luna-lovegood129
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Joined 04-24-04, id: 409936
Author has written 31 stories for Action, Life, Religion, General, Nature, Essay, School, Play, Spiritual, and Friendship.

I am blank faced and spastic at the same time.

Expressionless and yet always energetic and the first to jump in my seat when someone in my class drops their binder (on average this happens about 3 times everyday.)

I am 11 years old and in 6th grade, but please do not let my age interfere when critquing my writing. I know I'm quite young physically, but in my mind I feel a bit like an equal to you teenagers and adults who I discuss important topics about in message forums, and that if I was just a little bit older, I could do a lot more for the world and for Christ.

God be with you all.

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The Window by alors reviews
Suicide is never the way out... it's about religion as well.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/1/2004
Traitors and Goliaths by thewriterlioness reviews
Traitors and their ruthlessness when they want something...inspired by supposed friends.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/13/2004
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Unsatisfaction
I gain no satisfaction from when the smallest fraction of the audience deciphers the act- even if they did not destroy it, keeping it to themselves, can you still say the act was unbeaten?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Published: 1/12/2005
Snapshot
Analyzing the scene and feeling full comprehension of one snapshot, quick moment, tracing back footsteps that you found yourself to answer questions they didn't ask you so you could have a scene to yourself.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Published: 1/12/2005
Revolution of the Eye
Who can detect the revolution of the eye? The iris of one soul piercing another, streaming music meaning pouring instantly. Who can stop them now? They've stayed throughout all ages and still the epiphanies are rising.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Published: 1/6/2005
The Games, the Gossipers and the Gone reviews
They're all the same. You who cry yourself to sleep, the gossipers, the people who don't gossip but don't stop the gossipers either...don't you all the play the games? If you don't stop them, you play them. Don't deny it.
Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/26/2004
A Mocking Chocolate reviews
A morsel of chocolate dropped on the tip of a dull tongue The numbed sense can see the action It imagines its rewarding taste...A taunting hint of sweetness leaves it only wanting more...grr, I think this is my worst one yet...sorta cliched...what do you
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/26/2004
Unnatural reviews
The frozen grass cries that what is now isn't natural...it's anything it's meant to be...does this ring a bell? Is this like something, somebody...ourselves?...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/14/2004
Are We Thankful? reviews
Yeah, I know this is around Thanksgiving time. But I really don't think that we're thankful enough, not thankful enough of just being alive. We're all supposedly "thankful" of everything life GIVES us, but do you ever really savor life itself?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/21/2004
Tension, Plight and the Meaning of Salvation reviews
What does it mean to be saved? Gasping, choking, trapped, gyring faster, near the end, can you, will you, should you...confess to the light? Now clouds and darkness no longer satisfy...yes! awaken unto new life...
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/10/2004
A Signal of Dwindling reviews
The atmosphere gives a signal, if only to one eye, that the day is dwindling away it's splendor now. These hurried spurs of midday whispers are too groaning and tired to mend. These cannot satisfy the beast. Written during study today.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/27/2004
Of Nests and Banquet Hall Debate Arenas reviews
I envy those people who are like nests- people go over to them when they are tired and beaten and spill their day on them. I- I am the banquet hall, where they stroll down just to give a good impression once in a long while.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/20/2004
An Armor of Faith reviews
We are filled with a stronger sensation of grace as we wear this armor of faith. It is a faith where we know love is real and truth is nigh, where we will not runaway from battle and things unseen are found. We no longer belong to this world, but to God,
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/16/2004
If You've Ever Been Forgotten reviews
If you've been forgotten, if you're very name has been cursed by others, if you ache from lost love or had lies about you poured out across the skies, know that God has felt this thousands by thousands ever since starlight began.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/8/2004
Life's Not Luck reviews
Life isn't luck. Luck is just something some people believe in because God is someone they don't want to trust. Life's bigger then something like luck that to explain it.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/19/2004
Math Skit Powers Exponents
A skit I wrote for Math (I'm trying to get extra credit, because I haven't been very active in class and am trying to make a good impression on the teacher) explaining powers and exponents. Light Reading.
Fiction: Play - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,433 - Published: 9/16/2004
The Remnant
I was reading the short book of Zephaniah, and I had the sudden urge to write this poem. Sort of based on the things said in Zephaniah, but not entirely. Not everyone will enjoy, I guess. Tell me what you think.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Published: 8/20/2004
A Lack of Thunder
Thoughts and questions describing the lack of thunder outside the wind of my box of rantings this summer. It's been forever since I last wrote a poem, so it's all sum-all-the-happenings-of-the-wind.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Published: 8/4/2004
Phillis Wheatley reviews
An essay thing on Phillis Wheatley that I wrote for school a few months ago.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 868 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/30/2004
This Guy reviews
I wrote this a long time ago, and it's also posted on my fanfiction.net account. However, on fanfiction i didn't get any reviews on it so I'm posting it here. A short, warm-ish story about a very little girl named Cara.
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 648 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7/29/2004
MakeUp reviews
Makeup. The wording is interesting. As though whoever invented it thought you could make up who you were with such man-made shallowness adding to what naturalness God meant you to be.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/26/2004
Math Skit reviews
I wrote this with a friend several months ago for extra credit, except we never got around to doing it. It's fun, and about how 2 kids learn the importance of math.For light reading.
Fiction: Play - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,586 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6/22/2004
End of the School Year reviews
It's end of the school year.I'm in fifth grade,and moving on to something bigger.Whether you're a fifth grader,an 8th grader,or a 12th grader,either one,you are too.We're leaving something behind.
Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6/13/2004
DARE Final Reflection Essay reviews
This year at school my grade had a program called DARE: Drug Abuse Resistance Education. We're close to finishing the program,and we had to write an essay on what we thought and learned.This is mine.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,202 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/29/2004
Life of an Ant reviews
Ants.We don't hesitate to step on them when they crawl into our kitchen,do we? But we don't stop to think about the sad life that the ant leads.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/28/2004
Songs of Regret and Questions reviews
My SISTER wrote this! I'm merely putting it up on FictionPress so she can see what other people think of her writing.Talk of fate,regret,stars,etc.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 271 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/22/2004
Inspiration and Remedies reviews
Believers,yes,we disagree with non-believers and those who strike out against at us.But,we have our own faults.Don't you remember?It's called love and forgiveness that sometimes we lack.Open to all readers.Comments appreciated.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/18/2004
The Sky reviews
The world has gone so wrong. And through all those years, the sky was there. Watching. (metaphorical with other unmentioned topics.)
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/13/2004
Futile Remedy reviews
A short poem on revenge and what heavy consequences that we deserve when we take our revenge. Such a futile remedy.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/10/2004
Who Am I? reviews
Who are we all? You can't tell who we are by just some titles to write down on 'Hello I Am ' tags.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/30/2004
A Tear of Guilt reviews
We go around saying "This is wrong! Why are you doing that? This is so stupid! Why won't you listen?..." But it's really our own faults for the way the world is today.Repent and be forgiven!
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/26/2004
Best of Fifth Grade Poetry reviews
Looking through my files, I found a little file of some poetry, and I'm posting up the ones here that I think are the best. And, as I'm in 10 years old, let's see what you think of a fifth-grader's poetry. Just take a look please,and maybe review !
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 497 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/26/2004
Birds of Prey reviews
Helen and Clarice and tons of other orphans live at the home. They spend their days working and being treated harshly with hardly any liberties from the owners of the home, fearfully only called "them".One day they escape.What will happen next?
Fiction: Action - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,401 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 4/25/2004 - Published: 4/24/2004