Please R&R my story and let me know if you want me to read one of your stories (I'll gladly do it). I'd loved for any feedback, probably more than compliments!

Stories:

White Rain:

I never enjoyed getting the Flu. I espically didn't enjoy what became of me getting the flu. So, why does one of my biggest mistakes become my best choice? I guess that's what high school is about. Making mistakes, I mean. Or, at least, what he was about.

This story is set in first person, as me (Allison Verlock) discovers what can become of hate. Through the trials and tribulations of a community service project, I learn what mistakes really are and can become. Maybe, just maybe, mistakes aren't so bad.

This is a picture of Allie in the story:

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