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Joined 05-23-05, id: 477500, Profile Updated: 04-02-11
Author has written 9 stories for General, Essay, and Romance.

Hello. Thank you for hopefully reading my stories and also liking them.

I'm 18 years old now which is crazy.

I appreciate every single thing of feedback I have ever gotten on this site. I know that it's easy not to review so I thank those who do.

I'll try to review your work too since that's only fair but I'll definitely reply to you.

Writing wise, I know I have some work to do (everyone could use some work right?) so I'm approaching it modestly. I try for my characters to have depth and not seem like superficial biddies. If something doesn't seem realistic, it's ok to call me out on it. I'll appreciate it and probably hound you for details.

Currently Working On
The Art of Movie Making: This is the only story that I'm writing at the moment and all of my creative focus is on it. Any reviews will be especially welcome for this story. In a nutshell, it's pretty similar to every other romance story on this site. Two famous stars. Girl meets boy, hates boy, ends up falling for boy, and lives happily ever after with boy. I'm hoping that out of all the ones you read about famous people, it'll still stand out to you. I want their relationship to be raw and difficult and ultimately something that while isn't perfect, is something that's impossible to give up. I was inspired by the great tv show romances like Logan and Veronica from Veronica Mars that in the real world would make you run away but since it's fiction, is irresistable.

Character Pictures

Avis Portman: This is British actress Carey Mulligan. She's not a perfect match since she lacks the green eyes but she does have brown hair. She seems petite which is important since I always imagined Avis to a very small person, someone who looks like you could easily pick her up and carry her away. Another reason why I like this picture of Carey Mulligan is while it shows that she's pretty, she's not particularly eye catching. Avis is a cute girl (this is Hollywood after all) but combined with her quieter nature and constant working, doesn't stand out in a crowd.

Wesley Finch: Physically, Jim Sturgess is perfect as Wes if only he had blue eyes. His hair brushes his face perfectly (although Wes trimmed his hair for the role) and his build is what I imagined also: lean, tall, and probably considered skinny compared to other actors. These pictures show him as adorably playful but I think this one shows the intense part of Wes well since most of the scenes with him are pretty heated.

Annalise Donnelly: Who else? Blake Lively is a tall blond who is exactly (or at least she plays) the characteristics that Annalise has: energetic, fun loving, and ultimately a good friend to Avis.

Ben Leibowitz: Hugh Dancy may fit better than my previous choice, Adam Brody. Although he's not as lanky as I picture Ben, his face fits. I could picture him being more serious than Adam Brody.

John Kim: This is South Korean actor, Kim Bum who is starring on Boys Over Flowers right now. I actually decided John's appearance based on Kim Bum's so this is exactly how I imagine him. Plus he gives off the wealthy, business vibe quite well even though the character he plays comes from a family of wealthy artists.

Finished
Avery: A short story heavily inspired by To Kill A Mockingbird. I make a lot of allusions to the book and it was the first that I wrote and posted here. It's special to me in that sense.

The Truth About Teachers: The title is pretty self explanatory. It's about teachers and my views about them.

The Aftermath: I was clearly going through a teacher writing phase when I wrote this. I was pondering the teacher-student relationship and while it seems like you may be close to your teacher now, do they ever think about you when you're not there to see them everyday? It took a sad turn and this story is the result.

The Opposite of an Epiphany: This was inspired by a prompt for a story writing contest that I was thinking of entering. All you had to do was write a story about religion in any way possible and as someone who is not particularly religious (yet finds the influence of it interesting), the only way I could see a nonbeliever questioning his faith is if he knew that he was going to die. Sometimes, I think about expanding this story but I finally concluded that this story is done. I really like now cynical and snarky the narrator turned out to be.

Father of the Bride: Written for the Review Game's January Writing Challenge.

Andrew McCarthy, you ruined my life: Written and dedicated to my friend. When I first thought of the plot, I had a major crush on Andrew McCarthy and imagined a girl with a similar one. The names, Emma and Caden, are my friend's two favorite names.

