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Author has written 1 story for Fantasy.


We (two cousins) write on all of the stories etc below. Some of them are rough drafts, some are not, but we appreciate feedback on all of them.

Small Biographies:

Ty's Bio:
Age: 22
Sex: F
Hobbies: Writing, singing, drama, collecting stuffed animals, playing in the rain.
Music: Dance and country.
Future Hopes: Transfer from community college to a 4-year and pursue a teaching certificate in English and Creative Writing.
Writing "Jobs": The technical portion of it all, like editing and correcting Mack's many mistakes. Dabbles in the creative side of writing and decides which story ideas have the most potential. And, of course, actually writing it.

Mack's Bio:
Age: 18
Sex: F
Hobbies: Drama, writing, swimming/boating, hanging out with friends, napping.
Music: Any and everything. (I'm listening to Riverdance right now.)
Future Hopes: Go to a "4 Year"and pursue whatever strikes my interest there.
Writing "Jobs": The creative portion of it all, like imagery and style. Coming up with story ideas and 'selling' them to Ty, plot technicalities, and of course actually writing it.


We are both of the Christian faith so you will not see any references to "gods" or "goddesses" in our work. This does not mean that if you don't share our belief we won't review you or will give you a flame, so please give us that same courtesy. The only reason we’re mentioning this is because we’ve had some trouble with it in the past. Thanks!

We aren't sure what our next story will be. Depending on interest, we may have a second Passion in the Depths or we may move onto an entirely different genre.

Our stories are updated every Thursday with a new chapter, unless otherwise posted. So please drop by on Thursdays!

The first few chapters of Passion in the Depths are undergoing some construction. We were happy with them when they were posted, but going back and re-reading them has left us to the discovery that they aren't nearly as good as the later chapters; therefore, they're going to be (eventually) fixed. Thank all of you reviewers so much, that's the only way we were able to realize how much they needed fixing!


1. Passion in the Depths: A war is soon to begin; a war that is so powerful, it is a fight between even the moons. Dark play and shadowed motivations make it more complicated than the average soul can see, and nearly impossible for either side to win. Huddled in the corners lay both enemies and friends - and soon the line between them grows thin as battles grow in number. While the death toll multiplies and recruits are doubled, both sides secretly seek a young slave. A slave that could, though unaware, determine the outcome of the growing onslaught. Rating is for violence.Fantasy -Action/Adveture/Romance

On Reviewing:

Constructive criticism is ALWAYS welcome here. The basic idea is that if you supply one of the stories below with an honest, actual review, we will gladly review you back. You know, return the favor. But PLEASE do not give us a review like "it was good" or "i didn't like it" just to get a review for yourself. Tell us what you did and/or didn't like about it. Thanks! If you have reviewed us and never received a review in return (giving us some time in between of course) please feel free to email us.

In regards to above, at least one of us will review you back. Almost always you will get one review from Mack and one review from Ty; however, there are rare times when only one of us will return the favor.

Thank you everyone who has reviewed us so far - you've made our day!

Important: Ty and I are very busy right now. We know our reviews to other people have been slowing down, but we promise that we have not forgotten about you. We have our personal reasons and I will not bother you with them, but please be aware that we can't be as quick to return the favor right now. If you are really worried that we have forgotten about you, send us an email and we will explain what's going on. Thank you for being so nice about our current lack of reviewing. Take care.

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The Echoes of Eternity by redskyatnight05 reviews
In a world filled with danger and magick, a new evil rises. Reluctantly caught in the middle are the young members of the Kavanagh family. Will they embrace their challenge or walk away? A/N, I have never written anything before so r/r please.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 36,840 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 8/21/2006 - Published: 4/6/2005
Feather and Stone by riding shotgun in the sky reviews
"Fate works, unknown." Seventeen years after the Year of the Prophecy, a demure (but unlucky) Sewardian maiden and an unorthodox magical prodigy struggle to not only accept their fates, but survive them.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 33,678 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 10 - Updated: 2/8/2006 - Published: 9/24/2005
The Curious Case of the Red Fan by The Ladies reviews
Serena, like every other rich young lady in London, is to be presented to Society. So far, so good. But the afternoon before her 'coming out' ball a rich young stranger comes to her door, and from there things just get more and more out of the ordinary...
Fiction: Historical - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 9 - Words: 7,240 - Reviews: 60 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 11/13/2005 - Published: 7/21/2005
The Unconventional Fairy Tale by Boadicia reviews
Are you tired of those same old fairy-tale endings? Cause I am.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 6 - Published: 8/11/2005
Guide For Fictionpress Reviews by ColorCrayons reviews
This is Mack from Clodhopper. My cousin and I have been asked a few times how we get so many reviews. This is our response. I hope it helps!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,744 - Reviews: 119 - Favs: 137 - Follows: 18 - Published: 8/7/2005
The Ocean Papillion by Tears of Crimson reviews
The day the ship sank, life was only a dream of aquamarine. It remained that way for eleven years. But now, Kari awakens to find death had let her be. Now, she must find the reason her life was spared through another survivor.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 18,609 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 8/5/2005 - Published: 7/22/2004
Alex Chen Goes To Lane Academy by bfmusashi reviews
A story about the trials and tribulations of one eighteen-year-old Asian nerd in the wonderful world we call college. UPDATED with Chapter 17! Rated M for foul language and other fun college stuff.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 17 - Words: 91,748 - Reviews: 156 - Favs: 61 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 7/20/2005 - Published: 8/18/2004
The Binding Story by Endless Abyss reviews
Madrigal is a character in a bad book. Now, she and a host of other characters, including a Handsome Prince with gender identification problems, a kind Evil Queen, and a Virtuous Villain must fight their way out of the book and into their own lives.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,289 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/15/2005
Passion in the Depths reviews
An ensuing war, a kindhearted peasant, an unlikely marriage, a sorcerer king, a hostile takeover, a rebellion leader, and a secret army are all tied to the Fate of a young slave who is now on the run.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 28 - Words: 76,959 - Reviews: 883 - Favs: 118 - Follows: 37 - Updated: 3/11/2006 - Published: 6/28/2005