Feigned Frailty
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Joined 04-03-04, id: 405970
Author has written 28 stories for Love, Life, Religion, Friendship, and General.
Male - California grown

Constructive criticism is still criticism. I do not think, in terms of poetry, constructive criticism exists because poetry is purely subjective. Honestly, who is one to judge whether or not another's piece is written well or not?

I write as a form of self expression. That you cannot criticize. If that does not do well with your structure, your rhyme, or your criticism, save yourself some time and read someone else's work because your so called "constructive criticism" will most assuredly be ignored. I will not change my form of self expression to satisfy your criteria of what makes subjective poetry "good".

leafy by sheZadey reviews
fall is a time when you should go outside and look around you
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/31/2004
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Philosophy of Enemies reviews
Self explanatory
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/23/2006
Instant Pros
First pros piece.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Published: 2/24/2005
Post Apocalyptic reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/9/2005
The Machine reviews
We, The Machine..
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/3/2004
My Paradise reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/2/2004
Night In Versed reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/2/2004
Thoughts In Versed II
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Published: 9/14/2004
The Attic reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/14/2004
Continue to Breathe reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/1/2004
Dear Friend: reviews
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Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/19/2004
Heaven in your arms reviews
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Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/3/2004
We Can Be reviews
Can we?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/31/2004
Mental Asphyxiation reviews
Who needs water to drown?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2004
The Line reviews
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Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 344 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/6/2004
My Breath reviews
My Breath
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/5/2004
Thoughts In Versed reviews
My thoughts - I think the title is pretty clever, it can be read two ways. "Thoughts in verse", as in poetry form etc. or "Thoughts inversed", as in the thoughts are external.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/30/2004
My Disassociation reviews
Continued second half of "My Remembrance"
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/15/2004
MoneyScented Cologne reviews
Money-Scented Cologne
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/4/2004
Looking Back from Chariot Black reviews
This is an experimentation technique. I am not sure of anyone has tried it before, if you have, credit's to you. But in this "poem", I have thrown together lines from previous poems and tried to make it into a coherent piece. (I know its bad, but lemme
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 444 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/27/2004
Rise New Moon reviews
Watch the skies, there is not much to see down here.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/26/2004
Stolen Angel reviews
Fallen from heaven to catch my angel
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/3/2004
Flames of Fate reviews
Flames of passion, no longer do I feel your burn
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/16/2004
Summer's Breath reviews
Watching the stars one summer night. (Summer a person)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/15/2004
First Rains reviews
Feeling the first rains
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/15/2004
Cross of Ice reviews
Wanderer travels naked through a blizzard, his/her clothes uesd to keep the child in his/her arms warm
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/15/2004
Flight 000 reviews
A super-short one. Good if you like wordplay, and heavy symbolism. A thinker poem - keep in mind it's about life
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/15/2004
My Remembrance reviews
Sorry guys, words cannot describe the emotion of this poem, going to have to read it, hehe.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/13/2004
Tantalus of dreams reviews
A dream I had, took me a long time to find the right words, so wierd diction at times. Tantalus, son of Zeus, was a god whose punishment was maddening, look him up, really interesting
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 571 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/13/2004