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Author has written 45 stories for Friendship, Love, General, Family, Religion, Essay, Young Adult, and General.

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Online Romance by Lady DreamWriter reviews
For anyone whose found love online
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/21/2005
Last Time by Chaotic Charisma reviews
You screwed me over and pissed me off for the last time deal, though I never actually say THAT. I know, I've "beaten this subject to death" apparently, but, I was ticked. I meant it then, I probably don't now, but whatever.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/25/2005
Bastard by Chaotic Charisma reviews
For all the people who loved you and left you. Randomly. Usually without a goodbye. Friggin' bastards. Yes, this one has swears... it's my new favorite though.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 497 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/24/2005
who is she? by poetic abortion reviews
[in memory of my great grand mother] your words (who is she) will always hurt.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 291 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/17/2005
Too Late by Chaotic Charisma reviews
Holding back when you really, really shouldn't. Not saying goodbye or I love you when you should. Now it's too late. I really wish I didn't let him go without saying what I should have.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/10/2005
wilted by poetic abortion reviews
[warning: teen angst] flowers often die when the sun does not take the time to care.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 6 - Published: 1/21/2005
The Gift by Deavon Brooks reviews
The patterns of humans and how they try to stay alive (emotionally). What causes them pain and suffering, joy and happiness.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 4 - Words: 630 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 1/11/2005 - Published: 1/3/2005
Regression by Chaotic Charisma reviews
I won't apologize when I don't know what I did, and you're being a drama queen, the same way I used to be, and I love you, but you won't believe me, so I hope you have fun figuring yourself out cuz I'm sure not sticking around.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 236 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/11/2005
Is This How It ENDS? by bobluver reviews
It's a true love story.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/20/2004
Reason by Deavon Brooks reviews
Being replaced by someone and watching them live the life you should have really angers some people...Don't know what I'm talking about but would like to find out? Read this poem.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 4 - Published: 12/15/2004
Loss by Deavon Brooks reviews
it's just another poem, same old same. (i actually put some thought into this one, though)
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/12/2004
Good Riddance Odium by Deavon Brooks reviews
One of my guy-inspired poems. I left a part out. the one with the "..."s email me if you want me to tell you what i wrote. I think it's a little to personal to be posted on the poem itself.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 278 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 3 - Published: 11/16/2004
Holding me back by Souls-Of-Kieran reviews
I hate that I only can do whats right according to you, you make me sick when you tell me I can be anything I wont only to tell me I have to do it your way, so BACK OFF!
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 336 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 8 - Published: 10/12/2004
Sunshine through the rain by Ebony Rain Fall reviews
written as a song in one of my stories, not posted on here, but i put it under here since the thing never got words
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 346 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/24/2004
Love by lifeisbeautiful reviews
Thing being more than what they appear
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/27/2004
Transition by Chaotic Charisma reviews
you said you'd always talk to me/ don't you dare fall away/ I don't know what it is you see/ I don't mind if you don't say/ ... I'd rather not know that risk losing a friend.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/8/2004
Ignorance by Cloud Burst reviews
Ignorance
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/31/2004
Him by AmberBloom reviews
I love him, but can't have him
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 406 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/20/2004
First time by Absolutely pointless reviews
My attempt at a funny poem. Read if you want.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/16/2004
why by daffodils-are-my-favorite reviews
my parents got divorced, and my dad and i dont get along, so i have to live with my mom, but i have a boyfriend that i truely do love, and he lives in the same place as my dad, not my mom...my dad lives in Japan, my mom in the US...R&R appreciated
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 496 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/13/2004
Caged by this is my love for you reviews
I want to break free, but I am drowning in darkness.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/27/2004
Blinded by Bbyblue222 reviews
This is my favorite so far, it did it's job well.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 5 - Published: 5/12/2003
I Could by Namir Swiftpaw reviews
I'm not sure what to classify this as...stupid? WHY IS THERE NOT A STUPID GENRE! I wrote in five seconds...I'm so mad at my ex-boyfriend, AGAIN. I hate him, but I don't...which is kinda what this is about.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/20/2002
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Crayon reviews
Just a short four-lined poem I thought of yesterday. "If I were any color of crayon..."
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/29/2005
The Serenity Was Deadly
She wanted nothing more than to be accepted as a child of the night. She finally found her purpose.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 456 - Published: 9/24/2005
Awoken reviews
Everything I’ve wanted to say, will not be spoken; the words aren't worth my time, my soul's been awoken.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/21/2005
Is Gone reviews
The outside is all I have, what I feel inside is gone...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/20/2005
More reviews
About when you love someone, but you may love somebody else more...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/28/2005
All I Needed reviews
"All I needed was a hand to hold and a reason to live..."
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/15/2005
Shatter reviews
Mia loved Leo with her whole heart and soul, but Leo broke her heart. Something about Mia still lingers in his mind, how can he find out what it is?
