sleep, what do you learn? villanelle
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/4/2007 - Complete
Insomniac Knowledge
What makes you stay up late, why can't you sleep, what do you learn? sonnet
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Published: 5/4/2007 - Complete
Insomniac
What makes you stay up late, why can't you sleep, what do you learn? Free form
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Published: 5/4/2007 - Complete
What I Want: Longing for Straight Lines reviews
The story of someone longing to be in a different body, feeling out of place in what they have. I'm sure everyone has felt something close to this...this is just a little more severe.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/4/2007 - Complete
Mother reviews
Deermother delinquent: you're 40 and still unlearned.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/1/2007 - Complete
My Yellow Rhapsody
Bass strings, jazz, and yellow music...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/8/2007 - Complete
Urbanite Fishing reviews
My first attempt at urban poetry. As it turns out, urban poetry, to me, does not come with any structure or form, really. It's wild, chaotic, but has a rhythm like a heartbeat and a rhyme like a song.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/6/2006 - Complete
The Gravel Quarry reviews
If you've ever been to a quarry, I'm sure you can appreciate this. If not...go as soon as possible.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/26/2006 - Complete
FireMen
Book burning, word-killing, ashy, eaten, gone.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Published: 10/8/2006
How Gneiss It All Is
How gneiss it all is...insightful, and a great excuse for a pun.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Published: 9/26/2006
Velvet Tongue reviews
There's something very comforting about listening to the fluidity of another language...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/21/2006
Allies 101: Homophobia and Heterosexism reviews
An exploratative essay about how hard it is to come to terms with one's sexuality when it defies convention...one person's struggle.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,613 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/18/2006
I listen to your story like I’ve listened to all
Everything is somehow about unreciprocated giving and taking...and people pick a rule and enjoy it.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 332 - Published: 9/17/2006
I, Icarus Phaeton reviews
Aborted flight ends in the over-constructed world of order.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 241 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/16/2006
Jillian Porter Faces God
Another Jillian Porter poem
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Published: 8/9/2006
Jillian Porter and the Aborted Flight
The blur of child in an adult obscures the severity of everything...or something
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Published: 7/8/2006
The Face of God reviews
Written after watching American Beauty...and it shows. Incomplete...it needs lots o'editing.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2006
Jillian Porter and the Cradle of Stars reviews
I've been fascinated with string tricks lately...and hand clap rhymes. I think I miss childhood a little too much...or maybe I'm just in love with Jillian Porter.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/11/2006
Omnipotent Wings reviews
Just sit back and enjoy the flight.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/4/2006
Lecherous Breath
The approach of age, cynicism, and greed...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Published: 4/26/2006
Limestone Erosion reviews
Why do people talk about hopes and dreams "shattering? Should such things share the physical properties of glass?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/16/2006
Prometheus reviews
I'm not sure these are allowed on here, but the rules didn't say anything about it. This is a translation of Goethe's Prometheus. Enjoy.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 271 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/8/2006
Revelation reviews
Thought about "Religion" category, decided no...think Hollow Men and ee cummings...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 394 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/30/2006
Irreversibility reviews
Just check it out. I hate summarizing short things.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 350 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/28/2006
Jillian Porter Spins Into Grace reviews
Jillian Porter makes me so nostalgic...I love her so much. You should read her series.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/27/2006
Jillian Porter and the Chestnut Tree reviews
Those who dare consume innocence...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/5/2006
Jillian Porter, Pirate of Time reviews
Introducing Jillian Porter, the core of our souls, ageless, aged, and, more than anything else, our free spirits.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 381 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/25/2006
The Great Glass Ceiling
The invisible barrier keeping us down...do we even know it's there? (I swear, it's better than the summary...how do you summarize a poem)
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Published: 2/13/2006
Ozone Black reviews
I feel like the beginning of this might be a little too obvious...so, I'm going to work on it a little. I was listening to a Rachmaninoff piece when I wrote this, and I could smell black and lightning in it...that sweet smell in the air after a lightning
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/25/2005
Fire Lust reviews
You be the judge
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/27/2005
Exhaling Love Taps reviews
Warning: Homosexual reference and drug use- not smutty
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 842 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/6/2005
Vainty's Dominion reviews
Manipulation...ah, wish I could have found a place for that word in the title
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/16/2005
Hail to Atlantis reviews
Hail to the drowned city and the sunken dead
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/26/2005
Factory of Fears reviews
Everybody's going to smile...
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/13/2005
Racoon Eyes
Drama queens, I know thew secret of your lips and your lies. And, of course, you indulgent racoon eyes.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 221 - Published: 7/8/2005
Son of Kakranz
Gulrich is an or4c who lives in the above as punishment for his childhood transgression. He seeks revenge and for the man who killed his clan.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 399 - Published: 6/22/2005
Anticipation of Flight reviews
I've done so much...fallen through so many things...and I'm leaving it to fly.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/6/2005
The Drowning Climb reviews
Working hard, thinking you're gaining, achieving- and not knowing you were failing
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/13/2005
Rhythm Durge reviews
What man marches to death without feeling or cause is even rhythm unbroken by fear?
