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Joined 03-06-05, id: 463133, Profile Updated: 11-14-08
Author has written 7 stories for Fantasy, Fantasy, Friendship, General, and Song.

While reading, it might be best to remember McIntyre's First Law:
"Under the right circumstances, anything I tell you may be wrong."
It is also good to remember O'Brien's First Corollary to McIntyre's First Law:
"We don't know what the right circumstances are, either."

I've been writing for a long time now, though I look at things I wrote four months ago and can see clearly what needs to be revised. If you would like to speed that process along by telling me where and how I messed up, please do. Criticism is very appreciated, and you don't even have to worry about being nice; just tell it like it is. Thank you all for your reviews. Reviews, especially those that are constructive, are my incentive to continue writing. I know that I need to improve and your reviews help me to do so. I will always return the favor, though sometimes it may take awhile.

The ZephalthQ Chronicles

My novels and stories almost always take place in a single world that I have created. The world of Iasai consists of the two main continents of Daro-yth and Evalis, and many, many islands of varying size. My writing will eventually be put into historical order and compiled into the ZephalthQ Chronicles. I actually have bits and pieces of the whole series written out in various stages of completion. I'll post summaries and stuff as I think of new (and old) story ideas. All of these are working titles and summaries:

Way of the Mediator - Seren has always believed that diplomacy can solve anything; Ayla disagrees entirely. But when, in a daring move of arrogance, the shapeshifting Jaykors uprise, the two elves may have to put aside their differences to use might and diplomacy together. Rated T for violence. (This story is only in the stage of rough outline.)

The Alliance War - Princess Telrúnya can only acquire the title of queen if she completes the task her father has set for her to renew the old alliance. But the old alliance is dead and deception is webbed throughout the seemingly simple quest. Rated T for violence. (This was my first story ever written. It is on indefinite hiatus, as I began writing it when I was really young and had no idea what I was doing. I am extremely thankful to Chuggur -one of the best writers here- for making me see how much work it needed before it would be even presentable.)

Spirit of the Dragon - For a long time, Syrora Salas considered her miraculous escape from the clutches of death simple good luck. But then she begins noticing certain changes about herself, some of which land her in trouble. And that’s just about when the dragons show up. Rated T for violence. (This story has a rough outline and random bits written out. I probably won't start really working on it until I'm done with a few others.)

Test of Loyalty - “Choose,” he said, “the nation you were born into or the one that you were raised in - the death of your family or the death of your friends - the life of a spy, alone in the darkness, or the life of a fighter, and a swift death…Poor Evaina,” he whispered. Rated M for violence, torture, and depressing situations. (This story is only in the stage of rough outline.)

Of Shadow and Light - Phyrra; innocent progeny of two nations that have been silently warring for over two centuries. Zaraen; self-described cruel, heartless liar. ZephalthQ; the quintessence of random. Each hold a different part of the key and some don't even know it. Rated M for violence, torture, depressing situations, drug usage. (This story is in progress. I only have 18 of 70+ chapters done.)

Reign of Darkness - A band of adventures are given the basic hero’s test: save the world from impending doom and evil. Only there’s a catch: they’ve already failed. And they didn’t know that when they started. Confused yet? You have no idea. Rated M for violence, torture, depressing situations. (This story is a trilogy within the Chronicles. It has an outline and I’ll probably start working on it next summer.)

The Lone Islands - A voyage to explore the islands surrounding the country of Kamenlad is put at risk by storms, enchantments, and betrayal. The long days at sea can have a harrowing effect on fast friendships, and the seemingly insignificant can be the most destructive. Rated K+ for dangerous situations and other sorts of peril. (This story is in progress. Its outline is completed and I try to post as often as possible. I began writing it again per the request of GRAYTEXT, whom I thank for continuing support.)

Also, I have done minor proofreading for Everlinde Book One: The Sword and the Stars for the author Cayte R Black.


The following are websites which I have found to be invaluable in my development as a writer.
The Craft and the Writer by Will Greenway - The Elements of a Novel by Peder Hill - On Thud and Blunder by Poul Anderson

The photo was taken by photographer Dani Hernanz.


‘Every human being has hundreds of separate people living under his skin.
The talent of a writer is his ability to give them their separate names, identities,
personalities and have them relate to the other characters living within him.’

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The Flaming Hall by EternalFlare reviews
When the resting place of a powerful relic is razed to nothing, a small group unites to deliver it, through darkness and danger, to the Sanctuary of the Gods themselves: The Flaming Hall. Review or die.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 13 - Words: 34,448 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 3/18/2010 - Published: 9/30/2007
Blood On The Snare by Niels Stegeman reviews
These caustic tones... jorio #720. For info, see profile
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/4/2009 - Complete
When You Wish upon a Star by GRAYTEXT reviews
Your dreams will come true...Yeah, we've all heard that one. But have you ever considered the events that occur when you wish: where the wish goes, how it gets there, who answers it...A novella that isn't as innocent as its title would suggest.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Humor - Chapters: 15 - Words: 19,057 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 5/17/2008 - Published: 4/30/2008 - Complete
Blade of Baikon by Heatless Flame reviews
His Blade. A group of the most deadly law enforcer assassins ever seen. Or perhaps never seen, for their skills in the shadows are legendary. Is an internal war enough to destroy them?
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 14,800 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 3/1/2008 - Published: 2/2/2008
Call my name by The Reverse Edge Blade reviews
It's hard for me to write a summary here...but I put all my heart into writing this, so it'd mean alot if you would read it.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 10 - Words: 53,505 - Reviews: 90 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 1/31/2008 - Published: 11/14/2006 - Complete
Turbulent Serenity by Niels Stegeman reviews
Spurning waves... jorio 564. For info, see profile
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/20/2007 - Complete
The Way You Want by hasseena reviews
Perceive the poem, the way you want.....Individuality, to say in plain words!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/26/2006 - Complete
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The Lone Islands second draft reviews
A voyage to explore the islands surrounding the country of Kamenlad is put at risk by storms, enchantments, and betrayal. The long days at sea can have a harrowing effect on fast friendships, and the seemingly insignificant can be the most destructive.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 37,977 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/24/2009 - Published: 4/21/2006
The Game, the Mask, and the Soul Beneath reviews
A study on mankind's tendency to try and fit in, no matter what the cost. Written in the form of a song. "You don't seem to care, you look with clear eyes, at our stupid game, and our stupid lies."
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 347 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/5/2008 - Complete
A Day in the Life reviews
My dad and I wrote this song together. I wish you could hear the guitar that accompanies it.... Sunset, the days begun, bright red lights are screaming through the night.... I have two versions, so that you can tell me which is better.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Mystery - Chapters: 2 - Words: 351 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 11/12/2007 - Published: 11/21/2006 - Complete
I Don't Mind OR Ironically Afraid reviews
A study on the irony of human behavior, written in the form of a song. 'I don’t mind standing on the edge, but the thought of falling scares me to death.'
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Published: 2/1/2007 - Complete
The Once and Distant Meantime reviews
As we wander through the darkness, There are those who bring us light, Encourage us through hard times, By having different sight."
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/3/2006 - Complete
The Alliance War is awaiting a complete overhaul reviews
Princess Telrúnya can only acquire the title of queen if she completes the task her father has set for her to renew the old alliance. But the old alliance is dead, and deception is webbed throughout the minds and hearts and souls of all involved.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 18,015 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 4 - Updated: 3/15/2006 - Published: 4/20/2005
The Ancients reviews
A symbol, a memory, A mystery, too, Only wise men and prophets, Our winding paths knew.'
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/14/2006 - Complete
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