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Joined 02-16-04, id: 398382
Author has written 58 stories for Life, General, Haiku, Love, Friendship, and Horror.
i write these stupid words and i love every one | weezer

01.21.04
It has been forever long since i have written anything decent. so here we go...
all my love
carly
10.06.04
wow- it has been a LOOOOOOOONG time!!
new poem.

depression o' depression. how i loathe thee, but welcome your delightful poem fodder.

9.15.04
yay! a new poem. you'd think with all that's happening in my crazy crazy life things would be much more turbulent as far as uploads go!
love to all-
carly marie

8.31.04
ABOUT TIME!!
a new poem!!

willing to tweak! give me advice, loves!!

me

8.12.04
can we not claim to be empty? i'd say no... because we are so very full.

overwhelmed with human beauty. i want to write it all.

uploaded his hate.

8.10.04
music. is. amazing.
what made God think of it. how'd he know that it'd touch so many people in so many ways. that it could change minds and melt hate and build such love and purity.

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i just write for fun but i really love doing well and i always try to improve my poetry...

i love free form and just letting stuff flow--
but haiku is so expressive in and of itself-- keeping my thoughts so concise and left to such diverse interpretation-- it makes me happy so i'm going to smile now (smiles)

spread love and happiness-- this world, so full of apathy, desperately needs your heart.

be friendly

i promise to review your work if you review mine.

peace&acceptance

carly

but you don't understand, you don't understand me, and i want to be understood. | lisa loeb