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/5/2005
Shallow Dance
A sort of...analogy of humanity
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Published: 12/11/2004
The Painter's Digression reviews
All creator's are called to an underlying theme: death. Why is destruction more tempting to creators than life?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/4/2004
Second Redemption reviews
At a bar in a small Latino section of a big city, a woman relates her troubles of watching the second coming and second redemption. This story is not quite ready, yet. I'm still editing and revising, so critique is encouraged.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,358 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/18/2004
One Day of Creation
Your mind runs wild and pulls new worlds to the surface of your thought...and you create them in your writing, make them exist: and then leave them in Limbo.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 436 - Published: 10/18/2004
Build Your Cage
Ms. Thompkins traps herself in her routine...and when it is broken, she becomes Lydia, again, the facade of 'mother' shattered. She can only seek comfort in the one, impersonal mother she has left.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,138 - Published: 10/18/2004
Sacrifical Menstruation reviews
This is difficult to summarize. Let me just say, for you not so deep readers out there, that it is not actually about women's periods. It's quite sad that I have to say that. I hope that at least writing something will encourage someone to read it. Maybe
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/18/2004
Psalm of the Chaste Sheep
When the world tells you to fear big things and you obey, you've as good as sacrificed yourself for unfaithful ideologgies. The reasoning of one such sacrifice.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Published: 10/18/2004
Apocalypse reviews
A classic piece of rise and falling tension, promising to be repeated in an allegory of hirtory's repetition.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 421 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/15/2004
You are My Gift reviews
A song about unrequitted love
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 459 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1/18/2004
Forever Withdrawn reviews
Withdrawn into her mind, she can not accpet the world within or without, nor can she allow herself to know her love.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/12/2004
Ziggurat reviews
Temples are barricades, great nemeses, only thieves, and a dragon is standing in greedy wait for the plunder
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1/8/2004
Draining the Dregs reviews
A piece of the divine falls to earth, and wonders how the world of man will receive it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/8/2004
The Millenium Crusade reviews
Wars of religion plague the orld throughout time, Gods fighting their battles with Men.
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/8/2004
The Death Angels reviews
At war, men crown themselves heroes and messengers of God, when truly it is only death to their like of men they bring.
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/8/2004
Nightmare Cave reviews
#- Your mind is where secrets are revealed about the world, and, thus, nightmares are brewed (needs editing)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/8/2004
The Weeping Willow Tree
#- The cause of death cries for those it kills, yet is praised by those who have lived long for the young one's altruistic deaths. (easy ## with editing...I already have a perfect iambic tetrameter figured out, if I would jsut get around to editing...)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Published: 1/8/2004
The Whistled Durge
#- Following a pointless love and finding worse things on that road. (editing necessary)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Published: 1/8/2004
The Sweep of Days reviews
##- Time and pointless waste suck you dry of years
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/8/2004
The Sacred Grove
#- Everyone needs a place to call their own. Mine is described in the following: natural Heaven.(an easy ## with a little editing)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Published: 1/8/2004
The Horn and the Battle
- The weak ones of an up and coming battle hear the war cry of the enemy. (potential with lots of editing? I can't tell...)
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Published: 1/8/2004
The Death of Dido reviews
- The story of Aeneas and Dido's tragic love, and Dido's pyre and curse on him.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 343 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/8/2004
Purgatory
- Okay, it's not great.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Published: 1/8/2004
My China Cup reviews
# - Mankind's hearts may be captivated easily, but the power is frail (needs editing)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/8/2004
Feeble, Flowing Lullabies reviews
# - People cripple the great to the point where they are no better than anyone else, and praise the 'humbled man'
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/8/2004
Drunken Souls reviews
# - The enlightened man rises from the drear of cave-life, but who knows enough to envy him? (needs editing)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/8/2004
The King's of Democracy reviews
- (I used to be such an angry liberal...not really now, but I just hate war, I guess) America's hypocrisy
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1/8/2004
A World so Small reviews
# - War has become a form of entertainment. Who's laughing? (I was tempted to give this nothing, but there are some good lines amid the rubbish)
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/8/2004
A Soldier's Grave and Wake reviews
- In war, no dead are mourned
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/8/2004
A Sea of Other's Blood
# - When life becomes a war, and you're on the living's side (pretty good)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Published: 1/8/2004
A God is Felled
# - How man is viewed from those of a divine perspective. (over wordy)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Published: 1/8/2004
To Walk Alone
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Published: 1/7/2004
The Price of Paradise
# - I was reluctant to give this one anything, but there's potential beneath a lot of bad language
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Published: 1/7/2004
The Dust of Body reviews
# - Needs editing...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/7/2004
The Independent Man's War reviews
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Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/7/2004
The Unreal Orchards
- Longing for fiction
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Published: 1/7/2004
Plowing the Sky
# - This was needs mondo editing
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Published: 1/7/2004
O, Sweet Life reviews
- This should be taken ironically.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/7/2004
Mob Mentality
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Published: 1/7/2004
Minotaur
# - running from the minotaur
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Published: 1/7/2004
Let Them Lie reviews
- none
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/7/2004
The Reality of Fiction
- Read the title
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Published: 1/7/2004
Of Gold and Greed reviews
# - War caused by greed for riches beyond human's reach
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/7/2004
The Deprevation of the Wounds reviews
# - Lies, pain, and war sound sweet at first
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/7/2004
Cries Ring Out
- Thoughts in my mind, from a broken home
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Published: 1/7/2004
The Hazing of the Dreams reviews
- This poem inspired my name. It's not great, but don't read it for the poetry, then. Read it for what it means.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/7/2004
Earthen Tomb reviews
## - This poem is very personal to me, but I believe it alo shares a common sort of truth. The writing style may sound like Millay, because her 'Renascence' helped inspire its writing.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/7/2004