Dying Flames
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Joined 01-12-04, id: 392598
Author has written 4 stories for Life, Religion, Romance, and Love.

Visit Dreambig's fictionpress account! She has some pretty poetry.

Smile for the camera everyone! *takes picture*

... Yeah. That's about it.


Do you need or want a copy editor?

My sister and I are available as an editing team. As a member of my school's yearbook staff, I'm a grammar Nazi and anything that gets by me is caught by my sister. We both check for tense, punctuation, spelling and clarity. If anything is unclear, we will leave a note within the work that we will highlight or bold in parentheses, depending on what you would prefer us to do. After you revise your work, we will happily re-edit.

On a more concise note, my sister and I are available as editors. These are aspects of your work we will check:
General Editing
- Spelling
- Punctuation
- Grammar (Yes, we're those folks who are bothered by
incorrect usage of "your, you're, they're, their and there.")
General revision
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Clarity
- Awkward sentence flow
- Tense
- Repetition
- Redundancy
- Usage

Under the general editing category, we will simply change those errors, while under the revision category, we will usually highlight or leave a comment.

The most important aspect of our service is that we simply wish to provide help if you'd like it. Feel free to e-mail me at [email protected] or my sister at [email protected].

(By the way, I attend Kapaun Mt. Carmel. Our journalism staff does relatively well at nationals and we have won State Journalism Awards repeatedly.)


Projects

The Secret Ingredient
- Chapter 11 in the process of being edited
- Chapter 12 plot in progress

Author Notes:
- I'm going to try to update at least once a week, but my life has suddenly gotten a lot busier. I'm sorry for the lack of updates, considering I started off updating almost every day.
- I feel really bad for giving you guys a shorter chapter, but I have 11 on the way. Sorry!

Nessa-Belle087: I really appreciate all of your support. It means a lot to me.
Pixietrouble: Thank you. ^_^
Emily-x:
Psshaw!


Finished

Waiting
When I wrote this poem, I was imagining a girl who died and went to the gates of Heaven. There, she pleaded with St. Peter to sit with him and watch the mortals down on Earth until the one she loved died and came to Heaven. Sitting there with St. Peter, she had hoped to see the people she left behind live happy, good lives. Instead she saw nothing but pain everywhere she turned. She especially watched the boy she loved, but has become overcome with pain, realizing he isn't going to make it to Heaven because of how he's intentionally hurting other people.

