Alhana Starbreeze
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Joined 06-24-04, id: 421060
Author has written 30 stories for War, Religion, General, Kids, Haiku, Nature, Love, General, Song, Fantasy, and Friendship.

Hey everyone! I'm back from winter vacation and ready to get back into the swing of things. I hope everyone had an interesting Christmas and New Years 'cuz I couldn't say the same about mine. Well, staying up all night watching movies was pretty cool. I have some new stuff heading your way. Hopefully I'll have time to keep writing when classes start again. Well, even if I don't I hope you will still read and review my older things. See you guys later!

Stuff about me.

Gender ~ Girl (duh!)

B-Day ~ 5/2

Religion ~ WELS Lutheran

Hair & Eyes~ Both dark brown

Authors I know on this site ~ softlycryingrain & Poet-of-Passion

Interests~ Anything to do with music, anything to do with art, and reading. Yup, writing isn't exactly one of my favorite things to do, but I do it anyway 'cause it's cool to see you guys review my stuff and actually say its good.

If you want to contact me for some reason~ jen_m_007@yahoo.com

Fav. Quote~ To love at all is to be vulnerable. ~C.S. Lewis

Quote of the Month~

It is not in the stars to hold our destiny, but in ourselves. ~ W. Shakespeare

Here are some quotes about poems if anyone is interested:

Poetry is the breath and finer spirit of all knowledge. ~ William Wordsworth

We do not enjoy poetry unless we know it to be poetry. ~ David Thoreau

Poetry is the best words in the best order. ~ Samuel Coleridge

Poetry is the voice of the best and happiest moments of the happiest and best minds. ~ Perey Byssne Shelle

"You may feel like a poet, but you sound like an idiot." ~ Roland- A Knight's Tale

Newsflash

Aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at an Elingsh uinervtisy, it deosn't mttaer in waht oredr the ltteers in a wrod are, the olny iprmoetnt tihng is taht frist and lsat ltteer is at the rghit pclae. The rset can be a toatl mses and you can sitll raed it wouthit porbelm. Tihs is bcuseae we do not raed ervey lteter by itslef but the wrod as a wlohe.

Interesting, isn't it? Plus it's so true. I will leave this up for a long while! Here is the other reseach I did about the Persian Ghazal. I hope that who ever reads this will give it a try because I am having a hard time doing it. I wish you better luck than I am having.

A Persian Ghazal is composed of many couplets (two-line stanzas). The rhyming pattern goes like this: aa ab ac ad ae af, ect... Each of the couplets are separate thoughts, so for instance, one could talk about basketball and the next one could be about flying or something. I hope that you will make an attempt to write one!

The Greatest Man in History Jesus had no servants, yet they called Him Master. Had no degree, yet they called Him Teacher. Had no medicines, yet they called Him Healer. He had no army, yet kings feared Him. He won no military battles, yet He conquered the world. He committed no crime, yet they crucified Him. He was buried in a tomb, yet He lives today. I feel honored to serve such a Leader who loves us! If you believe in God and his son Jesus Christ His Son, tell this to Everyone you meet. But if you choose to just ignore it, remember that Jesus said ... "If you deny me before man, I will deny you before my Father in Heaven."

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Through Her Eyes by Chains of Melody reviews
I am a little girl. My name is Mertha. I am a evil little girl. Bad and stupid and lazy. I wish Mother would forgive me for being so dumb. I really wish I was not so dumb. Maybe then my Father would return. Maybe then my Mother would love me again.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,454 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/24/2004
Lost by CovinS reviews
A teenager is trying to hide his past but is constantly confronted with his mistake, one in particular... A short story.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,149 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/1/2003
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The World Is Wrong
I was kinda depressed and angry when I wrote this, can you tell?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Published: 1/25/2008 - Complete
Legends and Eagles
Not sure if the title fits. Basicaly the poem symbolizes what ever you want it to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Published: 1/25/2008 - Complete
2 Short Verses reviews
These are just two random shor verses. The first has nothing to do with the second, trust me.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/25/2008 - Complete
In Christ, Love
This was originally written for a spanish assignment, so it's translated into english. That's why it doesn't really rhyme, sorry.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Published: 1/25/2008 - Complete
Tiger reviews
Powerful Creatures Haiku again, sorry
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/25/2008 - Complete
WHY? reviews
why
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/13/2006
More Haikus reviews
Poetry and Wind
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/13/2006
Up There reviews
Just a dream.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/2/2006
Reign of Fire reviews
My poem summarizing the Action Movie REIGN OF FIRE (constructive critizism apreciated)
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/18/2006
Biology reviews
A poem written during Prof. Duin's rambling.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/5/2006
Mythical Phoenix reviews
A Tanka About The Phoenix
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/23/2005
You're With Me reviews
God is always here.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7/22/2005
Music reviews
Music is my favorite thing, so of course, I just had to write a poem about it.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12/17/2004
Bees reviews
This is an alliteration poem. In case you don't know what that is, this poem should sound like bees with the words.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/17/2004
Love reviews
To me, it doesn't seem to flow right, but just read it and see what you think.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/17/2004
My Character Dies reviews
A really short story in which my character dies... I think.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 580 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/23/2004
The Quaint Cottage
A story about a little girl who just wanted a place of her own. A take off of the book MANDY.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,876 - Published: 10/23/2004
Lovin' You reviews
A poem that should be a song but couldn't think of the right tune.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10/23/2004
Speechless reviews
A poem from another's point of view
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/20/2004
Perfection reviews
Me being perfect? YA RIGHT!
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/7/2004
In The Valley reviews
A poem I wrote when I couldn't sleep.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/7/2004
Checkers reviews
Me and my sister playing checkers
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/24/2004
Haikus reviews
Poems about many things
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/24/2004
Frost reviews
Just something i thought up on my midnight walk
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/24/2004
My Tea Poem reviews
This is my grandma's favorite
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/24/2004
The Penguin reviews
Sheesh, here's a story that I wrote back in second grade. I didn't even know I had this!
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 312 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/24/2004
Limericks reviews
Here's some limericks I wrote way back in fourth grade
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/24/2004
My Poetic Life reviews
My first attempt at writing poetry
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6/24/2004
Creation reviews
My beliefs
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/24/2004
WWII reviews
A brief account of WWII
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/24/2004