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 8 - Words: 5,982 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 7/27/2005 - Published: 1/16/2005
Fake
She hadn't had but another choice but to become everything she wasn't. But she was fake. And she had only herself to blame.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 409 - Published: 7/21/2005
I'm Not Stupid reviews
I know what you did, and I'm not stupid. I will not stand for it any longer. You cheating scumbag!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/15/2005
Would You Be Mine reviews
I know it didn't work out before, but one more time, could you try? Just one more time, would you be mine?
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/10/2005
Arrow reviews
Falling into despair, there is nowhere to turn. Your whole life seems to fall apart... like grains of sand slipping through your fingers...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/4/2005
I Refuse reviews
I refuse to be used again and again. I will not be picked up then thrown down...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Parody/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/27/2005
Perish reviews
About how your heart breaks when a friend is moving away, and after learning this it uncovers feelings for him you forgot you had.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/17/2005
The Cemetery reviews
Everyone around me seems to be dying, so am I dying too?
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/23/2005
It's Not Fair reviews
Her family is falling apart. No one seems to understand her. It's just not fair.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 419 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/14/2005
The Valentine's Day Dance reviews
I went to the Valentine's Day dance, hoping for someone, only to return with confusion in the heart.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 377 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/5/2005
The Ultimate Low
About how two of my friends, one of them being my ex, got together and how it is affecting me. Mostly vent.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 293 - Published: 1/24/2005
The Crimson Tears I Cried reviews
I wrote this when I had a really bad day. "Not a soul ever saw or believed, the crimson tears I cried."
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/20/2005
One Minute reviews
'One minute,' I told her. She didn't hear and her anger and frustration came out on me. I suffered.
Poetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 563 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/12/2005
What He's Missing reviews
He wants to stay with her, but, will he ever see what he's missing?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 328 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/12/2005
Thoughts On You reviews
About my ex-boyfriend... our crumbling relationship now, as friends.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 573 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/3/2005
I Want reviews
I wrote this a while ago... about how I felt for a while about my ex, who I had become friends with once again.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/3/2005
Though We've Grown reviews
Definitely not my best work... read if you want to. I was just bored... about me and my friend/ ex-boyfriend. We are still friends even though we've grown.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/1/2005
Bitter Words of A Mended Heart reviews
All the emotions of a break up lead up to one thing- a mended heart with a lot on its mind.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 450 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/29/2004
Glass Boxes reviews
My first poem based on the name, not name based on poem. "Love reminds me of decorative glass boxes."
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/28/2004
Burn Away reviews
Just burn away... you have nothing to live for... that's what you tell yourself.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/15/2004
Murder, Death reviews
Just kill me with your own two hands, so my blood can stain you forever.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/15/2004
A Tomorrow reviews
I'm giving you a tomorrow... even if I will hurt and hate myself for the rest of my life.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/14/2004
I Don't Want Another Chance reviews
But you don’t understand/Love is not by chance/You can't hope for it to come along/If you want true romance
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/3/2004
Snow's Gift to Me reviews
All I want for Christmas is someone to love... will I get this wish?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/2/2004
Young Love
Young love... everything seems so true. But then when you grow up you see how blind you actually were...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Published: 11/30/2004
I Pay the Price
I fell for you, I knew what would happen, now I pay the price.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Published: 11/30/2004
Prince reviews
There's no happy ending in this fairy tale.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 274 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/28/2004
I Forgive You reviews
Some people just don't want to let go... especially when they cheated on you. I can forgive, so lets just forget about it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/23/2004
Writer's Block reviews
This is how I feel when I get writer's block, which happens a lot.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/21/2004
Too Young to Die reviews
A girl just died this Friday. It is true, and my dad was the principal.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 403 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/6/2004
Does He Care? reviews
I just feel this way about God right now, I really don't want to, I just do.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/6/2004
Friends Aren't True reviews
One of my friends was wasting my patience on her own greed and immaturity. PG-13 for a cuss word here and there.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/2/2004
Stolen reviews
She stole my dream. It's not fair at all.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 696 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/23/2004
I'll Be Seeing You Soon reviews
For anyone who has lost someone dear to them...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/16/2004
The Mistake reviews
Don't make this mistake unless you are sure...read to find out.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/15/2004
Till the End reviews
Another poem about how I felt after my boyfriend dumped me.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 275 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/3/2004
Too Bad
Too bad, too bad, too bad. My heart is broken... all these choices you make tear my soul.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 288 - Published: 9/26/2004
My Gentle Purpose reviews
About a guy... I don't know... it means nothing to me now, the emotions are gone.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/25/2004
I Can't I Won't
About one of my guy friends I thought I had romantic feelings for. It didn't work out but this is how I felt.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Published: 9/24/2004