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Joined 07-10-04, id: 424088
Author has written 13 stories for War, Life, General, Love, Fantasy, Humor, and Romance.
Quick facts about myself:

Age: 19
Sex: F
School: College

This is my apology: I AM SOOOO SORRY!! TT_TT

I know excuses are useless, but I think I need to offer you guys an explanation for my disappearance. So here it is: College. Ahhhh, okay, so in 2005-06, I was applying to colleges, in summer 2006 I was freaking out over college and going on various trips, and that is why I didn't update. Oh, and in 2006-07, I was in college, so... I am soooo sorry for not updating in so long! Specifically for not giving you the ending to The Music of the Spheres. I honestly had hit a roadblock and didn't know what to do, but this year, after reading Harry Potter and seeing how Rowling resolved her themes, I got an idea to finish and fix the old, uber-happy/unrealistic ending I had originally typed. Therefore, below is the COMPLETE Music of the Spheres. I hope you enjoy, and feel free to kick me in the knees for taking so long.

Also, I have to thank my reviewers whose comments gave me the courage to go back and finish what I'd started:
Alankria
Accalia Aeryn
Anime Freakizoid
Phoebe Meryll
temblance

Thank you so much for your support, and once again, I apologize whole-heartedly for the wait. I hope you like it - if not, then all was for naught... Haha, no...then just let me know what's wrong with it. And once again, I'm sorry! TT_TT

Update: I took down Rendezvous at Eternity because I want to fix it (since I workshopped it in my Fiction Writing class) and maybe publish it someday... All the stuff I've been reading about first North American publishing rights is really getting to me - I don't want to be forced to publish anything as a reprint if it's only been posted (for free) on Fictionpress. Scary stuff; do magazines have policies on that? Well, anyway...thank you SO MUCH to my reviewers (few as you may be):
Alaneer
Alankria
Accalie Aeryn
BlueJayWalking
dry sherry
Dying Without Gackt
ice flyer

Muchas gracias and wish me luck, as I wish for you!

