Jasper Riddle
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Joined 03-11-04, id: 401841, Profile Updated: 08-27-10
Author has written 16 stories for Spiritual, Fantasy, General, Sci-Fi, and Action.

NEXT UPDATE: 9/10/10

8/27/10: It has not been a good month. I won't apologize.

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LIBRARY

Dendurr Legacies Trilogy: Early work. Fantasy/Adventure/Romance. I sincerely wish I could revamp it, because I really love some of the characters. Consists of 'DrakynTears', 'Mark of the Draikonyx', and 'Dendurr Legacies'. Related works include 'Lady Catanci' and 'The Things I'll Do', although the latter is a transition piece with 'Return of Darken'. DO NOT READ.

The Power of Belief: Chap. 23 up. Finished (for the most part). SF/Action. Sometimes, someone believes something so strongly they see it. Sophia can believe something so strongly others believe it too. But it this power of the mind a blessing...or a curse? Rated for slight violence. Ends rather abruptly, sorry. I really like the concept of this story and wish I could write more, but I just kinda lost interest. Ties into Frost miniseries.

Return of Darken: 78 chapters up. Fantasy/Action/Adventure. Eighth arc being posted.

Ballad: Oneshot. AU fic. Inspired by Jpop/Jrock idols. A teenage girl has a Halloween encounter with a newly-risen singing sensation. It's slightly more fun to read if you're a reader of RoD--it uses charas from there. One of my non-fantasy pieces. Hey, this could happen!

Frost: My miniseries. It's a four-part series starring my writer character Tim, who debuted in RoD and refused to leave me alone afterwards. In order, the stories are Fire and Ice, Two Roads Diverge, Nothing Gold Can Stay, and The Darkest Evening. Entire series posted, first story (possibly second and third as well) being rewritten due to suckage.

RULES

1. You review my stuff, I'll do my best to review yours. If it's a long story, I'll just read and try to review once. If it's a newly started story, I'll try my best to keep up and review every chapter--or at least once in a while. I apologize in advance if I don't review your shit--just remind me and I'll get on it.

2. If you review me, please do it properly. You can give me praise if you like, but please don't flame or insult me without telling me why. If you say my story sucks I want to know why you think it's so bad. If you like it but think it needs work, please tell me what you think I should do to improve it. And if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all.

3. Here are a few tips for reviewing me.
Point out my typos.
Yeah, I still make them every so often. Spelling, grammar, punctuation. Simple beta reading.
Point out if things don't make sense.
Maybe there's a plothole I need to fill up and pave over. Maybe there's an explanation that I need to include. I won't know if people don't show me.
Point out strengths and weaknesses. Maybe I still need to work on description or something. Tell me what you think needs work.
Tell me what you think of things. Characters, settings, dialogue, little bits of information that interest you. Give me your impressions. Because if they're wrong, then I need to work on that and get the right idea across.

Thank You!

Panzuriel: You are, hands down, my favorite person on Fictionpress. I can always count on you for a review filled with praise and helpful comments, and I reread them with joy every time.

VestDan: Ah, you don't even know I exist. Still, your tale inspires me to find the details in mine, to explain what doesn't make sense, and that has turned me into a better writer. I thank thee from the deepest part of my heart. Everyone, a tale that will someday get published or I'll know why: Pieces of Eight. It's long, but incredibly, amazingly worth it. Worship VestDan. He deserves it.
If you don't want to read this, it's okay. He's stopped updating on here because he's thinking of getting it published. But you know what that means? If you see his books in the bookstore, check 'em out. He truly is an amazing author.

theatreoftheabsurd: Yeah, okay. Thanks to you because you rock. And you reviewed my stuff once. Her story, Null, rocks. Read it if you don't mind the creepiness. Aw, heck, read it anyways.
Null has been taken off of FP because she's gonna get it published. If you see it, check it out. It's a marvelous story of magic, secrets, and treachery.

The Eleventyone: Ah, my Gaian hangout. Such a love-hate relationship sometimes...But seriously, you guys do deserve to go on this list--I've had so much help and encouragement from you. Ultra-special thanks to: Jabberwocky Sinope XXVII (for drawing my characters and helping me stick with it back in 2005), Sergeant Sargent (for writing along on her own story back in 2005), omgtehsuiso and Tailos-chan (for helping me out with medical dilemmas in 2007), Snakeskin Soul (for Q+Aing with me in 2007), and Maskani (for betaing FaI in 08). Thanks for the reviews, the attention, the mental support. I don't know what I would have--and what I wouldn't have--done without you.

