hey--

thought i should bless the writing world with a profile about awesome me (haha, I'm not suffering from a low self-image); anyway, i hope you're happy, i'm officially going to hell.

but that's besides the point. so what's the point you ask? well, there really isn't one. but the fact i'm going to hell is totally irrelevant from anything i might say here. :)

however, i do have a few comments about stories in general:
1. Why do all the characters have to have such weird names? And in real-life genres/settings! I mean really, Jai? Marinka? Or Audrae? Can't you just spell it semi-normally!? Yeah, yeah,I know we are all trying to be original here (good luck with that), but really, Evangelia? Goodness, its with people like that you get kids in the world naming their children Apple and Blanket. Honestly, kill the child now! It'll save him from the ETERNAL teasing he'll get in the long run.
2. Don't say your story isn't stereotypical, cause most likely it is. IT HAS BEEN DONE PEOPLE! Just admit it. I have no problem with such storylines, in fact, I love them, absolutely positively-lutely. They are awesome. So don't be ashamed in the feeding the communal crave for estranged childhood friends, now enemies, who just HAPPEN to fall in love or how the popular dude/ette FINALLY realizes the hidden HOTNESS in the school geek. Aww... can we say "She's All That?" LOL, I'm such a hypocrite.
3. I don't have a third question at the moment, so praise the heavens for shutting me up and being such a b*tch (see, my profile is PG friendly!).

ok, so i wrote a story, yippee! finally. it was about time. if you SOMEHOW got to this page, and haven't read my story (Death by Dimples), then you should definitely read it...it's not stereotypical at all. it just happens to be about two estranged childhood friends, now enemies, who secretly hold a flame for one another. yep, not stereotypical, totally original.;) although, i can honestly say, that i have yet to see a story based on someone's dimples here @ fictionpress so far. (yum yum dimples)

but i hope you give it a shot, there will be some expected twists in the forms of...well, read and find out. bet you can't guess them, b/c it's that original.

-perturbedpercy