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All Along by KNE reviews
Neely Donovan isn’t interested in the whole popularity ordeal considering that her twin brother was one of the hottest guys that attended their school. But falling for the most popular guyand her bro's best friend was the last thing on her mind.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 20 - Words: 211,055 - Reviews: 4779 - Favs: 3,564 - Follows: 1,727 - Updated: 4/2/2012 - Published: 8/20/2004
Resistance by Hate to Hope reviews
STORY REMOVED. She began watching him from her window, all because he licked her one night. After desperately trying to think of ways to talk to him again and hopefully get another lick , she learns that he isn't exactly what you'd call... 'normal'.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Horror/Humor - Chapters: 28 - Words: 6,384 - Reviews: 2421 - Favs: 946 - Follows: 71 - Updated: 2/9/2011 - Published: 7/27/2004 - Complete
Anthems for a Seventeen Year Old Girl by Margot Tenenbaum reviews
I hadn't always been like this. The sloppy kisses in the dirty backseats of some boy's car, the drugs, the booze. But after Edwin died, a rabbit hole opened up. So I plugged my nose and jumped in head first.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 10 - Words: 44,078 - Reviews: 77 - Favs: 53 - Follows: 77 - Updated: 8/1/2010 - Published: 7/3/2008
Swish by lovelyhead reviews
He was her rival, on and off the court. He can get any girl he wants, and she doesn’t know how to lose. In a battle of basketball and the heart, Taylor Hampton won’t let James Stirling win. Dallington High School never saw this coming. REMOVED.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,503 - Reviews: 3427 - Favs: 2,755 - Follows: 1,618 - Updated: 6/17/2010 - Published: 7/23/2005 - Complete
Luka & Shoe by King Patch reviews
UPDATED! Confrontations between insecure Constance and secretive Wolf, between cranky Luka and worried Shoe, between manic Natalie and ticked-off Shoe. A glance into Shoe's past explains some of her present. What's to happen next?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 19 - Words: 115,770 - Reviews: 627 - Favs: 513 - Follows: 450 - Updated: 7/20/2009 - Published: 1/22/2006
Want, Take, Have by SouledChampion reviews
ON HIATUS WILL BE COMPLETED. David Weston: the arrogant playboy. Samantha Spade: the quiet, sarcastic one. They get along like fire and ice. But the person Sam detests most is the best man to show her what it feels like to love and be loved
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 30 - Words: 175,375 - Reviews: 2006 - Favs: 1,854 - Follows: 895 - Updated: 2/6/2009 - Published: 8/8/2005
Girl for Hire by belle.nisce reviews
They're together - only for the press. But she doesn't fit in to his world - and he makes sure it stays that way. Everybody is against them - including themselves, so really, what's the best that can come out of what they have - which is nothing? CH12 UP!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 50,513 - Reviews: 822 - Favs: 795 - Follows: 989 - Updated: 1/15/2009 - Published: 4/27/2007
The Day I Stalked Him by Vena Cava reviews
(One-Shot) 12:05pm. Target caught masturbating in bathroom stall. 007 status: in adjacent stall, hyperventilating.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,796 - Reviews: 968 - Favs: 2,196 - Follows: 173 - Published: 8/9/2008 - Complete
Beating the Game by Lord Iron-Balls reviews
Patrick Morrison had it good. He was socially invisible, ignored by the Neanderthals around him, and on the fast track to MIT. Then he made the mistake of getting involved in Marielle Pason's social games. But to Patrick, the only way out is to win.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 83,282 - Reviews: 1169 - Favs: 987 - Follows: 700 - Updated: 8/1/2008 - Published: 1/3/2006
Worth a Thousand Words by Kendal reviews
Saying farewell is never easy.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,452 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/30/2008 - Complete
The Latest Attraction by VelvetWriter reviews
Stella has lived her life as her brother's twin, invisible to the men in her life. As that changes, she struggles to figure out where she stands with her brother's best friend Armando and the image she has created for herself as one of the guys in the ban
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 78,888 - Reviews: 480 - Favs: 698 - Follows: 78 - Updated: 6/23/2008 - Published: 9/12/2003 - Complete
Description: The hows, whens, and whys by The Mumbling Sage reviews
Some thoughts on description in fiction and how to handle it.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,827 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 32 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/17/2008 - Published: 5/16/2006
The Eleventh Annual Hide Or Die Summer Challenge by Le Meg reviews
The EAHoDSC is a long-standing tradition for Adelaide and her friends. But what happens when one of her other traditions - the delicious Charlie Harris - joins the fray? You know, besides the traditional inordinate amounts of sexual tension?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10,394 - Reviews: 227 - Favs: 835 - Follows: 62 - Published: 3/28/2008 - Complete
Avery Susan Sanders is not an Ass by Justice Bana reviews
Avery Sanders should have been pleased that she received a full ride to Verminton University, one of the most prestigious colleges around. All goes well until she meets Jack Shanahan. He's rich, arrogant, and his father is paying for Avery's education.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 39 - Words: 101,808 - Reviews: 2445 - Favs: 2,516 - Follows: 544 - Updated: 10/25/2007 - Published: 4/1/2005 - Complete
Fate and Laundry Soap by invisible.writer reviews
She looked like any other student, except it was Friday night and she was sitting on a washer reading Sociology instead of partying. Maybe that's why he noticed her. They claim it was fate. oneshot
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,704 - Reviews: 57 - Favs: 192 - Follows: 15 - Published: 10/3/2006 - Complete
He Punks Me Not by Slideshow reviews