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Archive Piece Four by Asharadoth reviews
Herald, take three.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,670 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/19/2007 - Published: 11/11/2006
Magicademy by MusedMoose reviews
Arts Magika University: sorcery classes, elven professors, dwarven fraternities, interspecies dating, and magikal duels. It's odd, it's mildly bizarre, and it's a wonder the students get any studying done. It's college the way it should have been.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 33 - Words: 194,782 - Reviews: 236 - Favs: 199 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 10/17/2006 - Published: 8/25/2004 - Complete
The Book of Starguard by A Chroi reviews
(CHAPTER 18 UP) Searching for a princess who doesn't seem to exist isn't easy. Luckily for Everen, with the help of a waitress, a thief, and some elves, he may be able to find her after all. (Rated for sword-play, violence, and language.)
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 18 - Words: 95,618 - Reviews: 100 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 9/13/2006 - Published: 1/19/2004
Perihelion by Eyetk reviews
[Undergoing revisions] Hidden behind an immense power, the Gulf Nations have remained safe for two decades. But when a prophet’s vision drives him to rule, the Gulf’s defence is suddenly stripped away. See my profile for a link to a world map.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 27 - Words: 72,269 - Reviews: 207 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 7/20/2006 - Published: 6/18/2005
Archive Piece Three by Asharadoth reviews
Herald, take two.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 31,837 - Reviews: 66 - Favs: 4 - Updated: 11/17/2005 - Published: 7/17/2005
Tomorrow's Decisions by conclusivelead reviews
The sequel to Yesterday's Mistakes. Tomorrow, Naru, and Li have made their way to Tokyo to discover the cure for Rapier's blindness, but what they find instead is trouble! More laughs, more tears, more crazy samurai. DISCONTINUED
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 22,464 - Reviews: 90 - Favs: 12 - Updated: 5/1/2005 - Published: 6/2/2004 - Complete
Three by bex11 reviews
Calissa, Alex and Fern are very powerful more powerful than even they know. Whether they can handle their latent magic is another question altogether...
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 22 - Words: 90,429 - Reviews: 112 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/4/2005 - Published: 3/26/2004
The War for Eternity by coldfire247 reviews
As long as there is power, As long as there is evil, There will always be a battle for supremacy. There will always be...A war for eternity.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,047 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 12/11/2004 - Published: 5/12/2004
Tears of a Mage by Cybele de la Lune reviews
FINISHED! Camille thought she knew her teacher Dmitri, but when Dmitri is called to the capital, she discovers things about him she never knew. She also discovers that some people don't like Dmitri...or his student.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 15 - Words: 14,511 - Reviews: 41 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 7/7/2004 - Published: 9/6/2003
Princes are Evil by Ranting Forever n Rambling On reviews
Meet Rhian, a self-proclaimed comedian whose thoughts are completely erratic. She lives in a kingdom where the prince has no emotions, and she is supposed to break the curse placed on him. Of course, she doesn't want to do this. Told in her POV.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 18 - Words: 67,490 - Reviews: 430 - Favs: 378 - Follows: 55 - Updated: 7/5/2004 - Published: 4/9/2004 - Complete
Ashes of the Phoenix: Requiem of the Phoenix by Kali Akotor reviews
This is the begining of a three story series about a princesse's fall and rise to power and her friends along the way. From the great forests of the Land of Zia to the Marbled halls of Osidon, the travels that they take is memorable and very taxing.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,858 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 4 - Updated: 6/25/2004 - Published: 5/1/2004
Essylit Chronicles by Gelasia reviews
meet Essylit, Being sucked into a milk machine into an entirely new WORLD, beating up a prince, and facing the horror of a short skirts.. this girl is having one rough day!!
Fiction: Manga - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Humor - Chapters: 20 - Words: 55,873 - Reviews: 165 - Favs: 48 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/18/2004 - Published: 3/23/2002
A False World by An Inside Joke reviews
Roger enters a virtual reality world to escape from men who are trying to kill him.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 20 - Words: 25,252 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 5 - Updated: 12/20/2003 - Published: 12/1/2003 - Complete
A Mercenary's Trust by Flamehail reviews
A loner Mage is sent to protect a naive duke on his way to his cousin the king's palace and learns much about trust in the process. I review for all reviewers!
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 14,764 - Reviews: 75 - Favs: 9 - Updated: 8/23/2003 - Published: 7/13/2003
Smoke and Computer Screens by Joan Milligan reviews
In the distant future of technology where no mystery remains unsolved... what will become of magic?
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,297 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/25/2001
A-Antitheus by Pyper reviews
A college student meets the devil. No broken relationships, no dead relatives. Not angsty, depressing, or melodramatic. A light, funny fic!
