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Joined 01-23-04, id: 394305, Profile Updated: 04-07-11
Author has written 73 stories for Life, Love, Friendship, Humor, General, General, Fantasy, Romance, and Young Adult.

I am aware this sounds slightly aggressive but:

I want my poetry to be judged - not me. Criticise my poetry, tell me how to make it sound better. But do not criticise me. I am not here to be judged as a person. I only want to be judged as a poet. I am not here to become a better person, just a better writer. I'll do the rest in everyday life.

I don't know what my style is and I don't know who I am sometimes.

But I'll get there in the end.

Visit my blog One More Little Line for a new daily poem

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grow up & go by none of burt's beeswax reviews
they say no one is to blame, but i can't help feeling like we are all at fault.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 496 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 4 - Published: 4/2/2007 - Complete
24 over insomnia by she's not breathing reviews
it's the number i hate, the hours i can't sleep away. one day. one year. you are everything, but you don't know how tangled i still am.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 24 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 218 - Favs: 69 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 3/25/2007 - Published: 3/25/2006 - Complete
Listening to thistles by in theory reviews
No idea, but it must have made sense eventually. (nature is so sexual..)
Poetry: Nature - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/16/2006
To a Former Ally by youzi reviews
for old times' sake
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/15/2006
Avalon by Philip Ellis reviews
Lonely figures on windy hillsides. Ghosts, tears, cigarettes and love.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,361 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/14/2006
tiara things & sad boy flings by none of burt's beeswax reviews
everyone said i was too beautiful for you.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 338 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 26 - Published: 2/13/2006 - Complete
Static Dreams by classic violet reviews
I'm having these s.t.a.t.i.c d.r.e.a.m.s in my basement.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 3 - Published: 2/2/2006
this kind of forever love by chaos called creation reviews
galactic proportion of your heart. [re-edited]
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 281 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 5 - Published: 1/22/2006
Sound by Kezkay reviews
How do you explain sound to one who cannot hear? A short poem with heavy imagery and a little touch of irony.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 4 - Published: 1/4/2006
The Roses Fall by AchtungBabyAchtung reviews
Takes the form of a sonnet, just started writing it when procrastinating my english essay...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/3/2006
Once Again by cave shadows reviews
you said not to hide anything from you, so here is my traditional fp poem
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/21/2005
Its the silence that always breaks me by Faithless Juliet reviews
My spirituality tells me to love unconditionally; but to must religions that is a sin.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 431 - Reviews: 44 - Favs: 7 - Published: 11/28/2005
Black Walnuts by Gala Ate the Sky reviews
this is a summary.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/24/2005
altogether instantaneous by la nuit mes yeux t'eclairent reviews
(i loved you like a foreign country.) the last effort, i think.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/18/2005
The Big Picture by Theory Of The 4th Dimension reviews
Try a more universal perspective on things. My first attempts at haiku.=P
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/8/2005
Crash by clockwork kiss reviews
i'm too angry for metaphors.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 7 - Published: 8/7/2005 - Complete
you run like a ballerina by shmoo reviews
but he was a good soccer player
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 4 - Published: 8/3/2005
The Art Teacher by Philip Ellis reviews
Renaissance paintings and stolen moments after class. "Life imitating art imitating life."
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/25/2005
Interstellar Consumption by Yaquel Visain reviews
A distant planet smothered with my humble saliva...
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/19/2005
his mind is like by Escapist reviews
Exponential decay. Lilac trees. Music so loud that it disrupts any natural functions.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 4 - Published: 5/15/2005
Purge your imperfections by citrus scented reviews
'You can hate yourself, but darling you'll never hate me' when he said that I just about went crazy
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 9 - Published: 5/10/2005
Burn by Dolphin1721 reviews
Sometimes, even when they hurt you, you can't seem to walk away
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/3/2004
FACE THE MUSIC by ROMAN EMPEROR reviews
Relationships...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/25/2004
The Sex Poem by Anime Girl 666 reviews
Don't ask. Please, just don't ask...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/18/2002
Break It Loose, Woman! by Megan reviews
Scream! Yell! Shriek! Spit! Stop keeping your sadness hidden!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/22/2001
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Paula reviews
...
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,530 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/9/2010 - Complete