I'll chase and stalk him until he is mine. I'm pretty determined. Unfortunately his best friend thinks my existence is pointless and I'm unworthy. And, well, he's pretty damn determined too. / Left up just for comparison with my writing then and now.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 165,111 - Reviews: 4184 - Favs: 2,454 - Follows: 202 - Updated: 6/1/2006 - Published: 10/9/2003 - Complete
Everybody Hates Logan by Myrika reviews
Spin-off of Against All Odds. Logan Henderson has it all: looks, money, and brains. Or so that's what people think. His life's going down the drain, and he doesn't know how to stop it. //REMOVED//
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 3,828 - Reviews: 3320 - Favs: 1,299 - Follows: 113 - Updated: 4/19/2006 - Published: 10/18/2005 - Complete
Mating Habits of the Popular and the Petty by Myrika reviews
A certain prom night's events tore apart six friends. Loyalties splintered and love spoiled. Newcomer Jas Lindsay must figure out what really happened. //REMOVED//
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 4,194 - Reviews: 3862 - Favs: 1,443 - Follows: 110 - Updated: 12/20/2005 - Published: 8/22/2005 - Complete
Reckless by I-eat-Paste reviews
Hannah Michaels has been blessed with three older brothers who go to all end to keep her safe. To them that is running away any guy who comes closer than arms length. So what's a girl to do, hmm maybe fall in love with the only guy she's allowed around...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 46,283 - Reviews: 1054 - Favs: 557 - Follows: 256 - Updated: 10/29/2005 - Published: 7/14/2004
Sly Dog by Lainiee reviews
Winning her over had nothing to do with flowers, chocolate or suave dance moves. He only kept barging through her door to harass her. [OneShot]
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,075 - Reviews: 317 - Favs: 1,033 - Follows: 60 - Published: 8/15/2005 - Complete
Guide For Fictionpress Reviews by ColorCrayons reviews
This is Mack from Clodhopper. My cousin and I have been asked a few times how we get so many reviews. This is our response. I hope it helps!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,744 - Reviews: 113 - Favs: 139 - Follows: 15 - Published: 8/7/2005
Against All Odds by Myrika reviews
Raleigh Chase thinks guys are dogs. Her older brother's best friend Ryan Henderson claims that he can make any girl, including Raleigh, fall for him. Their bet's on for four months. Can they prove each other wrong? //REMOVED//
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 41 - Words: 4,929 - Reviews: 6862 - Favs: 3,527 - Follows: 315 - Updated: 7/27/2005 - Published: 8/23/2004 - Complete
Jack by Seraen reviews
Nicole was sure that her best friend Jack was real. No one could see him, but she knew it in her heart. On the day of her graduation, he disappears. Years later, he returns, only his name isn't Jack and people can see him...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 8 - Words: 55,012 - Reviews: 486 - Favs: 316 - Follows: 146 - Updated: 5/29/2005 - Published: 8/17/2003
Free Love by Random Acts of Authorship reviews
When her brother-in-law Luke turns up unexpectedly on her doorstep, Amy learns that sometimes love has a price. Complete. This story was a SKOW nominee in the Best Love Triangle category in July 2007.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 10 - Words: 33,531 - Reviews: 280 - Favs: 393 - Follows: 31 - Updated: 2/21/2004 - Published: 1/3/2004 - Complete
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Drifting reviews
Aron was a dream. Liv was a realist. They met at the Crab Shack. Something was bound to happen.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,333 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/15/2011 - Complete
Something Happens reviews
Boy and girl. Girl likes boy. Boy starts to reciprocate. Eventually, everything crashes.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,414 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/19/2010 - Complete
The Art of Movie Making reviews
He was the new star of Hollywood. She was the industry veteran. They were the duo that burned so bright that when they burst, it was like a perfect Oscar movie.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 25 - Words: 84,134 - Reviews: 270 - Favs: 288 - Follows: 144 - Updated: 2/12/2010 - Published: 7/26/2008 - Complete
Andrew McCarthy, you ruined my life reviews
“I guess it’s because he wasn’t a jock or too perfect. I mean, Blane and Kevin were both smart guys who made messed up decisions but they did the right thing at the end. They both fell for the girl who wasn’t perfect but loved her anyways." ONESHOT
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,496 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 33 - Follows: 4 - Published: 2/8/2009 - Complete
Father of the Bride reviews
He just found out that his daughter got married.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,279 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/2/2009 - Complete
The Opposite of an Epiphany reviews
I was 35 years, 27 days, 5 hours, and 27 minutes old when I found out that I was going to die.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,973 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/9/2008 - Complete
The Aftermath reviews
Lucy Perkins was a new teacher who only had to worry about getting through the school day. A tragedy strikes and she's left to deal with the mess alone until an expected hand comes to help her. One shot.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,546 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 6 - Published: 4/22/2008 - Complete
The Truth About Teachers reviews
My thoughts about teachers and the ones that either make you cringe or change your life forever.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 908 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/12/2008 - Complete
Avery reviews
Finch was a dreamer whose head existed in a world of Atticus', Scouts, and Boos. She soon realizes that even though her father hates guns and never been to war, he wasn't the greatest man she ever saw.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,808 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/11/2008 - Complete
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