![]() Author has written 30 stories for Romance, Humor, Fantasy, Historical, Kids, Life, Love, and Action. You can also find me at RoyalRoad user username: RobotOnRepeat - I used to focus on poetry, but now I mostly write historical fiction/romance and short stories. - Any type of feedback is welcome, especially constructive criticism! :) There's no better way for a writer to improve than with feedback. - If you're looking for a story by me and it's been removed, please look below to see if it is one of those that will be re-posted with edits or under a new name. Removed Stories (updated 5.22.2020) Precipitous: This story was mostly completed, but I opted to remove it as it's undergoing major rewrites in the first portion of the story. It will also be reposted as 'The Princess's Advisor'. Once it's been rewritten, I'll be posting the second draft. The characters won't change, but I will be adding more depth to the political structure and the magic lore.'' Sorcerer of the City: After some debate with myself, I chose to remove this from this site and post it elsewhere. It simply wasn't getting any views on here or any feedback, so it didn't make sense to have it up. Fog At Midnight: I wrote myself into a corner in this one after 60 pages and after some review feedback, I chose to rewrite the entire story and once it's at least halfway completed, I'll repost it with the rewrites. I'm hoping to separate it into three different parts so that I'm not relying on flashbacks at the beginning of parts or integrating them better into the story because they were really freaking confusing having them within the chapters as I did. A Secret of Wonder: I chose to remove this one, as it's more of just a fun smut romance that I was writing back in 2013. It got some lash back for it being inaccurate since I had initially posted it under "Historical Romance," as well, which was a fair criticism and was an error in my part at categorizing it that way. In any case, I've decided to remove it as I haven't touched it in five years. Things loved, things protected: This story was written sometime in 2008 and was centered around an abusive marriage that ends in an abusive divorce where the mother is trying to protect her children from the father's violent nature and in hiring a lawyer, falls in love with him. In any case, there were so many problems with this story. The children sounded like they were in their teens instead of in primary school, it moved really fast, and the abuse scenes were cringe. I don't have any plans to post it again or write something similar. Posted Stories Undergoing Rewrites (updated 4.2.2020) Landscape: This is undergoing a current rewrite. Lirael's name was changed to Kleia and there were several other character changes. Keshena and Lirael's relationship has changed dramatically. The Mary Sue-esque abuse/rape scenes will all be removed to make room for something more sinister regarding Uncle Mikhail's attentions towards Lirael. The names of all the territories have been changed, as well as the continent. Some names were removed, such as the Day Guardian and Night Guardian - I felt these were unnecessary. Whereas Lirael's time spent with her aunt and uncle only spanned over 30 pages and then she was moved to the orphanage, I may be extending it and removing the orphanage scene altogether for something different, which will eliminate Endera as a character altogether. Gregor Nelson will have also have a different role entirely in the story. Big changes! But I honestly think it will make the world come together better and will be preferable altogether. I haven't gotten to doing an outline for the second and third part of the story, but I have a feeling there are going to be some major revisions done to where entire scenes are removed. For right now, part one revisions are going well and I expect it to be around 80-100 pages rather than the 40ish pages that it was in the original. Enchantments of Another World:I decided to re-write this with an entirely different title, characters, and plot, but with the same premise of a girl being transported to another world. This one will be titled 'In His Dimension.' Making it possible: I've always intended to rewrite this, but I really think I will have to re-write this entirely from scratch. The story had always been intended as dark fantasy and inspired from faerie myths in Ireland/UK, so I think I will be reworking this differently and fleshing out the relationships somewhat differently and re-adjusting the main conflict so it makes more sense and giving the elemental demons more history and characteristics so they're not so basic. |
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