Major General
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Joined 04-22-05, id: 471539
Author has written 90 stories for Love, Life, General, and Religion.

I'm 18 years old and from Bronx, NY. I currently attend SUNY Old Westbury in Long Island. I have been writing poetry since the second grade. At first it was just a part of a class pattern that we did every day. Then I got better as throughout elementary school teachers found out that making me write was a good way to keep me from talking so much. I stopped in Junior High School, until one day in which I was in school and very bored, so Ijust started writing. Now I am on my third book, which is mostly about relationships, some of which coming from my own life or experience. My first book was an introduciton to my life and ideology. My second book was about my dedication to being successful and the road to it. I am not yet published, but I do have the matterial just here ready for that one chance.

I'm the Major General, just here to show my love for poetry and to share my work with a broader base of people.

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Eyes of Fire by Hope's Demise reviews
A song or poem about missing someone.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/24/2005 - Complete
Circle in the Sand by Jacob Andrews reviews
And the moral of the story is, I'm a coward. (oh, and for anyone who doesn't know me, it was a MOCK wedding. lol.)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 411 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/23/2005
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Spoken Word reviews
Just A Poem About Some Feelings I Had For A Special Girl
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/22/2006
My Life Is A Book In Waiting
Just A Poem About My Troubles And Getting Out Of My Situation
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Published: 6/22/2006
Unrealistic Dreams reviews
A Poem About A Relationship That's Almost A Dream
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/20/2006
Unexpected Smiles
A Poem About A Loved One That Makes You Smile Out Of No Where
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Published: 4/20/2006
Still Standing
A Poem About Having A Long Term Relationship
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Published: 4/20/2006
Second Thoughts
A Poem About People Rushing Into A Relationship
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Published: 4/20/2006
Little Reminders
A Poem About Those Things ABout A Loved One That Reminds You Of Them
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Published: 4/20/2006
Awaiting Your Presence
A Poem About Waiting For A Loved One To Come Back To You
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Published: 4/20/2006
Shut The Fuck Up reviews
A Poem About People Minding Their Own Damn Business
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/20/2006
As I Relax
A Poem About The Things We Are Not Thinking About, But Is Happening
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 306 - Published: 4/20/2006
All Eyes On Me
A Poem About Why I Feel Everyone Is Watching Me
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Published: 4/20/2006
Cocky Bastard reviews
Just A Poem About People Saying I'm Cocky
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/20/2006
You're Losing Me
A Poem To My Last Girl Friend While We Had Problems
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 335 - Published: 4/14/2006
The X Factor reviews
A Poem About A Close Female Friend Of Mine
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/14/2006
So What's Next? reviews
A Poem About Losing A Loved One And Searching For Yourself
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/14/2006
Slow Hours Fast Days
A Poem About Missing A Loved One And The Changes That Can Happen
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Published: 4/14/2006
Love At First Sight
A Poem About The Emotions That Occur For Love At First Sight
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Published: 4/14/2006
Heartbreak Hotel
A Poem About The Dreadfull Heartbreak
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Published: 4/14/2006
Flawless Victory reviews
A Poem About Relationships With Problems
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/14/2006
Where Were You? reviews
A Poem WIth Anger Toward Loved Ones That Are Not There When You Need Them
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/14/2006
Unknown Eyes
A Poem About The People In Public. Everyone Has A Story To Tell.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Published: 4/14/2006
True Outlaws reviews
A Poem About The Thugs That Dont Sleep
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/14/2006
Too Late To Win
A Poem About Making Choices
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Published: 4/14/2006
Tired Of This
A Poem About Being Tired Of Having To Face So Many Things
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Published: 4/14/2006
Still A NIGGA
A Poem About Not Being Able To Change
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Published: 4/14/2006
Every Wonder Why?
A Poem About A Permiscious Young Lady
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Published: 4/14/2006
A Dying Sun
You Tell Me What It Means To You. A Poem About Being On The Outside
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Published: 4/14/2006
Lost In Love reviews
A Poem About Being So Deep In Love With Someone
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/14/2006
Our First Kiss
A Poem About My Future Wife's And My First Real Kiss
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Published: 4/14/2006
Unrequited Love
A Poem About Loving Someone And Not Getting That Love Back
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Published: 4/14/2006
Wishing Death On Me
A Poem About How Some People Feel About Me
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Published: 4/14/2006
Me Against The World
A Poem Giving People An Idea of What It Takes To Be Me
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Published: 4/14/2006
It's Adding Up
A Poem About Being Through Hardships and Progressing
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Published: 4/14/2006
A Woman's Essence Can Speak
A Poem About What Women Do And Mean To And For Me
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Published: 4/14/2006
Now You Tell reviews
A Poem About Being Just Too Late
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/13/2006
Knowledge Inside
A Poem Showing Love To The Smarter Women Out There
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Published: 4/13/2006
Missed Impressions reviews
A Poem About The Big First Impression
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/13/2006
I Dont Want To Cry
A Poem About Me Going To College And Leaving My Girl
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 635 - Published: 4/13/2006
All This Time
A Poem About A Girl Telling A Guy She Cares About Him Just Too Late
