Weeba
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Joined 07-21-04, id: 426295
Author has written 30 stories for Essay, Family, Kids, Biography, Life, Friendship, Young Adult, General, Nature, Mythology, General, Thriller, Politics, School, and Historical.

This whole kitten-kaboodle (yes I do realize it is kit and kaboodle; I like it better this way) is dedicated to my friend Viva (nickname: Weeba (hence my penname); didn't give her real name, so don't get any ideas), who introduced me to writing (if unwittingly) in the first place, by showing me the wonderful world of fanfiction. Huggles, Weeba! Thanks.

I am 14 years old, female, and I love to write. I started out with fanfiction, but got increasingly into narrative and poetry, and now fanfiction is a mere memory to me. I'd like to write a book, but I'm kind of spinning my wheels on that. I'm waiting for the fiction course I'll take next summer at CTY (I hope!). This whole thing actually stems from the writing course I took last summer, also at CTY; it really made me a better writer, and now I'm obsessed. Reviews are very much appreciated, with CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!!!! Most of what I put up will not be on its final draft yet, but waiting for nice writer-people like you to give their opinions. However, flames are not necessary, so don't bother with them. Thank you.

Things I want in reviews:

-suggestions on how to make it better

-if you don't have any suggestions, or you can't think of anything bad to say, why is it good?

Things I DON'T want in reviews:

-flaming without a reason; if you think it's bad, tell me why
-an apathetic "it's good" without any kind of reason. That's useless to me.
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Please, please, PLEASE read and review these people. They rox. All of them.
K then, I'm done. Happy reading.

P.S. If I reviewed you, and you'd like a particular work of yours reviewed that I didn't get to, drop me a line; I'm happy to help out. Come to that, do that even if I haven't found you yet. Also, I'm one of those nice people who reciprocates reviews, so reviewing me will get you something in return! I know how hard it is to get your work commented on. I encourage others to do this, too; it's just common decency in the writing world to give back what you get. Thank you!

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Cerise Tear by KuroKumo Yume reviews
Chapter four has been removed. I hate that chapter. I'll rewrite a new one and put it in it's place. or I might not. N ones reading it. So I might just forget about it.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,376 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 1/21/2005 - Published: 8/4/2004
Beginning of August by Cendrillo reviews
For a old friend. The loss of innocence isn't always so obvious.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 651 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/28/2004
Lingering Reverie by Laurelines reviews
I wrote this is 7th grade, but rewrote it a few minutes ago when I realized it was bad because we were given a template to write it with...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/16/2004
Gay Is Okay! by Namir Swiftpaw reviews
An essay I wrote about why I believe homosexuals should be allowed to get married. DO NOT FLAME ME FOR MY OPINIONS. If you disagree, feel free to do so in a civil manner.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 889 - Reviews: 290 - Favs: 71 - Follows: 3 - Published: 3/14/2003
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Brenna: Synesthetic Greetings reviews
Due 4/26 for a class. A meeting with my best friend, who is synesthetic.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/23/2006
Joke's On You reviews
An excerpt from a story about a camp for smart kids.Going to contest Nov.18, so PLEASE REVIEW!
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 949 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/25/2005
Blocked reviews
Desperately grabbing at watery words that won't come through onto pages...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9/24/2005
American Heritage reviews
American heritage is different for everyone. I've always felt like I was somehow un-American because of mine. This is a short free-write about my story.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 437 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/22/2005
Considering Stairs reviews
Thinking about staircases at a writing camp makes strange ideas emerge...found a rough draft of this in a journal from said camp and modified it some.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 580 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/21/2005
Connections Made at Midnight reviews
There are some things you just don't think about...but sometimes you can't help it, and that's how wisdom begins, but it's also how sadness and tragedy begin.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 754 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/7/2005
Sensations of Summer reviews
Some of the less appreciated joys of summer...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6/5/2005
Candles for 911 reviews
Birthdays on the terrible day. No complaining about category; it'll be history someday, you know. It almost is now.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/4/2005
Pastel Patterns reviews
Follow a little girl's life from kindergarten to old age, all through her pastel creations...
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 605 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/24/2005
Poetry Assignment reviews
I hate poetry assignments. Read this and find out why.
Poetry: School - Rated: K+ - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5/24/2005
Counting Stars reviews
The memory of Atlantis still bitter on their tongues, they talk desperately of trips to Mars and making peace and counting stars...
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/22/2005
Tangled and Torn reviews
Lessons we learn the hard way...rated T for potentially distressing subject matter.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 503 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/4/2005
In a Dark, Dark Room reviews
What started as a game turns into a nightmare, and a whole circle of people stand helplessly by...
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 576 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/24/2005
The Lost and Found reviews
What will you find in your school's lost and found? Maybe these things...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4/16/2005
Stone Doll reviews
She and her village are lost, forgotten...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/16/2005
The Night Watchman reviews
High, high above the earth, the Spinner of Tops sits working...
Fiction: Mythology - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 602 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/22/2005
Fireflies reviews
Their lights create wonder on a lazy summer night...
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 2/15/2005
Unfinished Sentence reviews
An unfinished sentence, and so many people never even saw the beginning...
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 641 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2/15/2005
Honeysuckle Year reviews
It sounds like a love story, but it's not. Lonely boy meets lonely girl. A bond is formed, and boundaries are broken. PG-13 for themes on..death.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,331 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 11/6/2004 - Published: 9/13/2004
The First Thing You Notice reviews
The first thing you notice is their eyes... REVISED!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 403 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/15/2004
Coffee Shop Sketches reviews
Just what it sounds like. Sketches of people I see in coffee shops, restaurants, etc. PG for real life.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 522 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/2/2004
Looking, Thinking, Feeling, Being reviews
A little series of character explorations of people I know, from my crush of two years, to my underestimated chorus teacher, to my worst enemy. Previously
Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 998 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 8/25/2004 - Published: 7/21/2004
I Remember reviews
About growth, leaving things behind. Inspired by Nentikobe's "Miss". I recomment that one, by the way.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/13/2004
Black Sheep reviews
You don't have to be in the spotlight to be special.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8/10/2004
Nothing reviews
Very angsty; wrote it just after my best friend's parents got divorced. About my own reaction to it. Please R&R.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8/2/2004
When I'll Feel Like That reviews
My brother and his girlfriend are so happy...a little poem on how I feel about them. Please R&R.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8/1/2004
The Last Campfire reviews
Just a little account of the last day at my Girl Scout camp, my thoughts, reminisces, that kind of thing. Please R&R!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 969 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/22/2004
Watching from the Wings reviews
Rather a sad little character thumbnail sketch of a little girl in the wings. Please R&R, I'm still working on it.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 312 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7/21/2004
A Child's Stories reviews
A little poem about my Nana Molly. Just read it, please. I think you'll like it.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/21/2004
A Desperate Chase Down Memory Lane reviews
An essay playing with the idea of the "stroll down Memory Lane". I'm still working on it, so comments are very much appreciated.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 815 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7/21/2004