Know now that I am open to all critics. As many as you have, namely for Arbeit Macht Frei.

BTW, my name is Jillian. I am a 17 year old junior in high school. I love writting, but unfortunately have always had a problem with spelling and grammer. Great, eh? I usually am more active on fanfiction.net, only because I am a Phantom of the Opera addict (before the movie, and proud too.) If you are interested, my name there is x phantoms angel. Have at it.

Basically, I am working on a story that I had the idea for in 8th grade. It's been about three years since I had that idea, and I only have one chapter. So I apologize for long waits, etc. But since this is my "long awaited story" in the making, I will get it done. Eventually.

This is why I am so open to all comments. Please, tell me if I should change something to make it more historically correct, grammatically correct, or anaything else. I will listen, and if the comments given are not changed, there is a big reason to why I did not change it. But I will comment on those comments in an author's note before beginning my next chapter.

My Stories:

Seal My Fate Tonight: COMPLETE.

Summary: A love that was meant to never end. A boy who would do anything to always be with his girlfriend, and the girl who is killed out of her boyfriend's love...One shot

Arbeit Macht Frei: Chapter oneposted: 23 January 2006.

Chatper one revision posted: 25 January 2006.

Summary: A young girl suffers through the events of the Holocaust while making the most unlikely friend; a Nazi police dog named Keit.

Notes: After countless copies of AMF, I think I finally got the real chapter one revisal out. I changed Hyman Daniel's name to Armand Djurik. Eliora stayed the same because Eliora in Jewish means "God is my light" and Judeth stayed the same because it means "admired." I used their names for a purpose. Keit obviously stayed the same as well.