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Published: 4/13/2006
Brown Skin reviews
A Poem Going Out To Black/ African American Women
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/13/2006
Amazing Colors
A Poem Going Out To Multicultural Women
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Published: 4/13/2006
Hater Motivation reviews
A Poem About The Strength That Haters Can Give People
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/13/2006
I Never Knew reviews
A Poem About A Person Going Through Non-Stop Hardships
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/13/2006
A Blooming Rose reviews
A Poem Telling People To Look At Things Differently
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/13/2006
So Confusing
A Poem Giving Women The Reason Why Men Are The Way They Are
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Published: 4/13/2006
A New Thought Process
A Poem About Thinking About Someone In A Different Way
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Published: 4/13/2006
Help Wanted
A Poem About Thinking About Someone In Need Crying Out
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Published: 4/13/2006
The Prayer reviews
A Poem Giving Thanks To The Almighty Creator
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/13/2006
Me and My Girlfriend
A Poem About Having A Girlfriend That Will Do Anything For You
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Published: 4/13/2006
Untitled
A Poem About A Person Wanting To Take His Friendship Further
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Published: 4/13/2006
Vica Versa
A Poem Going Out To Everyone Tries To Bring Others Down
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Published: 4/13/2006
What Do You Say?
A Poem About How Hard It Is To TalkTo Someone That You Love
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Published: 4/13/2006
Yesterday's News
A Poem About Being Put To The Side Long Enough That It Doesnt Matter When They Come To You.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Published: 4/13/2006
Your Superman
A Poem About Women Being In Abusive Relationships
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Published: 4/13/2006
The Judgement reviews
Just Saying That No Man Can Judge Me
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/17/2005
Death Around The Corner reviews
Just A Paranoid Part Of Me
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/17/2005
Going Hard At It
Just Putting In Work And Being Determined
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Published: 6/17/2005
Black Coffee reviews
Just Showing Love To My Dark Skin Women
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/17/2005
A Look Back
A Look At My Past And All The BS
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Published: 6/17/2005
The Crush reviews
Just The Way Someone Feels When They Have A Little Crush
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/17/2005
I See No Changes
I See No Changes In The Damn Hoods
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Published: 6/17/2005
So Many Tears
Just A Look Into The Hood And The Way We Are Treated
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Published: 6/17/2005
Why Are You There?
Just A Girl In A Bad Relationship That Thinks She Is Happy
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 297 - Published: 6/17/2005
A Failing Future
Just The Way I Feel About The Hood And Some Of The People In It
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Published: 6/17/2005
Can You Get Away?
Just The Way I Feel About A Girl I Want That's In A Bad Relationship
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 280 - Published: 6/17/2005
I'm Missing You reviews
Just The Way I Had Felt About My Girl
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/2/2005
Ocean Waves
Just About Girls: Look For The Hints
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Published: 5/1/2005
Warning To Those
Just The Way I Feel About Guys Thinking I'm A Nice Person
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Published: 4/29/2005
Second Chance
Just A Girl Walking As I Was Working
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Published: 4/29/2005
Called You A Bitch
Just The Way I Feel About Men Calling Women Bitches
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/28/2005
The Girl Walking By reviews
Just A Girl Walking By And What I Did
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/28/2005
My Great Depression
While Me And My Wife Went On A Break
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Published: 4/28/2005
Old School Days
Just A Look On The Past And Present
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Published: 4/28/2005
My Eyes Have Seen reviews
What I Had Seen By The Age of 16
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/28/2005
MOB
Just Me Putting Money Over Bitches
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Published: 4/28/2005
Past On
Just Paying Respect To A Woman I Loved
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Published: 4/28/2005
My Autobiography reviews
My Actual Autobiography
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/28/2005
If I Die Tonight reviews
Just Thinking About What Would Happen If I Died
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/28/2005
Hood Stories
My Life Growing Up In The Hood Poor
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 265 - Published: 4/28/2005
Hidden Faces Of Mine
Just The Faces Of A Person That You Dont See
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 221 - Published: 4/28/2005
Hanger Of Desire
The Desire And Greed In The Heart Of Mankind
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Published: 4/28/2005
Dripping Sensation
It Was Raining And She Was Sexy
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Published: 4/28/2005
Girl On The Train reviews
Just This Girl I Met On A Train
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/28/2005
Girl On The Bus
Just About This Girl I Met At Work
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Published: 4/28/2005
An Angel On Earth
Just The Way I Feel About About A Close Friend Of Mine
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Published: 4/27/2005
A New Creation
Just The Way I Feel About And See Women
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Published: 4/27/2005
A Blessing To Me reviews
Just The Way I Felt About A Girl I Had Feelings For
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/27/2005
A Revolutionary Mind reviews
Just The Mentallity That I Have Grown To Have
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/27/2005
Change of Heart reviews
Just A Girl That Uses A Guy That Loves Her And Then Starts Seeing Someone Else
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/27/2005
My Desire reviews
Just the way u feel when u want someone but scared
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/26/2005
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