Dancing reviews
this silver lining
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/25/2008 - Complete
Hitchike reviews
travel through it.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5/23/2007 - Complete
Thaw reviews
older piece.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/6/2007 - Complete
Breathe, breathe reviews
steam of words
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/11/2007 - Complete
Blackcurrant reviews
You move on in some ways, but some things are set in stone.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/12/2007 - Complete
Oil reviews
All encompassing.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1/30/2007 - Complete
Purge reviews
I haven't time.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12/12/2006 - Complete
More reviews
Fairly old. I was always unsure about it. You decide.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 281 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/12/2006 - Complete
Two AM reviews
The pain of loss is not great enough for regretPolite critiques would be wonderful on this one, firstly because it's my first piece in a while and secondly because I'd like to give it to someone hence if you know me, do not read it please.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/5/2006 - Complete
Burst reviews
our space is anything but empty
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9/19/2006
Outside reviews
I guess fear just makes me think of spring. Another for someone who may never see it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8/23/2006
Headphones reviews
start broadcasting out; begin to hear
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/6/2006
Little Poems reviews
a collection of smaller tidbits and odd ends of poetry
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 7 - Words: 353 - Reviews: 25 - Published: 7/17/2006
Diamonds and Plastic reviews
pulse pulse pulse
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/12/2006
Modern Art reviews
One-shot. A girl replays a doomed relationship. Contains themes of self harm, sex and suicide (the three s's)
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,036 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/6/2006
Hard Candy reviews
broken bottles shattered on railings after long nights on pub crawls (very red).
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 5/31/2006
City Rain reviews
I am your product. You just say I'm perfect.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 5/27/2006
Tattoo reviews
Ok so it's a bit cheesy but sometimes there is a limit to writing, tried to express that. And anyway it's a nice break from being bleak and cynical :)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/21/2006
Tankas reviews
5-7-5-7-7 no title (an unrelated collection)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 5/16/2006 - Published: 1/29/2006
Snakeskin reviews
vetch: an english wildflower. Who knows.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 255 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5/9/2006
Athena reviews
broken-glass beautiful
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 4/27/2006
Cling reviews
can't decide how much I like it, but it's been hanging around long enough that I should let someone else decide.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4/19/2006
s c r e a m reviews
oh yeah
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/19/2006
Ultraordinary reviews
Fake words and forged opinions are tedious.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/9/2006
Apocalocyntosis reviews
: the act of being turned into a pumpkin. Aha, magic.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 4/5/2006
New Day reviews
Label me.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 346 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/2/2006
Everyday Reincarnation reviews
White light before you can arise, blink, open your eyes on me
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 3/13/2006
Summer's End reviews
It's the most beautiful things that break us. Tweaked repost from a long time ago.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 779 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/12/2006
Fading Glitter reviews
love and age. Man, I wish I was Shakespeare.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 3 - Published: 3/12/2006
Stand to fall apart reviews
what next? (somehow she reminds me of me, not in actions but thought processes) I almost want to write a sequel.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,423 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/12/2006
This is called Determinism reviews
Everybody who’d ever seen him naked fell head-over-heels in love with his hipbones.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 1,293 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/2/2006
Ever After reviews
I forgave him.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 2/23/2006
Shampoo Promises reviews
therapeutic...I won't like it in a week but it sums up how bitter but determined I feel just now.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/11/2006
Finger Music reviews
Well, pretty much all of us do it right? Light-hearted and simple.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 2/8/2006
Hematomancy reviews
hematomancy: divination using blood (I can see the future)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 278 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/31/2006
More Peter Rabbit reviews
Secret messages, eh? I've got this he said she said thing going on, and this is growing on me.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 291 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 1/29/2006
