Fiorenza
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Joined 04-12-05, id: 469965, Profile Updated: 05-15-10
Author has written 10 stories for Fantasy, Life, Nature, General, General, and Friendship.

Anyone else feel like I should write again?

Seven Royal Sisters was my first ever long story. This story sprang out of an overheard comment that resembles the old poem by Longfellow "There was a little girl, / Who had a little curl, / Right in the middle of her forehead. / When she was good, / She was very good indeed, / But when she was bad she was horrid." The different princesses were originally supposed to represent the different levels of goodness that a girl or woman might be at. There were only seven because I came up with four levels, but there are always either three princesses or seven, so I added a few others. Then my favourite princesses needed romantic interests, so I came up with a few that seemed cool enough and a plot line to introduce them. Unfortunately my favourite princess became the princess I had set up as the most horrid, because I spent so much time trying to figure out why she was the way she was. I do not think I will ever finish this story.

Another Little Mermaid comes from the basic little mermaid story, of course, but I'm telling it my way. I started it because of a dream I had a couple of years ago. I don't remember much from that dream, but it was interesting. I took a long (like three years long) break from this story, but I still want to finish it. I reworked and posted my favourite chapter, which has been sitting around waiting for me to get to it. Eventually I will finish this story, because I love it and many of the characters, but I'm a little uncertain as to the how and when.

Until We Die is a story I started later than the other two... but it is even less likely to be updated even then my other stories. I'm afraid I've become a bit uncomfortable with my subject matter, and my mom doesn't like it much at all. Is it healthy to think that much about dieing? I've only really written the prologue, though I planned all seven chapters (each about a day) out. I know there was some interest in this story, and I'm rather interested in it myself, but I don't know if it will ever be finished and all posted.

At the moment I'm periodically working on a new story (and yes, I know that I've never finished a major story in the past, so I'm not planning on posting it, at least until I have it all completely planned and the first ten chapters written) but I may work on Another Little Mermaid as well.

I also write some attempts at poetry. What I have here is mostly stuff I don't much care for. I do like "Lunch Group" but I'm rather embarrassed about the others I have up here.


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Martha Marie
A quiet little short story about two sisters who eat together but say very little.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,389 - Published: 7/16/2011 - Complete
Another Little Mermaid reviews
Only this one's different. A changed tale, of a changed tail.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 9 - Words: 15,255 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/18/2009 - Published: 8/14/2005
Lunch Group reviews
A slightly abstract poem.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/7/2008
Until We Die reviews
Seven days to live. Seven friends to live them. What will they do... until they die? Rating is for major discussion of death, and possible suicide. I wasn't quite sure where to put it. Only the prologue is posted.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 375 - Reviews: 3 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/31/2007
Sleep reviews
A tiny little poem about sleep
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/22/2006
Dancing Sunlight reviews
Sunlight has a beautiful way of dancing through everything it does. Bit like a John Denver song I like about sunshine. slightly edited
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/19/2006
Harmaly Mahulagen reviews
Ummm... sort of a "don't want to go to school today" poem, but not.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/11/2006
Seven Royal Sisters reviews
When the parents and oldest of seven princesses die sudden violent deaths, the royal family is torn apart, especially because the killer was one of the seven sisters.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 14,556 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 7/11/2005 - Published: 4/16/2005
Down the Track reviews
Right before a hurdles race starts, I'll be looking down the track, with all the hurdles in the way, and freak out.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/21/2005
Laughing reviews
Laughter is one of the most important and powerful things in life. We do it every day, or we should.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/17/2005