If Only You Knew
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Joined 07-23-04, id: 426874
Author has written 13 stories for Life, Love, and General.
My names Melody and I wanted to have a place where I could post my poems and get some honest feedback. Im going to put all of the poems Ive written on here even though I hate almost all of them. Please leave me reviews and tell me what you honestly think even if you think they suck.
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pain by my living fairytale reviews
still more on how i iz feeling
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/16/2004
Burned by Amane Hasegawa reviews
Being tricked by someone always hurts, but being tricked by someone you trusted hurts even more.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/11/2004
My World by Amane Hasegawa reviews
My world used to be so great, but now I'm not so sure I want to be here anymore.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/11/2004
Addicted to pain by darkmistresslae reviews
A girl with an addiction, but not to a drug. Rated for content. R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/18/2004
Darkness by onethousandtears reviews
Personal. Just very personal.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/18/2004
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Will You Still Love Me? reviews
Sometimes I feel like no one really knows my soul and if they ever did, they wouldnt love me anymore.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/25/2005
Big Brother
I wrote this poem about my brother. Its probably hard to understand w/o knowing everything thats happened with him and my family but I hope you can get the jist of it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/3/2004
Free reviews
This poem might be hard to understand without knowing the story behind it so basically.. one of my only true friends doesnt accept me anymore because I dont believe in God. She doesnt accept who I am if I dont accept God. Sorry its in paragraph form.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/12/2004
Everything Is Fine reviews
This is what goes through my mind when Im cutting myself...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/10/2004
Numb reviews
Lately I've been really confused about how I feel. I just want to lay down and die sometimes.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/10/2004
Untitled reviews
I wrote this about my boyfriend. I love him more than aaaanyone else in the world and I worked hard on this poem so I hope you like it!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/29/2004
Something Real reviews
I really dont like this one but I wanted to put in here anyways. I had a hard time getting out the feeling I was having but this is basically about how everyone thinks Im conceited but Im really not.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/26/2004
I Dont Know Anything reviews
I love David soooooo much.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/24/2004
I Love Him reviews
I wrote this right after an amazing guy asked me out. I had recently been spiraling very deep into depression and I did not want to have to deal with another hurt. Luckily though its 5 months later and we're still together.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/24/2004
Leave reviews
I was in a very suicidal mood when I wrote this one. It was over a period of a few days and more and more questions just kept popping up in my head and I had to get them out somehow.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/24/2004
Everyday
This one is about all of the self-hate that I used to carry with me. Luckily thats all pretty much over now but I can still feel what I felt when I wrote this.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Published: 7/24/2004
Why? reviews
This one came to me one day when I was at school. I had relapsed into self mutilation and I was very confused and depressed.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/24/2004
Whats Missing? reviews
I think this is my best poem so far. I wrote it one night when I was really depressed. Thats basically when I write all of my poems but oh well.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/24/2004