In State of Agony
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Joined 11-15-04, id: 444107, Profile Updated: 01-09-09
Author has written 32 stories for Love, General, Haiku, and Politics.

Repeating Yesterday -(As I Lay dying)-

this is what I am
this is what I have become
repeating yesterday
drain me of my very essence
to form again what laststhis is what I am
this is what I have become
what is love without sacrifice?
my tears hold no weight
if my commitment is only failure...
repeat yesterday
each day I am born again to be
a child in the eyes of love
repeating yesterday
repeating...
drain me of my very essence
to form again what laststhis is what I am
this is what I have become
what is love without...
what is love, without sacrifice?

- Without tring I would never fail and I fell in love with failure - For love and Failing (Bleeding Through)

-I hope that and pray that one day you will realize You were always my biggest inspiration the pain you've caused has built who I've become now we might as well be strangers on't be a corpse so you can drag your dead I've been blessed by the fires by the fires of your hell- Return to sender (Bleeding Through)

I love music; favorite band Still Remains I think that metalcore have awesome lyrics and I am all about the lyrics…Im 24…I don’t write to often…its like therapy for me…I’m not creasy well no one have prove it xD. This is like a hobby for me I write since I was 15 and I still do...I’m from Panama city Panama and I’m just writing something in my profile cause I don’t have anything else to do right now (I’m at work) like to drink…well I think that I already pass the “getting drunk everyday” age…last year lol…I’m studding Mechanical Engineer…since I was like 16 I felt in love with this phrase “This world is in state of agony”…I think that is so truth…I like the depressive lyrics/poems/songs...though I don’t like to be depress…well at least not for the last 5 years…I write to myself…well that’s about it…i should back and do some...work...

Staying alive is just the slowest way to die...nothing else...

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je t'aime by poetic heretic reviews
“je t’aime,” he breathed into my ear, lips so close that they bumped my earlobe and made my pulse stutter like the erratic twitch of a butterfly’s silent wing beats
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Published: 10/3/2008 - Complete
junk by Phi-Dono reviews
let's make sweet, sweet love under the fall of disease. and when you have nothing left, all that is LEFT is me
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/2/2007 - Complete
So Sorry by Ashelin reviews
Well, I tried anyway.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/2/2007 - Complete
dear johnny by brokenbober reviews
a love letter gone wrong
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/17/2006
swallowing sin by White Tea and Ginger reviews
i sold my soul for a quarter.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 36 - Favs: 10 - Published: 3/8/2006 - Complete
Lies and Bitterness by FrostedTeardrop reviews
Sometimes you have to be the last person standing.. PLZ R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/18/2006
mi existencia by Sab-Cat reviews
es dark y angst... muy bueno y muy corto
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - Spanish - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/14/2003
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Ramble
just read it....
Poetry: Politics - Rated: M - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,174 - Published: 6/27/2010 - Complete
Simpler
I ever wrote something like this before…and I really like this piece…is not a poem …I would like your opinion…please read and give me some honest critics…it just happend when thinking about writing something but i wasnt on the "mood"...R&R thanx
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 405 - Published: 1/9/2009 - Complete
Under Water reviews
No black or white...only gray tones...love, hate, life and pain are overated... Im back with an experiment;It may be hard to understand my point of view but is open to interpretation...give me your critics I will replay. R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/29/2008 - Complete
SimpLe reviews
life can be so complex and simple...Read and Review. I will replay XD thanx Pretty different from what I used to write; love instead pain
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/12/2008 - Complete
Your nothing reviews
I know that is not you but this “nothing” that kills..."She wants nothing more But to be a little whore" -S.O.A.D. read and review thanx
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 269 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/22/2008 - Complete
Butterflies
Well, well I back with 2 pieces that I write with pain and tears, and dont worry darling i know that is not you! is the "nothig" that kills! enjoy it R & R. thanx
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 224 - Published: 4/1/2008 - Complete
Dont Give More Tomorrows reviews
Well, well I back with 2 pieces that I write with pain and tears, enjoy it R & R. thanx
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/1/2008 - Complete
10 seconds to love you reviews
your number one stoker or your imaginary friend....R & R thanx
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/30/2007 - Complete
Life is reviews
This is really an experiment,I hope you can understand it & Me well if you can give me some critics I will appreciate it.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6/13/2007 - Complete
Sunset reviews
I cry...I hope you can read and give me some reviewscritics thanx, my second haiku
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/6/2007 - Complete
Happy? reviews
my first short poem. is my first attemp, i hope you can read it and give some reviews
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/4/2007 - Complete
Those Beautiful Eyes reviews
I still remember those beautiful eyes...I'm just sorry cause you only met Mr. Hide, about a serial killerlover...very graphic and dark R & R i'll reply...
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/10/2007 - Complete
¿Quienes somos? reviews
Read & Review...una simple pregunta, con respuestas muy complicadas...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - Spanish - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/25/2007 - Complete
Close My Eyes
Will I close my eyes or should I close yours...do I care about you, do I ever care about anything.You can take my pain but you cant take my heart Read & Review, I will reply
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Published: 3/29/2007 - Complete
Hi reviews
Dont worry about me this is the goodbye...read & review
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/13/2007 - Complete
Lets Die Before June reviews
I'm back...lets die before June...love can eat you from the inside out. Please read & review thanx..
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/30/2006 - Complete
In Heaven reviews
The way i feel about my faith and beliefs... a protest i think. R & R
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/10/2006
Imperfect reviews
the love is perfectly imperfect... R & R.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/17/2006
Let reviews
Hey! I'm back!...when u have to let it go (song)...R & R i will reply...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/21/2006
The Remembrance Ballad reviews
One of my favorite songs...this lyric is fucking awesome the band is called "Atreyu" R & R plz
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/6/2006
The coldest kisS reviews
About Love?...is about a Vampire...and wath he do with his lover...the girl who give him the coldest kisS...R & R plz (my first one in this topic)
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/30/2006
Forget My Name reviews
This one is no about a heartache...i just stop caring about a girl that i used to love...(as u can see there is no rage in this one) plz r&r
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1/28/2006
She Just Want To Fuck With Me reviews
This actually happened, is very graphic… (I make some changes already)
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 424 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1/27/2006
Give Me Back reviews
For my new ex...this is the goodbye...R and R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1/21/2006
Let Me Hate You Darling reviews
I just let all my feelings in this poem...just let the words flow...very fucking painfull...
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/17/2006
Forgive Us reviews
We are al guilty...R and R if u want...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/12/2006
FAV reviews
Mi primer poema en español en esta page, en los de ingles eh tenido buenas criticas veamos con este, el titulo significa Feliz Año Viejo, titulo Ramdon...leanlo y demne su opinion es corto no les tomara tiempo
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - Spanish - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1/6/2006
This was for Us reviews
A lot of sadness in this poem...hope you like it...R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/27/2005
I wish reviews
Hope u like this, a lot of angry in this peace...please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/19/2005
Dreams Of Agony reviews
i cant sleep the night i wrothe this...
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/17/2005
No one Left reviews
sometimes you just think that there is no one left
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/17/2005
7:52 reviews
is just about a broken heart and an old love...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12/16/2005