Choleric Mist
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Joined 06-13-04, id: 418676
Author has written 32 stories for General, Romance, and General.
Hello,

I love writing; mostly stories but I write lots of poems.

The perfect CD for me:
Stone Sour- Inhale
One Secound Of Insanity- Butterfly Affect
KoRn- Twist- Scat Version
This Time Imperfect- AFI
Imaginary- Evanescence
Dead Skin- CrossFade
Pulse Of The Maggots- Slipknot
Enter Sandman- Metallica
Smells Like Teen Spirit- Nirvana
Fear Factory- Descent

Recomended Poem: Gossip because it is so true to me.
Recomended Story: Just The Friend

To me, I use to love getting reviews... now, I could not care less, if a poem never got a review. I love my work, this is me. I don't need to be bombarded with 10 reviews to be proud of it.

If you have any questions/comments feel free to email me at: collection_of_tears@

Random word: Philadelphia pepper pot

Choleric Mist AKA IcyTear
PS. I don't appretiate flames.

I also have a poems-and-quotes accout. Go to: http:///author.html?id=57060to check out some more of my stuff. I am Shadowed Poet :-)

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I'll Be Your Friend by Karbini27 reviews
Heather Smith, age 13, suffers an extreme case of bullying at her new school in the city. She gives up attending classes when she meets Maverick, who shows her the good and bad sides of the big city. COMPLETE
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 9,245 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 6/16/2005 - Published: 12/29/2004
The Real You by a falling star reviews
about how everyone tries to hide how they really are in order to fit in, and they trick themselves into becoming a whole other person. what if everyone is pretending a little bit, and so we don't really know our friends? Please R/R, I would appreciate it
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 737 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/24/2005
The Other Side of the Mirror by Never Knows Best reviews
A girl who has been betrayed by everyone she's ever known; a boy who has lost everything he's ever loved; their first meeting is through a traumatizing kidnapping experience, but can these two strangers find hope in each other?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 41 - Words: 83,903 - Reviews: 868 - Favs: 477 - Follows: 48 - Updated: 1/5/2005 - Published: 2/20/2003 - Complete
undiscerning customer by frisson rae reviews
evee's request poem. promises, you always made them to break them.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/17/2004
The Harmony Song Part 1 by Kormation reviews
Why people put 'part 1' in their titles has always confused me...especially if there's no intended part 2. There will be a part 2 if this ever happens. Its about the barriers between people...between our true selves...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/4/2004
The Puzzle Box by Vagabond Ace reviews
There are many things in this life that confuse and confound a man. This decadent Puzzle Box, with its lovely faces is certainly one of them. Beguiling and tempting it is.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/10/2004
My Dear Diary by Kaj reviews
if my diary had a voice.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 315 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/17/2004
Gothic by Crimson-Shaddow reviews
About being judged, not knowing some-one, and labelling them a name. Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/24/2004
Dark Night by Wishful Thinker reviews
you never know what's outside at night
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/2/2000
Tears by Cyanide reviews
This is a song I wrote when I was extremely depressed.
Poetry: Song - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/7/2000
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Decomposed Murderer reviews
Horrific poem about erasing the murderer from your life- from the perspective of the walking dead., tearing up a bleeding picture of her killer.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 352 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/25/2005
Mummification reviews
A factual poem about mummification in ancient Egypt. Truthful. Hope you learn something by reading it.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/25/2005
The Nothing reviews
A girl that breathes in the air that everyone chokes on. A withered rose, among the blooming. CRITIQUE WANTED! And favour will be returned!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/24/2005
The Knife reviews
A shining object above a lifeless figure.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/8/2005
Eternally Writing With Fear reviews
This is what many poets -and a lot of people- fear: Being forgotten. Kinda strange, I've added some internal rhyming in the third and fourth stanza. Please RnR and tell me what you think!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/1/2005
Them Part 2 reviews
This is an expanded version of my "them" poem: basically about 'them', the people who socially kill others. More description that my other one. RnR
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 369 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/21/2004
My Disintegrating Vampire reviews
My first Vampire poem... about a love that one mortal has for a Vampire that will never be there for her, unless he needs her. RnR
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/18/2004
Choleric Bitterness reviews
This is me... well, the extremity of me. Probably the poem that most describes me, I kinda like it :) please RnR!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/18/2004
Life is reviews
What would you say life is like?
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/1/2004
Tears For Your Birthday reviews
My mother's brother died when he was no older than 7. I tried to delve into her mind... and this is what I created. Please RnR
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/18/2004
Disjointed Wishes reviews
Have you ever...?
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/11/2004
Bound In Silver Chains reviews
Captured by cold chains, pained till death.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/11/2004
Suicide Lullaby reviews
The rhythm in which a person is dying in, the screeching sounds of melodic death. RnR Really wierd!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/8/2004
Bleeding Loss reviews
The boy doesn't know why his mother's body is on the floor, covered in red. He doesn't know why his father left the house. How naive, someone can be to death and murder. RnR Angsty
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/30/2004
The Black Bird reviews
Raven: Goth/punk teen with serious angst issues, father just deceased. Blayde: punk guy without a friend in the world, most think him as ‘scary’, he adores being feared. A club brings them together and may tear them apart. Angst/drama/romance, RnR!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,935 - Reviews: 15 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 9/23/2004 - Published: 7/17/2004
Rain reviews
Finding happiness in something as simple, something as normal as rain. For all rain lovers!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/22/2004
Called A Freak reviews
2nd one-shot fic from me. She is depressed all the time, cutting frequently, crying uncontrollably. Bleeding internally, wishing death. Why? Because she is a victim of school bullying. RnR
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,471 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9/5/2004
Real Pain reviews
Rated for themes of cutting. About being pushed to your emotional limit... and you kill yourself through their torment. RnR, I don't cut, but I had to write this!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/29/2004
Just The Friend reviews
While wrapping the rope around her neck, her whole life flashed before her. She was the friend who was always there, unknown. The friend who was left to clean up the mess and was always punished. Well, not anymore. RnR 1-shot. See if you get the msg.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,224 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/23/2004
JOY reviews
Hating someone so much you wished them dead... RnR, kind of different to the summary... I can't explain it.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/12/2004
Salty Madness reviews
Ever cried for no reason at all? Ever wondered why tears were falling? I do, this is my jottings of it. RnR
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/5/2004
Why? reviews
One simple word: why? Basically it's been echoing through my head, now I've let my thoughts out for all to read so please RnR
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/2/2004
All because of a bully reviews
A poem about being bullied, the pain it causes... hope it makes sense, sorry if it doesn't! RnR
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/30/2004
Them reviews
Basically about being teased and 'them', hard to explain. Different to my usual, and short, RnR!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/25/2004
Victim Of Anorexia reviews
Just what the title says, anorexia, a large problem faced by many. RnR
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/15/2004
Gossip reviews
The concequences gossiping has on us... please give me feedback, I want to know what you think!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/14/2004
Perfect image reviews
A Figure of perfection, consumed with hate.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/10/2004
The truth Behind reviews
The windows of a soul can be blocked.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/3/2004
Top of the rest reviews
One of my friends thinks she's better than everyone else, this is how I feel.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/3/2004
Unknown reviews
A girl who hides her true self
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/3/2004
Silly Ways reviews
A poem about a friend who has been going through guys quickly, her silly ways.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/18/2004
Darkness: A form of crimson reviews
It is funny how the two colours red and black are so alike...
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6/18/2004 - Published: 6/15/2004