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Joined 01-10-05, id: 453853
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Hello, everyone. My name is Kyle and I'm 20 years old and am currently on hiatus from school. A few years ago I started writing what I hoped to someday turn into a novel. Up until recently, I haven't given it much attention. With all of my free time, I am finally getting around to working on it again.

I originally had three chapters written, but every time I read them, I found more and more stuff I didn't like. I'm currently rewriting them before I move on to the rest of it.

If you've read Solophen, I'd appreciate as much feedback as you're willing to give me. Please let me know what you liked and more importantly, what you didn't. I'm especially looking for help in spotting places where the text doesn't flow very well. For whatever reason, I don't seem to be able to catch this on my own.

If you spend your time writing me a lengthy, helpful review, I will certainly do the same for you.

Sooner or later, I'm going to take a break from writing this and post some of my short stories.

Also, feel free to contact me via AIM or e-mail to discuss writing or just about anything. I enjoy copy editing, so if you have a piece that you would like me to go over, definitely let me know.

Update 2/26/05:

The first half of chapter 1 of Solophen will be up shortly. I know I'm slow.

Update 04/03/05:

I Guess I'm reallllly slow. Or lazy. Take your pick.

Update 09/02/05:

I just got a laptop and have every intention of getting back to writing and reviewing people's stuff. Thanks much for the review from freethephoenix!

Update 06/24/07:

I can't believe I've neglected this so badly. I've written a ton of notes in a couple of flurries of inspiration, but I haven't actually written anything in forever. I need to get on this. Hopefully I get hit in the head with the drive to get some of this done. It's kinda dissappointing to not have anything new on it in so long. Hopefully you hear something from me soon. I should also start reading people's stuff again. That was quite enjoyable. However, I'm currently on book 4 in the Wheel of Time series, and it's very good right now. Then there's Harry Potter #7 coming up and later in the year Sword of Truth is ending (finally...the series is horrible, but I'm plot commited at this point) and hopefully the next installment of Song of Fire and Ice.

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The Ivory Chamber by WyrewoodGnomelord reviews
This is a very old story of mine from the 8th grade, when I was pondering the thought of, what would it be like if we could change our past? What are the consequences?
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10,918 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/2/2005
Shifter by Maelan Peredhil reviews
I actually wrote this a while ago for a scififantasy contest. Won the contest, by the way yes, you care. It's about a weird magic creature and... me messing with the borders of evilgood lifedeath again. Go with it. My best yet.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21,890 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 9 - Published: 8/27/2004 - Complete
Solophen reviews
The world Merik saved will fall back into the hands of evil…maybe forever. One is too few; three is too many. Two alone must survive to reclaim the world.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,068 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/17/2005