Shinyfighter
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Joined 08-14-04, id: 430962
Author has written 90 stories for Action, Life, General, Friendship, Religion, Humor, School, Haiku, Family, Song, Nature, Love, Politics, and Fantasy.

I am now dedicating my time in doing strictly poetry...no more fiction for the moment. Not that anyone was reading my fiction anyways...Waddever's if you guys like my stuff then please feel free to review them...even if you don't like them tell me why. If you have questions or anything else...please feel free to contact me via email.

Shiny's Poetry Writing Tip: Write in the most creative way that you can think of...

Shiny's Reviewing Style: When I review poetry, I tend to say what's actually on my mind. If I reviewed your stuff and then told you something that you don't like...don't listen to it. I'm nowhere close to being anywhere near the greatest poet on Earth so everything I say is based on my own perception of the piece of work. Please don't feel bad if I really tore up your artwork with my criticism and hopefully what I said will actually help you out in the long run.

My Favorite of my poems right now is: Broken Bulb

Age: 20
State: California Blah
Career Choice: Film/Television
Hobbies: Music, Martial Arts, Computer
And that's all you need to know for now...

Wanna See My Ugly Mug???

(10-28-04)I've just recieved in the mail a certificate of achievement from poetry.com saying that my poem "I don't know you" has just been chosen for Poetry.com's Editor's Choice Award!

(1-23-05)I've officially began writing poetry again! Hopefully my creative juice won't run out like it did last time. I have about 5-6 new poems for all yall to read! More is soon to come...

(3-18-05)As you all can tell I'm starting to post new poetry ever other day now...I hope yall enjoy it!

(3-20-05)I've just found a bunch of poetry pieces that I wrote back in 2002. I'll be typing them up and posting them soon.

(3-24-05)I just went on a poetry writing frenzy today! All except "Untitled" are brand new so enjoy!

(6-2-05)It's just about that time again for me to start posting new material. Hope you all enjoy it! OMG 59 poems???

(6-9-05)WHOA...I just recieved this in my email box..."

Dear Vincent,

I would like to inform you of your nomination as Poet of the Year for 2005, and to personally invite you to read your poetry at the single largest gathering of poets in history, where you will be formally inducted as an International Poet of Merit and Honored Member of our Society for 2005-2006."

That's pretty friggin sweet...only thing is that it costs like $600 to register for the convention...NO THANK YOU. I'm not rich...I'm a poet...

(10-20-05) I have been writing...but I've been to busy and too lazy to publish them on this site. Here are three of my new ones, Rust being my favorite for now.

(1-31-06) I've been really slacking off when it comes to writing more stuff. I usually write them when I'm sitting in class dozing off. The new sememster just started for me so expect some more material coming soon.

(4-8-06) We began studying about poetry this week in my English 101 class, so I decided to make two more of my own for your viewing pleasure. at this rate I'm only pumping out like 1 poem every 2 months or so

(4-9-06) I just realized that just about all of my more recent poems don't have any type of rhyming schemes and I can't seem to determine if I should consider that a good thing or not. Maybe I should try to make one or two new pieces with the rhyming again? I'm so confused...)
I'd like to say thank you to those who have taken the time to review my work. It's truely my fuel to keep on writing; otherwise I'd probably spend most of my time doing video games or watching Jap anime

(1-5-07) So just like I stated above...I've been playing video games and watching Japanese anime. I want to thank simpleplan13 for always taking time to check out my stuff and give reviews on them. I might slowly start to begin writing again if I feel the need to. But don't expect me to dump them out by the dozens like I've used to. If you guys have any spare time I made a forum to mess around on (Creative Impulse Forum)

(8-3-07) Alright so after a few months I've decided to venture forth into the world of words once again. After my presentation of My Fat Little Brother to my fat little brother (he couldn't stop laughing) I feel somewhat inspired to continue writing. Thank you to those who have spent the time to read my work!

