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Joined 10-17-04, id: 440219, Profile Updated: 05-17-09
Author has written 25 stories for Essay, Friendship, Fantasy, Life, General, Family, Biography, Nature, War, and Love.

Thank you for taking time to read my poems and short stories. I am still working on how to make these better, so any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. As you may have noticed I took a break from writing poems, and just recently started again this year, 2009. I feel much better about the newer poems, but I will keep some of the old poems up just for the sake of comparison to see how far I've come since then.

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Would We? by PJ Wise reviews
As one finally wins love, why is there internal conflict?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 304 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/24/2004
My Kallipolis by Star-strung-prophet reviews
A vision of the just city...
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 370 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/24/2004
Redemption by Cloud Burst reviews
'hope dangles on a string, like slow spinning redemption'
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 44 - Favs: 5 - Published: 7/31/2004
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walk the dog
I wrote this poem based on an drawing that I did. It can be interpreted at many different levels.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Published: 5/18/2009 - Complete
jolt of reality reviews
procrastination and its dire effects
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/18/2009 - Complete
krebs cycle, nuances
A poem about a long distance relationship, where two lovers meet again in a coffeeshop after a long period of being apart.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 351 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/18/2009 - Complete
soul, unscrambled
a litany of verbs and symbols, with a lot of deep meaning.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - Spanish - Mystery/Spiritual - Chapters: 2 - Words: 676 - Published: 5/18/2009 - Complete
urn
This poem exemplifies one of the common inner conflicts that I experience being what the Bible mentions as having a treasure within an earthen vessel. The living contradictions that we all are.
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Published: 5/18/2009 - Complete
repulsion
This regards relationships with people, and how you can not really know what the other party is trying to say, and you feel that you are misunderstood as well, but it is so easy to fall back on grudges and use obscure language to confound each other.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Published: 5/17/2009 - Complete
The Things I Carried
A poem based on the concept by Tim O'Brien's "The Things They Carried."
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 433 - Published: 5/17/2009 - Complete
Ether
An experiment to see if I could transpose poetry into prose.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,207 - Published: 5/17/2009 - Complete
collapsing reviews
This was inspired by the song "They" by Jem, about how we don't always get what we want because of the rules people set. I wrote this real fast so it may be a little lacklustre.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/6/2005
the postmortem
This is a very personal poem, because it embodies a part of me. It partly talks about a butterfly being pinned down to be displayed; and the other part: have fun speculating!
Poetry: Nature - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Published: 10/4/2005
Healing Angel reviews
This was inspired by Sarah McLachlan's "Angel", but not based on the song in any way. Enjoy!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 289 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/17/2005
Slow down, we're going too fast reviews
I wrote this for an essay competition. I didn't really like the topic, so it took me a very long time to come up with this. My teacher didn't select this, so tell me if you think she should have!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,513 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/26/2005
Plaster of Paris reviews
This post on my blog means a lot to me because I spent a really long time on it. Please read the last paragraph...even if you don't read the rest of the post, the last paragraph sums it all up.
Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,206 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/8/2005
Drench Yourself with Words Unspoken
This is one of my posts from my blog. I thought it would be worth a read for you guys. It's about my feelings about my mum.
Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 718 - Published: 2/8/2005
Missing the Point reviews
This was inspired by my thoughts when my dad wrongly accused me of something, which can be said to "miss the point". But also notice how the narrator "misses the point" too when he lets hks stray thoughts override his feelings.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12/15/2004
Unkempt thoughts reviews
I wrote this during a sermon, coz i was bored. This might not tickle everyone's fancy of a poem.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/15/2004
Sadness reviews
I was going to name this "Sunshine on A Rainy Day" after the last line of this poem, but I decided that "Sadness" would be more appropriate. Anyway I was going to write everything about being sad, but I trailed off into a story. Better luck next time!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 363 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/14/2004
Listen! reviews
Something I felt like writing just to show off. As you can see, it wasn't fit for showing off. Anyway, hope to receive some good reviews from this!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/11/2004
Betrayal reviews
This was meant to be an assignment, but the teacher ended up liking it and it was published in my school magazine. Hope you guys enjoy this one!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10/29/2004
If only reviews
This litany was written as an assignment. But I meant every word that I wrote in it. I hope this means something to anyone who reads it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 331 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/24/2004
Hate reviews
I wrote this when one of my closest friend did something really bad to me.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 304 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/24/2004
Lonely and Disregarded reviews
I wrote this while fantasising about running away from home. At that point of time I was really fed up with my parents' nagging and my irritating siblings.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 849 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/23/2004
White Magic reviews
I wrote this merely for the fun and enjoyment of it. Hope you enjoy this too.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/23/2004
feelin' woozy reviews
A poem I wrote for a friend I thought was going to commit suicide.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 399 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/18/2004
The Teacher from Hell reviews
An excerpt from my comprehension passage I wrote myself.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 338 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/18/2004