Hey there. A friend and I are writing this nice little story here
called Cyclone. It takes place in a different galaxy where war
has gripped many planets. We really have only ever written for
ourselves and close friends before, but we're considering going a step
further (whatever that would be) with this story. We think it's nice,
anyway. Here's our problem, though. Every time we give it to someone to
read they just say it's perfect and don't help us out. While boosting
to our self-esteem, this is untrue. So, I'm hoping some people that
don't know us could help refine what we have so far. Obviously, the
story isn't finished yet.