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Lonely girl by cmadel reviews
A poem dedicated to a person I know
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/9/2006
masquerade by outruntheavalanche reviews
written about a falling-out i had with a friend feel free to r & r.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/9/2005
Song Of The Patriot by Aidan Wolfe reviews
a few phrases uttered by a soldier on return from battle. Read and Review.
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 288 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/25/2005
Old Stake Road by K. Silence reviews
The death of my brother (my best friend) at the age of 17 inspired this one. Though, words alone can't describe the loss that death brings I'm sure you'll feel the emotion of this poem...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 276 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/24/2005
Embers by Anthony Tatsumaki reviews
You better run or I'll like you again
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 360 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/20/2005
The Dusty Rose by mystic-georgia reviews
A rose that personifies the elderly..
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Drama/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/20/2005
Insomnia Save Me by Jesi Lynna reviews
I wish Insomnia would save me... R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/25/2004
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Father reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 360 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/4/2007 - Complete
End reviews
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Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/23/2007 - Complete
Cry it Out reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/23/2007 - Complete
My Fat Little Brother reviews
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Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/3/2007 - Complete
Angel of Mine reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/31/2007 - Complete
Each Day reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/25/2007 - Complete
Joy Ride reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/14/2007 - Complete
This Feeling reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/14/2007 - Complete
Happy Birthday Me reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/5/2007 - Complete
Close to You reviews
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Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/6/2006 - Complete
Misinterpret reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/24/2006 - Complete
The Paper is Coming reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/18/2006 - Complete
Strings reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/11/2006
The Last 30 Secs reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/12/2006
A Poem A Day reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/9/2006
Leave Me reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/9/2006
Simpleplan13 Words Shinyfighter Remix reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/8/2006
Missing ID reviews
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Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/8/2006
Broken Bulb reviews
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Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/8/2006
Imagine You reviews
Just found this piece in my folders somewhere...didn't even remember writing it
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/5/2006
Tears of Flame reviews
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Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/8/2006
You and I reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/7/2006
Speak What I Think reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/7/2006
Don't Need It reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/7/2006
Distance reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/5/2006
Rust reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10/20/2005
Asleep At The Wheel reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/20/2005
Never Forget reviews
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Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/20/2005
Time For Another One reviews
...my feelings on smoking
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/8/2005
The Way I Feel reviews
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Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/7/2005
My Simple Friend reviews
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Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/6/2005
Once And For All reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/2/2005
Mere Reflection reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/2/2005
Tied Down reviews
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Poetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/2/2005
Today I Died reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/2/2005
Room of Suffering reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/2/2005
Bang Bang You're Dead reviews
Inspired from the play "Bang Bang You're Dead"
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/2/2005
City of Lost Angels reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/1/2005
So Hungry reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/5/2005
Your Smile reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/25/2005
Untitled reviews
rather depressing...so dont read it if you don't want to be depressed
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/24/2005
Past Pains reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/24/2005
All I Need reviews
Lord I need you...
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/24/2005
It Rained On Me reviews
none (thanks to Danielle and Alissa for their inspiration)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/24/2005
ADD and Subtract reviews
I usually don't do too many humor poetic pieces...
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/24/2005
My First Haiku
...and is most likely my last.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Published: 3/24/2005
Another Chance reviews
R for Language (thanks to Amanda for the inspiration)
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/22/2005
Understand
R for Violence & Language
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Published: 3/22/2005
The Fear Of All Schools reviews
Written in 2002. R for language. Inspired from the play "Bang Bang You're Dead"
Poetry: School - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/20/2005
My Brightest Star reviews
Written in 2002
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/20/2005
Water Balloons reviews
Written in 2002
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/20/2005
Crooked Teeth reviews
Written in 2002
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/20/2005
Pencil And Paper reviews
Written in 2002
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/20/2005
Hate reviews
One of my first poems ever written. Written back in 2002.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/20/2005
The Wrath Of Darkness reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/20/2005
Alone Again reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/20/2005
The End Of Us
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Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Published: 3/19/2005
Innocence reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/18/2005
Unto The Stars reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/18/2005
Colors In The Night reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/16/2005
Where I Belong reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/11/2005
A Poem For Allie reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/9/2005
Final Exam reviews
Dedicated to all those who are taking Midterms and Finals right now...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1/26/2005
Who Am I? reviews
you'll just have to read to find out eh?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/26/2005
Without A Name reviews
...and yet no one cared for him...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/24/2005
Inspiration reviews
...this is a short poem about my inspiration...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/24/2005
School reviews
school = ZzZzZ
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/23/2005
OMG Poem reviews
it has a hidden message...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/23/2005
My Brain reviews
stupid conscience...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/23/2005
The Worst Poem Ever reviews
don't read this...has the F' word in it
Poetry: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 244 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1/22/2005
Bipolar reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/22/2005
Let's Show Them reviews
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Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/22/2005
Dream in Colors reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/20/2005
Unfortunate Death
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Published: 1/20/2005
Let It Be reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/19/2005
The Burger Joint reviews
It wasn't Old Man Joe's fault...
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 203 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/27/2004
Writer's Block reviews
Stupid writer's block
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/26/2004
My Reason reviews
Be you own crazy self...I know you want to...
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/26/2004
I Hurt reviews
Rated R for language and suicidal thoughts
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/26/2004
Eternity reviews
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Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/26/2004
God I Wish reviews
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Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8/25/2004
Where's My Rainbow reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/25/2004
Getting Away reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/25/2004
I Don't Know You reviews
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Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/25/2004
Hope reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/25/2004
Not My Own reviews
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Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/25/2004
Why Are My Poems reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/22/2004
Alone I Break reviews
Detective Mark Pulatte's life has been twisted around since his wife was murdered. After being thrown off the force, Pulatte's the only that can avenge his wife's death.
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,403 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8/21/2004 - Published: 8/14/2004
Timeless Struggle reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/19/2004
Fade to Peace reviews
Just make it go away...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/17/2004