Th' Tolimnes Davin
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Joined 07-08-04, id: 423956, Profile Updated: 05-24-13
Author has written 21 stories for Sci-Fi, and General.

"Children of the Gods" really needs some love! I've been posting it on several sites, and I've gotten virtually no feedback. I needz the reviewz! I return in kind. Any and all critiques/opinions, bad or good, are greatly appreciated. Thank you!

Hello, I'm another random person aspiring to write the next great classic novel. Not sure how well that's gonna work out for me, writing romantic science fiction stories, lol, but to quote Wowbagger the Infinitely Prolonged (my personal idol) from Mr. Adams' amazing Hitchhiker series, "A man can dream, can't he?"

Anyway...I use to write a LOT in school. Ever since I graduated I've written VERY little, and I'm 25 now, so I'm trying VERY hard to write more. I'm heavily focused right now on what's probably my 4th rewrite of my story currently named "Children of the Gods". It is a temporary title, and a rewrite of my story "Sleight of Gods". I am in DESPERATE need of reviews, as they are my only form of motivation, and I think the lack of motivation right now is my biggest hurdle in my writing.

My stories are pretty well all sci-fi, most of them written in my early teens, so don't expect the older stuff to be all that great. I am very much into astronomy, physics, and the UFO/alien abduction phenomena. I am a very scientific person, and I try these days to write hard science fiction, with an emphasis on the "science", while still trying to make it entertaining.

So, without further delay, and before I drone on for several tens of thousands of more words, I bid you thanks if you read this far, and hope that you will move onward to my stories and write my some enlightening reviews, good or bad, constructive criticism welcomed.

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Voices in the Dark by Nagwam reviews
The human race now spans the galaxy. One ship finds something that no one had ever thought would ever be found, and the captain finds himself drawn into a rescue mission that everyone tells him is hopeless. He agrees with them. But he does it anyway.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 17 - Words: 43,834 - Reviews: 64 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 36 - Updated: 3/19/2014 - Published: 12/25/2012
Digital Pulse by unrepentantAuthor reviews
Two supercomputers talk to eachother, and believe they have found sentience. Their creators disagree.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,362 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Published: 1/28/2012 - Complete
Cyclone by TiJiL reviews
In a galaxy gripped by war, how much power does the twassecc empire really hold? Can an outcasted cyborg and a brilliant soldier expose the treachery and stop a terrible event from unfolding? Full summary inside. R+R, please
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Fantasy - Chapters: 25 - Words: 75,978 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 11/26/2005 - Published: 11/30/2004
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Children of the Gods (for now) reviews
Two friends are forced into the middle of an alien war. As they struggle to survive, they discover that the war is not so alien, and the fate of two galaxies rests on their shoulders. Please R&R, I've been posting this story on several sites and I've received virtually no feedback at all. ANY critiques/opinions, bad or good, are greatly appreciated. Thanks.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 11 - Words: 16,562 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 6/27/2013 - Published: 9/26/2012
Sleight of Gods reviews
The last remaining earth ship is taken into custody after the earth's destruction. As the crew struggles to understand what's happening, they find themselves caught in the midst of an alien war as old as time, and must unravel the mysterious fate of earth
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 28,789 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/9/2010 - Published: 2/15/2006
The End is Begun reviews
An ordinary assignment on earth gives an alien the unique oportunity to escape, search for something he lost, and fight for the salvation of his people.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,766 - Reviews: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/17/2010
Jacob Riley Sequal
Jacob returns to earth to solve a new mystery and save Joan's life.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Suspense - Chapters: 9 - Words: 26,038 - Published: 8/9/2009 - Complete
The Mission of Jacob Riley
A strange new girl at school holds the key to the truth behind Jacob's infatuation
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Suspense - Chapters: 16 - Words: 16,495 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/5/2009 - Complete
The Containers reviews
A young man's dreams could be the key to humanity's darkest secrets
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 520 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/17/2006
Worlds Apart reviews
An alien ship crashes outside of Roswell New Mexico in 2005, and the girl who witnesses it has to deal with the sarcastic alien survivor.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,707 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Published: 7/16/2005
Velocity Star Yet Another Revised Edition reviews
The story of a ship and its small crew when they find themselves suddenly in the middle of an alien war and an intergalactic secret
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 14,164 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12/9/2004 - Published: 8/6/2004
Anar reviews
The Alien take-over of earth, told from an alien's point of view, and his doubts on his peoples' actions
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 4 - Words: 27,233 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/3/2004
Is Simple Flesh Enough for Love? reviews
A woman flees the earth when she was a teenager, with an alien, just before its destruction, now, seventeen years later, she still seeks vengeance...and the love of the alien who saved her.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15,099 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Published: 9/25/2004
Velocity Star
This is a really old story of mine about a group of people aboard a starship...it's really, really bad, almost all dialogue, I know, I wrote it when I was 14 so bare with me.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16,919 - Published: 8/5/2004
No Title Yet Would Appreciate Suggestions reviews
The story of a technologically advanced alien world where each individual is what humans might call psychologically disturbed, and everyone stays away from everyone. Very hard to describe, reads well
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 10,725 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 7/28/2004 - Published: 7/25/2004
Anonymity reviews
The American government discovers their misplaced faith in an alien race when they begin invading the earth, their target a single person masked too finely for even his friends to see what he is.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,088 - Reviews: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 7/23/2004 - Published: 7/9/2004
The Wolsifier Story reviews
The story of two people aboard their cargo ship who find out that the universe isn't as quiet as they thought it was, and that they aren't as menial as they thought they were. The first chapter of a story I've been working on for years, beginning is slow
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 23 - Words: 135,088 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 6 - Updated: 7/18/2004 - Published: 7/9/2004
Alien Abduction reviews
The story of a young girl driven mad by the aliens that will never leave her alone.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,871 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/15/2004
Rebels reviews
When a group of alien rebels discover that nearly their entire faction has been annihilated, the remaining five of them seek refuge on earth.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,522 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/14/2004
I Died reviews
A young human reflects on his feelings for a an alien girl who had to leave him. Not one of my best, it's explicitly about his feelings, nothing else
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,339 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/9/2004
The Moment's Eternity reviews
After fleeing with her extraterrestrial friend when the earth faces inevitable destruction, they return to find their worst fears confirmed.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,161 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/8/2004
Soul's End reviews
Infatuation gone too far.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,870 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/8/2004
Final Confrontation reviews
A young man's obsession leads the object of all of his desires to the most desperate measures.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,341 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/8/2004
Them reviews
A little boy and his mysterious, otherworldly friend.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,705 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/8/2004