Choke reviews
take off the rose tinted glasses, though you'll still see her the same (and wished you could help.)
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/24/2006
helplessly Untitled reviews
it's true, sometimes you just cannot find the words. Had to get it out of my system, I wanted more emphasis but I'm sick of formatting.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 1/18/2006
Because you broke Mine reviews
I hope he reads it...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 1/13/2006
Snapshot reviews
fascinated with everything.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 1/7/2006
Touched reviews
I realised that in my desperation for you to live up to what I wanted...I made you more than what you are.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/5/2006
His Misogyny reviews
I muse about a friend; this came out differently than I expected. Rather like we did. It must be said this is not a poem of heartbreak, more of that ache of not-knowing.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 1/3/2006
If You Can reviews
this is like an insult
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 12/30/2005
Sunburn reviews
some people just make you live, don't they?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 12/30/2005
Pray reviews
this is hard to explain. All I can say is I feel like the weaker link in my relationship - I dream of other lives - but there is nobody I want more and nothing I want more. Just a little confused.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/27/2005
Payback? reviews
It's how you know you're up and over them. Old piece.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12/24/2005
kills curiosity reviews
I always was curious, and I always liked this one.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/24/2005
Could Have reviews
if I had, we'd have burned ourselves so spectacularly out. I tried to express the words as actions in writing if that mades sense...like exploding flowing out, and burst expanding, falling. Guess you'll have to read it to understand what I'm on about :)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12/22/2005
Hopscotch reviews
forced to grow up too fast, look how I've changed. Who'd have thought society would have that effect?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 3 - Published: 12/21/2005
Til Morning reviews
Extract from a larger story about the extraordinary in the ordinary. F-f sexual content but nothing explicit, I'd appreciate r+r on this one and return reviews.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,213 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12/21/2005
Lovebound reviews
written a long time ago, guilt when feelings die
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12/21/2005
Meat reviews
deals with sexual abuse/harassment. I got more angry as I wrote this. Can be read with or without the brackets.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/21/2005
Print reviews
he's got the right idea from the start, but I have to work my way through issues first. It'll work.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/17/2005
And if only I could run reviews
I'm getting desperate.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12/6/2005
From High Places reviews
personal, this is how it goes. Then I guess you can only go up again.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11/30/2005
Because reviews
spiritual sensuality perhaps?
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11/30/2005
Burned reviews
It's old and I love it
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11/30/2005
Stale reviews
the best comedies are always tragic, everything might end?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/30/2005
Cherry Pip reviews
I don't not like you anymore, I just have depression.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/30/2005
Honey reviews
Sensual.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/31/2005
Disguise reviews
About someone I used to be friends with...but he made it extremely hard. (just to explain, a lot of the imagery is to do with the language/culture barrier)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/3/2005
Dark Chocolate reviews
Just a musing about the nature of some things.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/3/2005
Blueprint reviews
Hmmm...r+r would be good on this one, I dont know if I like it
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/3/2005
Magic Tricks reviews
Always remember it's me here, I'm here...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/3/2005
Devoured reviews
About a friend of mine, sacrificing one thing for another...friendships for lovers. But everything's good for her, so she's lucky.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/3/2005
Spiral reviews
I know, I should have more faith. Depression versus care.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 345 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/3/2005
White Wine Suicide reviews
something I feel good about
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/23/2005
Escape reviews
Cute little thing. It rhymes!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 276 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/1/2004
Not Love reviews
Can you see the interesting way it rhymes?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/25/2004
How not to Win, when the Odds are With you reviews
I dislike how my mind works
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/9/2004
Glance reviews
That look you gave me.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/9/2004
Enid's Ghost reviews
Connection to the film Ghost World...she has my dreams.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/31/2004