Opticalillusions
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Joined 05-09-05, id: 474917
Author has written 14 stories for Life.

Hey I'm 17 and a sophmore in a college in New Jersey. I am an English Major carrying a chemistry minor with hopes of going to medical school. I write poetry for fun, most of it centers around a very bleak period in my life so please do not be concerned for my well-being I am a happy healthy New Jersian! If I review your poetry expect is to be honest, and hopefully not just "it's nice" but a bit more descriptive. If you become offended, that is your right but please understand I was just trying to be helpful!

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Loaded Gun reviews
This is about growing up, and trying to find a place to put all your engery. A place to call your own.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/5/2005
Roulette reviews
This deals with abuse, and chances in life.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/5/2005
Lover's Kiss
This is a very personal poem. It is one about a very very tough time in my life. Not for the faint of heart. It involves abuse of all kinds, so be prepared.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Published: 6/5/2005
Dreamers reviews
Kind of angsty, needs a lot of work. A lot of my usual imagery, so hopefully it can be imporved!
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/5/2005
Homewards
This one needs lot's of work. I like the last stanza, but it has a rough start.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Published: 6/5/2005
Useless reviews
Did you ever feel like everything you do is just to fill up a space on an application?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/20/2005
Tribute to Dante reviews
A reason we can not all take the journey
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/20/2005
Party of One reviews
Smoking Kills
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/20/2005
OneLifeNow
You only get one chance to live your life
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Published: 5/20/2005
Muffled
Confession and the truth
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Published: 5/20/2005
Even Fighting reviews
Fighting fair is so important
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/20/2005
A Place to Rest
A little different
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Published: 5/20/2005
SelfSufficient reviews
About a very controversial issue, with a humanistic approach
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/20/2005
Death of a Puddle reviews
A mixture of the natural and unusual emotional elements.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/20/2005