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When Time Sleeps by temblance reviews
The true story of Sleeping Beauty, told by her Fairy guardian: The one who knew Sleeping Beauty would have been better off dead...
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 23 - Words: 775 - Reviews: 499 - Favs: 72 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 12/20/2010 - Published: 6/8/2005
Genesis by Alankria reviews
Said the snake to Eve, I was created by a different God on a different world... the fruit of the Tree will grant you knowledge of all I have told you and more. Short story.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,346 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 8 - Published: 5/23/2006 - Complete
Headache by Carradine reviews
The lives of a two violent individuals intersect at a Borders Books & Music store. M for language, prolonged action sequences, gore and sensuality. Please review!
Fiction: Action - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 31 - Words: 39,754 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 7 - Updated: 1/15/2006 - Published: 10/2/2004 - Complete
The Things I Do For You by skunk reviews
OLD. slash, Dylan isn't someone anyone strives to be, in fact he wouldn't mind being someone else but when life hands you lemons... complete
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 16 - Words: 37,519 - Reviews: 140 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 8/19/2005 - Published: 6/15/2005 - Complete
Bittersweet Memories by Accalia Aeryn reviews
Kyle didn't have the happiest childhood anybody could wish for, but is determined to get past it all. So just why is the only person that could help him trying to stand in the way and be more like him?
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 10 - Words: 17,968 - Reviews: 61 - Favs: 10 - Updated: 8/12/2005 - Published: 6/17/2005
Blinkers and Me by bjw reviews
Some of my lessshown thoughts about school and life..RR..
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/10/2005 - Complete
Show them your not afraid by insanity is sane reviews
To be smart you have to be able to take pain
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/5/2005
Paper Chase by bjw reviews
Newbie alert! Is being an A student so glorious after all? an essay I wrote sometime back RR!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,224 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/20/2005 - Complete
Answer This One, Shakespeare by temblance reviews
Please tell me that all the world is not a stage...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 96 - Favs: 26 - Published: 5/16/2005
The Haunted Lighthouse by FlyinMySoup reviews
Pepsi Remington has a crazy mother, talks to ghosts, and has to move into a lighthouse. Chapter 3 is up! Please R&R! This is my first attempt at a children's story.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,856 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 3/8/2005 - Published: 7/26/2004
A Wished Fate by Turbo Cookie reviews
Book 1 of the Star Saga :Has anyone ever told you that if you wished on a star, the wish would come true? And has anyone ever told you to be careful what you wish for? Well it's true. . . .I wished a wish and I wished for adventure. . . .
Fiction: Manga - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 33 - Words: 47,333 - Reviews: 122 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 12/11/2004 - Published: 10/11/2003
As Always by ThinkerBelle reviews
this is a sad poem but it has absolutely nothing to do with me.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 346 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/30/2004
Eating the Rifle by Lisa Jane reviews
Mary gets the ultimate revenge on her cheating partner, the mailman. David thinks she's lost it. [A short piece I had to write using the first line in ten minutes]
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 313 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/29/2004
Give Me the Stars by RadioactiveSquirl reviews
Ultimate joy and happiness...
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/15/2004
I love you by Razorblade-X reviews
I think the title pretty much says it all
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/15/2004
A Glass Echo by Big City Target reviews
A poem about how discouraged you can get when you crush your own dreams. Rated PG-13 for language.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/14/2004
Broken Mirrors by Katharina Minola reviews
A little twisted, but please r&r
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/14/2004
Ice by silverspitfire reviews
A surreal poem that I had to write for Creative Writing class. Inspired by a dream...
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/12/2004
Jibun no Jisatsu by Nekojin-Fenix reviews
Self Suicide
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/11/2004
Stupid People Will Believe by slave to the voices reviews
Rated for la few curse words. My answer to sashay amour'e's funny story challege. Stupid people will believe anything you tell them, but who decides who is stupid?
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 801 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 4 - Published: 5/17/2004
Untitled by dry sherry reviews
Hidden confessions and supressed feelings.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 356 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/8/2004
Night Girl by Roadside Dryer reviews
I am not your night girl, i don't belong to you.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 255 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/17/2004
Sunsets Are Overrated by Inky Razor reviews
Brite finds himself in a foreign land with no one but a grumpy warlord for company. Then there's the bit with the dragons, wizards, and amphibious pirates. Oh well, someone has to be the hero.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,966 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 2/5/2004
The Flow of Words by Ed Girl reviews
I wanted to do a free flowing poem using words to discribe and to add detail. I wanted to make a poem that sounded good to the ears. Please read tell me what you think
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 5 - Published: 8/8/2002
A Vicious Circle by Perpetua reviews
This is a poem about my...ummm...sickness? Er...it's kinda disturbing, so don't read it if you don't like being put into a depressing mood
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/3/2001
Shadow Kites by Ashes reviews
dark stuff
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/10/2001
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The Music of the Spheres COMPLETE reviews
Love and sacrifice, with the worlds hanging in the balance. Please R&R.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 16,138 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8/5/2007 - Published: 8/4/2007 - Complete
Laundry and Prayer reviews
Love and laundry. Inspired by a painting of Paris.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 711 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/4/2007 - Complete
Firewater Spells reviews
A short piece about a mage in love. Please R&R. Rest and Relax...while you Read and Review.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 760 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/4/2007 - Complete
The Music of the Spheres OLDER VERSION reviews
Old copy of this story. Will be deleted after new version is fully loaded.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,958 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 7/25/2005 - Published: 7/16/2005
The Heart of War reviews
Only through pain do we verify life... Short story about a soldier. Please R&R! Happy Fourth of July.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,513 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/4/2005
The Arts of Fire reviews
The fires of the soul are burning... Fantasy meets philosophy; the abolishment of good and evil.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 11,012 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 6/30/2005 - Published: 5/31/2005
Park Benches: A True Story reviews
What if park benches could talk? Let the hilarity ensue! (Somebody shoot me for writing that...)
Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 923 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/31/2005
The Moon Was a Daydream reviews
On HIATUS due to writer's block. Sword and sorcery, and sword-sorcery. Three friends bound by blood and the way of the sword.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 15,933 - Reviews: 43 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 11/25/2004 - Published: 7/23/2004
Will You Forget? reviews
After her divorce, a young woman wonders if her ex will forget and move on.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 514 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/15/2004
Alexander reviews
A poem about Alexander the Great and his thoughts leading up to his death.
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 7/15/2004
Silent Death reviews
Short story. The narrator only has memories left for support, and those are fading fast.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 257 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/12/2004
What's Important? reviews
When it comes right down to it, what really matters? Which life would you choose?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 4 - Published: 7/11/2004
Ruins reviews
Written after 9/11 with mixed feelings of anger, sorrow, and disgust. Not particularly political or patriotic.
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/10/2004