Dhul Fiqar
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Joined 01-20-04, id: 393854
Author has written 1 story for Fantasy.

Where to start where to start...

I have a completed story running to sixty chapters and 200,000 words. But I haven;t put it up here because its undergoing extensive re-write. Sorry. My current fictionpress project is called 'The Twist' and is hopefully something really original. Hopefully. Its jsut up now and at Chapter 3, but I am working hard at extending it. I probably won't rewirte any sections until about Chapter 10 or so... if my concentration lasts that long. Anyway, reviews still appreciated, and I'll try and give your stuff a look in...

Heres a quick summary of 'The Twist.'

Mike Jacobs is fourteen, and living in a town affectionately referred to as 'the Dump.' One morning he wakes up paralyzed in his bed, to find that time has effectively stopped. There is man in his room as well, a man who claims that he can start time up again. As Mike's ceiling is halfway through caving in, this is really not good... So he agrees to work for the man in exchange for his life. Once the deal is made, he blacks out. When he wakes up he's a year in the future, a year after a mysterious event called 'the Twist.' Most adults have disappeared. The kids have formed brutal gangs and faction, and there are creatures called Twisted running the streets. Electric don't work properly, the laws of physics seem to have given up and gone home, and there are strange lights in the sky and weird scorched marks over derelict buildings. Food is running out all over the town, the waters been poisoned, and a sinister gang is getting more and more powerful. Mike has no idea what's caused it all, but he has a nagging feeling that he's supposed to sort it all out...

More summaries will go up if I have more fics, but for now, enjoy.

~Dhul Fiqar

The Twist reviews
Mike Jacobs was just an ordinary fourteen year old, and then cut he a deal with the Stranger. Now he's a year in the future, a year after the whole world has been drastically altered. If only he knew what was going on... See Profile for Full Summary.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 5 - Words: 10,984 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10/11/2007 - Published: 10/3/2007