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False Facades by Maeven reviews
Sam Westlane is the new kid in the famous all boys Crestan High School for the rich and the spoiled ... There's only one problem. Sam is a girl.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 30 - Words: 114,525 - Reviews: 7268 - Favs: 6,335 - Follows: 987 - Updated: 1/5/2009 - Published: 9/5/2003 - Complete
In the Shadow of Obsidian Empire by Katie-Maude reviews
Entering her final year of high school, Kaitlyn Anderson has everything going for her, but it isn't easy being perfect. As her life starts to fall apart, she turns to the least likely person, Ash Stevens. COMPLETE. Has been plagiarized see profile.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 74,692 - Reviews: 187 - Favs: 303 - Follows: 55 - Updated: 7/9/2008 - Published: 1/14/2006 - Complete
Catch Me When I Fall by cynically amused reviews
I swear I'm not a peeping tom, I just happened to lock myself out of my apartment! I was only trying to get my neighbor's attention, how was I suppose to know he would only be wearing a towel? CHAPTER 7
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 16,804 - Reviews: 305 - Favs: 139 - Follows: 174 - Updated: 4/29/2008 - Published: 5/26/2006
Web of Lies by Polished Gem reviews
COMPLETE! The group is a popular clique with secrets that would make new girl, Lynne, turn in her grave. They're lying, scheming, and cruel to the core. She's irresistibly drawn to the moody Denny, but is he only playing with her too? (SkoW Award)
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 39 - Words: 186,801 - Reviews: 963 - Favs: 576 - Follows: 77 - Updated: 9/29/2006 - Published: 2/25/2006 - Complete
The Colour of Rain by MxNxM reviews
On a rainy day, Nikki sits next to a regular man on a bus Or so she thought. As a love starts to form and secrets begin to unfold, there's no telling how this story will end. Read And REVIEW PLEASE!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,864 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 7 - Updated: 8/1/2006 - Published: 11/15/2005
An Enchantment: The Ice Maiden by Silver-Dragon5 reviews
EARTH 2070: Trapped, frozen in the ice for 65 years, she came as a surprise find to Connor. Now that she has been revived, can they find out who she is? And when she refuses to be treated by anyone but Connor, will something more grow between them?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 7 - Words: 12,459 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 4 - Updated: 6/28/2006 - Published: 1/11/2006
The One I Loath by french-girl reviews
Trent and Sophie have known and hated each other most of their lives. Will a weekend reveal their true feelings? COMPLETE!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 21 - Words: 34,065 - Reviews: 54 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 6/12/2006 - Published: 7/25/2005 - Complete
Lady Laverne by OneGirlRevolution311 reviews
[COMPLETE] Laverne's parents expect her to attend a ball and marry. She can't stand the thought of marrying anyone, but when she attends the ball she falls in love with the prince...there is only one problem. Does the prince love her?
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 21,189 - Reviews: 65 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/12/2006 - Published: 11/11/2004
Stealing Madison by Vaeleska reviews
NEW CHAPTER 32! Madison Carter and Jason Curtis. Sworn enemies. The pair were separated for 6 years, until now. With her best friend, Nathan King, confessing feelings for her, and Jason back in her life, Madison has to choose. Childhood enemy? or Bestie?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 32 - Words: 114,799 - Reviews: 1626 - Favs: 625 - Follows: 98 - Updated: 4/26/2006 - Published: 2/5/2005
Everybody Hates Logan by Myrika reviews
Spin-off of Against All Odds. Logan Henderson has it all: looks, money, and brains. Or so that's what people think. His life's going down the drain, and he doesn't know how to stop it. //REMOVED//
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 3,828 - Reviews: 3321 - Favs: 1,297 - Follows: 115 - Updated: 4/19/2006 - Published: 10/18/2005 - Complete
Pierced by Polished Gem reviews
COMPLETE: Bri wasn't looking for love when someone unexpectedly summons Cupid on her behalf. She's only looking to fix her life. She ends up falling for the one guy she can't have: Cupid himself. And Ares is hot on his heels to reap destruction.
Fiction: Mythology - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 42 - Words: 93,756 - Reviews: 430 - Favs: 549 - Follows: 78 - Updated: 2/14/2006 - Published: 1/4/2006 - Complete
Things So Hidden by Azure Volant reviews
COMPLETED...Ayla, the new girl, is sarcastic and sharp-tongued. A verbal battle in class with the popular and equally sarcastic Christian leads to friendship, love and, ultimately, something that she never wanted to happen again...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 33 - Words: 66,142 - Reviews: 1150 - Favs: 827 - Follows: 93 - Updated: 12/2/2005 - Published: 9/23/2003
Our Midnight Playground by Larentia reviews
COMPLETE! He accelerated on the popularity bar, leaving her behind. After years, their eyes were connecting in the hall, bringing past memories wanting to be forgotten. Coincidences brought them together. A feeling much more than friendship.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 21 - Words: 58,326 - Reviews: 324 - Favs: 158 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 10/11/2005 - Published: 8/11/2005
Petals by Danielle Night reviews
COMPLETE In nineteenth century London, it isn't considered proper for a young lady to send flowers to a healthy young bachelor. But when Adrian Morey receives a bouquet with a challenge, he can't help but be intrigued.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 18 - Words: 35,743 - Reviews: 926 - Favs: 1,799 - Follows: 152 - Updated: 9/1/2005 - Published: 1/23/2005 - Complete
To Become a Suitable Heroine by pixy-dizzy reviews
Win the Heroine Contest and you can win the Prince's hand in marriage. Unfortunately for all those wannabe-heroines, the prince has other plans. So does our particular heroine. NOW COMPLETE
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Parody/Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 96,469 - Reviews: 1477 - Favs: 1,115 - Follows: 167 - Updated: 8/11/2005 - Published: 12/6/2003 - Complete
Dancing by Zibeltor reviews
Experiment
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 398 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/1/2004
NonSerious Hostage Situation by Miss Blade reviews
Sami has been taken hostage by some of England's best art theives. She's not allowed to go home, but then again, does she want to? *COMPLETED*
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 56,812 - Reviews: 524 - Favs: 185 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 5/30/2003 - Published: 4/18/2003
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The Secret Ingredient reviews
There was something in the rolls . . . something that had made them not only delicious, as most of the variety were, but utterly and devastatingly addictive. They were just like her, he thought—sweet, sumptious and completely addictive.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 23,817 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/29/2006 - Published: 6/11/2006
Waiting reviews
She waits and she waits, but he'll never come. He can't come. He's lost to her.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/29/2006
Angel Kisses reviews
Self Explanatory. Read and Review!
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/12/2004
Recycled Tears reviews
Just a poem. Bitter sweet.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/12/2004