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The Meat Archives by Jayne-angel reviews
A relationship gone sour, chronicled from middle to end. Shorter than you think. Please read and review. (20 days ago and Without Goodbye are here now)
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 2,375 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 11/19/2004 - Published: 3/14/2004
no ever after by godawful teen-angst poetry reviews
don't kid yourself.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 5 - Published: 7/6/2004
Dreams with Jim by Christopher Konopka reviews
Trying to search for the correct words
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/30/2004
Summer by Deluminated reviews
This is rather abstract, and very short. It is a description of what summer is, to me. Yes, I am that girl in the story. But mainly I wrote it to see if I could. An exercise, you see...just tell me what you think. It's not thrilling, but it's not supposed
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 409 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/30/2004
This Time Imperfect F by Frederick Waters reviews
This is more of a vignette or a scene, definately fits in the short shorts. But it is a retrospective about a love story. (This is the story I was awarded $25 for writing)
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 566 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/10/2004
in a spherical room by zelle reviews
she has talked with this small boy
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/24/2004
so the sky rises by zelle reviews
he said he looked up and could see the stars
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/24/2004
The ABCs of Insanity by Septimus Tigrem reviews
This came to me after I sang the Taco Song. Yep.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/23/2004
ADD by Septimus Tigrem reviews
A poetic rant, I guess you could say. That's about as close to A.D.D. as I'm going to come...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/23/2004
Time Faults for lack of a better title by nefaria18 reviews
Words melt into each other and I could explain it to you with a picture but my artistry was lacking last night.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/20/2004
Censred by nefaria18 reviews
Something dealing with politics, and government, and censorship I'm sure. but I was angry when I wrote it so I really don't remember what I was going for...
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/18/2004
Needing, Screaming by Deluminated reviews
Humans are all connected, in more ways than one. No matter your situation, no doubt you have felt trapped at least once.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/9/2004
In Flagrante Delicto by INTP reviews
caught in the act of protecting my sanity
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/7/2004
Fairy Tales by a.swans.cry reviews
it can break your heart to shatter someone's own.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/31/2004
Silhouette by EveryNowAndThen reviews
Such a message can be conveyed upon seeing someone for only a second. I want him to live life again. I want him to be inspired again.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/29/2004
A silent stare by a.swans.cry reviews
i wrote this for a boy i'm almost falling in love with.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/14/2004
i asked her by catchcolt reviews
you pick what i asked her...it's kind of obvious, considering it's a 'love' poem
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/13/2004
pacific by zelle reviews
musings on the pacific ocean. this was actually written in early-mid febraury. before the sun came out.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 389 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Published: 3/12/2004
Unreal Realism by nefaria18 reviews
In poetry class we had to do a 30 minute observation in complete silence. These haikus are the result of it.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/11/2004
I Think I Know the World by Deluminated reviews
I think I know the world, but doesn't everybody?
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 577 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 4 - Published: 3/11/2004
He came in by Sadira reviews
an average aussie bloke with a losing lotto ticket
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 203 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/21/2004
Princess by nefaria18 reviews
See if you can guess what it's about-
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/19/2004
Relation by Deluminated reviews
My first attempt at poetry. I can't say that I'll ever do it again, nor have I any experience with it. It's just how I felt at this moment in time. Tell me what you think, if you have an opinion. If not, what's the use of a mind?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 3 - Published: 2/18/2004
Let Her Drown by Sadira reviews
none
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/30/2004
The Room by Aake Redfield reviews
A short poem about a tragedy
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/8/2003
Footsteps by FitzChivalry reviews
I don't think this is very brilliant, but never mind
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/9/2003
When Moron Was a Medical Term by Ethra Esme reviews
Wrote this a couple months ago. Figured I'd post it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 214 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/30/2003
Darkness by FitzChivalry reviews
Darkness.. well, it's about something that happened in a dark place (typos fixed)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/3/2003
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January 21 2005 reviews
interesting... quite pleased, one of my better pieces. please review.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1/21/2005
two 9's, an 8, followed by a haiku reviews
this is for you.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/28/2004
Quit reviews
quit
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11/28/2004
such was the choice reviews
no summary
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/23/2004
insight reviews
a quick poem
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/6/2004
ramble 2 reviews
just what came to my mind- actually i'm impressed with it, considering i've had a thought drought lately.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/15/2004
what it is to melt reviews
never before did i want anything more, than when i wanted to melt into you.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/31/2004
at anthony reviews
hm. it's good- i'll tweak it later.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/19/2004
his hate reviews
um- insightful or not. you decide.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/12/2004
my first experience with creation reviews
all i could do was cry... (music)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/10/2004
a little like alice reviews
loosely based on lewis carrol's alice in wonderland but pretty much just jabberwocky. it was a dream i had.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/30/2004
our photographs reviews
it's good- i like it. :)
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/24/2004
calm repose reviews
inspired? :)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/24/2004
on the floor reviews
the simplicity that brings warmth and love. (this is an old piece)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/19/2004
prozac reviews
about throwing the pills away.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/19/2004
source reviews
if i write about the reason i write, maybe my reasons will change. that'd be nice.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/11/2004
71104 reviews
it's a shorty. about a friend who saved a part of me that needed saving.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/11/2004
hit men reviews
i dunno where this came from. r/r
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/7/2004
now i know reviews
put me on the shelf. ... i was angsty- dont' judge me. :) NEW REVISED SHINY VERSION!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/28/2004
kelly reviews
please kel don't hate this poem. :) i love you girl
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/25/2004
june 21 reviews
no better title. i'm writing more and more honestly. please r/r
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/21/2004
i don't know yet reviews
my first story- it's scary. :P PLEASE REVIEW, i need help! it's good, though, i think... The new chapters are very short- i'm working up to some closure! The First chapter has had some changes. :)
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,798 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6/14/2004 - Published: 6/13/2004
Band of Brotherhood reviews
OLD one of my fave poems. it could have been better but i'm real proud of this one.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6/13/2004
energy reviews
OLD about love. typical, eh!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/13/2004
lost books reviews
i lost my poetry notebooks :(:( this poem has no format whatsoever.. i was trying something new.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 312 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/9/2004
call me amazing poet reviews
a funny little experimental poem. read it or else! :)
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/3/2004
grin reviews
when you trusted someone and let them see the real u, and they tear you down and spread you around and lie about you. :( r/r
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/3/2004
and something made that funny reviews
just doing random stuff with random people. its good stuff.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/3/2004
nice gneiss reviews
totally random... totally random. i mean, really.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/24/2004
inspire reviews
a revision of "glove me" and under a new name... about music (surprised)
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/18/2004
Spire of Divinity reviews
individuality... the pain, discomfort- take pills for bloating. :)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/18/2004
sorry for this reviews
actually a really okay poem. disappointed w/ the format but too lazy to fix it right now.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/3/2004
day dream reviews
about... loneliness and what it's to dream loneliness... i guess. r/r?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/25/2004
amongst the threads reviews
summaries aren't coming to me today. r/r.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/20/2004
this happiness reviews
it's a short one - r/r?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/20/2004
untitled for now reviews
this is incomplete, methinks. its undone. but please r/r... i do need help w/ this one!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4/11/2004
glove me reviews
haiku- r/r - will r/r back. :)
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/10/2004
cold when i ask reviews
combination from "when i ask" - i prefer this over the original 2. it combines the best thoughts of both and i'm pleased with it.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/5/2004
when i ask reviews
two haiku on asking myself about the meaning of life- interesting..
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4/5/2004
we never were that close reviews
pretty cool when someone makes you think you're super tight and then tears you down, eh?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/4/2004
you're better reviews
haiku. - the clearer the mind the more honest the friendship.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/4/2004
loneliness like rice reviews
i know why they stopped throwing rice at weddings. too many divorces afterwards. (so it's kinda strange- brought in eleanor rigby- now that's hard to do.)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/30/2004
untitled reviews
oh people. how they suck.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3/27/2004
pavement reviews
about dishonesty in a friendship... i'm really pleased with this poem. EDITED 3.31.04 much better now.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/27/2004
burned like pirate maps reviews
about a man near death reflecting on his horribly spent life... pg for subject...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/26/2004
oh my head reviews
rant w/ association related to media/people... kind of cynic like.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/25/2004
just a ramble reviews
just letting stuff out- pg for mild language...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/24/2004
lick the politics reviews
the format is really screwed up- but it's not about politics hugely, so don't be fooled. :)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/24/2004
scented memories reviews
oh sigh. lost love - it'll getchya every time.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3/14/2004
kurt reviews
the impact of cobain's journals compacted into a warm fuzzy haiku.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/14/2004
charcoal reviews
i wrote this in nov. 2003. about being some i'm not and how it made me feel.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 3/14/2004
Confetti reviews
My first haiku- it's on crying.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 3/14/2004
butter in the pan reviews
about warmth-energy between 2 people... weirdest mood
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2/23/2004
to be a beat reviews
about beat poets-kind of... it's in one of my crazy unique patterns.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/22/2004
Harper reviews
about music and feeling... abstract.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/19/2004
21904 reviews
i'll edit this soon... it's a pretty personal poem, actually so it may not be understandable by anyone else. :)
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/19/2004
Your Words reviews
when left in the dark things hurt worse.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2/18/2004
21404 reviews
contrary to common understanding- i did not write this out of a romantic view of suicide- it is however about letting go of your facade and finally being freed. but you can take it how you want it. :)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2/16/2004