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,373 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 7 - Published: 2/11/2001
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Return of Darken reviews
A pair of outsiders tell Nyte he doesn't belong in his world and whisk him away to a life of wandering. But the realm of Planewalking and magic is a bizarre and dangerous place, and his journey has just begun...
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 78 - Words: 183,095 - Reviews: 202 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 8/27/2010 - Published: 5/21/2005
The Darkest Evening reviews
Tim, now employed by HAPGI, has resigned himself to a dull and chained existence when chance encounters with an old friend and an old enemy remind him of his choice in life. A new deal is struck, a new goal in mind. Final story in Frost.
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,251 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/16/2007 - Complete
Nothing Gold Can Stay reviews
An escape from a world of white leaves an interesting past that one girl dares to delve into. Of course, when you've battled against those you never had any true loyalty to, you aren't very eager to keep that past a secret... Third in the Frost series
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,335 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/16/2007 - Complete
Two Roads Diverge reviews
Plan thwarted, Tim now resides in a world of white. Mind broken, he battles against those in power to regain power. But what is madness to someone who isn't normal anyway? Second in Frost series.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,192 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/16/2007 - Complete
Fire and Ice reviews
A teenaged boy discovers a strange new power after the arrival of two strangers in his writing. Soon he is involved in a secret organization and their civil war, much to his annoyance. He has other plans in mind. First in the Frost short story series
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,170 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/16/2007 - Complete
Phoenix reviews
He saved her and took her away from the island of nightmares...only to abandon her in a sea of white. Little ghost, give a gift... [ONESHOT]
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,362 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/25/2006
The ChristmasMan: A Tale of Yuletide Horror reviews
[ONESHOT] A young writer uncovers a strange conspiracy, and at first, laughs at it. But as time goes on, their diary reveals it to be no laughing matter, as letters and threats reveal and confirm what a supposed madman had originally said.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 864 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12/18/2005
Serial reviews
[ONESHOT] There are some things a person will do for silence. Complain. Endure. And then there are those who are not content with sitting back. There are those who take matters into their own hands...
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 905 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/28/2005
Ballad reviews
A teenage girl has a Halloween encounter with a newly risen singing sensation. Not really romance, but isn't celebrity worship still a form of love?
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,217 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/6/2005 - Complete
The Things I'll Do reviews
My name is Kiara Cloud. You might know my parents, Ezelyn and Nia. Well, I’ve come across a matter of life or death… But all I can think about it is: why me? [ONESHOT]
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 10,857 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5/16/2005 - Published: 2/24/2005
Dendurr Legacies reviews
[Third in DL trilogy] [FINISHED] The end is near, and things are coming to a close. But there are still things to be done, even if the Gods interfere...
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 44 - Words: 70,357 - Reviews: 49 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 1/1/2005 - Published: 6/10/2004 - Complete
The Power of Belief reviews
They aren't monsters. They aren't androids. They aren't out to save the world. They're just kids...but they aren't exactly normal either. [FINISHED]
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 23 - Words: 37,720 - Reviews: 36 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 11/28/2004 - Published: 8/12/2004
Mark of the Draikonyx reviews
She's royalty. He's an assassin. What happens when their paths collide? Second in the DL trilogy. [FINISHED]
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 30 - Words: 18,511 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/10/2004 - Published: 4/30/2004
Lady Catanci reviews
No one was supposed to see him, but she did. Now, three years later, Sorlo's past returns to haunt him... (happens after MotD) [ONESHOT]
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,622 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6/1/2004
DrakynTears reviews
After three years, Daemynde finally sets out to avenge his father's murder. How hard can it be? First in the DL trilogy. [FINISHED]
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 7,153 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 4/29/2004 - Published: 3/11/2004
The GoldenGlass Wall reviews
Erica is isolated, trapped within a golden-glass wall. [ONESHOT]
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 345 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/11/2004
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