Author has written 23 stories for Religion, Nature, Life, War, Haiku, General, Fantasy, Horror, and General.
Hello, welcome, and thank you for visiting my profile!
I've posted the first chapter to a new story! (Guardians of the Boundary, although I might change the title later if I think of a better one.) It is still very much in the works, but I'm hoping to get some good feedback on here! The story focuses on two kids who were abandoned by their real family on a small island, where they were raised by a kind-hearted inn-keeper. But now, Azdar, a privateer serving the emperor of Valka (yes, this is the same world as TCo8Y), has docked his fleet on their island, bringing secrets and a looming war in his wake. Exciting right? I hope it will be, anyway. Please read and let me know what you think!
Hi all! Thank you so much to everyone for their continued to support! I'm sorry to say that I've taken "The Magician's Portrait" down, at least for the time being. After taking everyone's feedback into consideration, I've completed another revised draft that I'm going to try and see if I can get published. Wish me luck! (I'll need it . . . _;;)
One more update on "The Magician's Portrait"--I've spent quite a bit of time editing and revising, and now the most recent version is up for reading. :) I hope you enjoy the changes!
Hi all! Finally, FINALLY! I've finished "The Magician's Portrait!" In celebration of the end of the book, I've posted the last two chapters together. (So be careful . . . hopefully no one will accidentally go to Chapter 15 without reading Chapter 14 first.) This is the first time I've actually completed a longer story (not just a one-shot) so I'm extremely excited about that. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the end of the story! And don't forget to click that little review button at the end. ;) Seriously though, I'd love to know what you thought. Especially if you've got some constructive criticism for me.
Once more, thanks for reading, and enjoy the last two chapters!
Well, we're up to Chapter 11 of "The Magician's Portrait" now. I'm excited to say that the story is almost complete--just 4 more chapters, I think! Thank you so much to everyone who has continued to read! Please drop a comment and let me know what you think. :)
A Final Note:
I realize that I am still far from a professional level of writing, which is my eventual goal, so all reviews (especially those containing CC!) are appreciated enormously. So thanks again to those who bother to leave me some feedback.
You can also feel free to e-mail me with any questions, comments, suggestions, etc. Or just to say Hi!! I like getting e-mail _
As for my so-called homepage, it is currently a mess, and I would strongly recommend not going there. Eventually I hope to get a decent page going with maps and pictures and other fun stuff like that. But first I should get ahead on my writing a bit, and maybe post something, eh?
Well then, I believe that is all I have to say here for now. Thanks for checking out my profile, and hopefully my work as well!
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