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Joined 06-01-05, id: 479003
Author has written 16 stories for Nature, Life, Religion, Haiku, General, and Love.

Name: Thomas N. Chiong Sy III

Age: 19

Religion: Roman Catholic

Came out of my mom on: January 07, 1988

Born and Raised: Cebu City, Philippinees a.k.a. Southside D.C.

Stuck In: Lodi, California

Stuff that I like: Books, music, movies,writing rap and poetry,and the beauty of women

Authors who inspire me: Anne Rice and Stephen King

Factors that affect my writing: God,philosophy,books, human nature,great men,emotions, intuition,nature,music, the supernatural, the inner child's imagination, the inner conflict of the human being.

Favorite poems:

1.) "The Rose That Grew From Concrete" by: Tupac Shakur

2.) "Winkin', Blinkin' and Nod" by: Unknown

3.) "Messy Room" by: Shel Silverstein

4.) "The Road Not Taken" by : Robert Frost

5.) "Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening" by: Robert Frost

6.) "I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings" by: Maya Angelou

7.) "Phenomenal Woman" by: Maya Angelou

8.) "The Raven" by: Edgar Allan Poe

9.) "A Dream Within A Dream" by: Edgar Allan Poe

10.) "Life Is Fine" by: Langston Hughes

- Wat up people?!...I'm an 18 year old college sophomore taking up my Bachelor Of Arts in Psychology. I love hiphop and writing rap. Also love a great deal, my share of screamo, hardcore, metal, alternative, emo, and experimental rock music. Also a variety of others, I keep my options open. Just here to read the works of greater writers and see if I can sharpen up my writing skills. Plus, there ain't nothing new going on these dayzz, so might as well write poetry to pass the time. I always make this attempt to capture a certain beauty through a creative perspective. I believe, that no matter how clichet the topic, you can still pull it off to be a great poem or story if you choose the right writing style. You also gotta have a writer you admire, to be your goad and drive your ambition to be a better writer. I, myself, bow down to the works of Edgar Allan Poe, the man is a genius! Robert Frost and Maya Angelou are also very skilled poets. In books, it's hands down, no doubt it, they would have to be Anne Rice and Stephen King. I have also done alot of reading on Sir Arthur Conan Doyle's Sherlock Holmes, I think I've already read all of the Sherlock books and most of the short stories.

-According to some personality test, I'm an Idealistic Philosopher. Which I'm supposed to be psyched about, since only 3 percent of the human population has this. But knowing that I'm that much of a rarity, makes the world seem like a lonelier place...

- My problem in writing, is that, like Leonardo Da Vinci, I'm a natural procrastinator. I don't know, its just that everytime I write a poem there is always that feeling that you're tearing away a piece of yourself that is needed in writing the words down. And there's always the fear that the words won't come out right. Plus, it's really hard for me to get started on the first few words.So whenever I do decide to write a poem, it's usually a very big deal for me.

- Believe it or not, most of the works I've done ain't about me. They usually about a certain beauty, that I've taken from an interesting angle, that have caught my eye. And I try to keep it real always, every piece of work I've done has a glint of the human suffering, strength, confusion, dignity, hate, wisdom but most of all, Love.

- So here's the usual trade the majority of the fictionpress people are offering, you review me, I review you. Sounds fair? Good, I think so too. I enjoy reading other people's works anyway, it gives me a chance to broaden my horizons. You know the problem of a lot of writers is that they always stick to a certain theme all throughout. Be open-minded dawg! Give a chance to the topics you don't normally use. And don't worry if you find people disagreeing with your works. A great man once said, "Neither God nor man will tell me what to write"...God I wish I remembered who that was?

- Life is a process of constant change and a strive for perfection. Held together with what man has called love. However, others refer to the existense of an Alpha Being in control of this chain of events known as life. While others merely mention the persistance and illusional self-importance given by men to themselves. Whatever the reason, let's help each other out.

"Whatever you are, be a good one." - Abraham Lincoln

According from some personality test I took, I am;

Stability results were high which suggests you are very relaxed, calm, secure, and optimistic..

Orderliness results were moderately low which suggests you are, at times, overly flexible, improvised, and fun seeking at the expense of reliability, work ethic, and long term accomplishment.

Extraversion results were moderately low which suggests you are reclusive, quiet, unassertive, and secretive.

trait snapshot:

secretive, reclusive, messy, disorganized, introverted, unassertive, rarely worries, dislikes large parties, does not like to fit in, does not need to control others, solitary, ambivalent about chaos, tough, leisurely, does not respect authority, not aggressive, observer, abstract, impractical, dislikes leadership, daydreamer, bizarre, does not make friends easily, not a perfectionist, suspicious, rarely irritated, strong physical instincts, unsympathetic at times, risk taker, submissive, weird, sarcastic, strange

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At the age of by Risa the Moon reviews
My life in a poem
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 334 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 2/8/2007 - Published: 8/4/2005
The Poet as a Scientist by Porphyro's Madeline reviews
I read a quote from Blake this morning 'The poet has much to learn from the scientist'. I began thinking of a small essay for this.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 314 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/27/2007 - Complete
Firefly by Vulpine Ninja reviews
When you are in the dark... please remember that there is always a little hope...
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 221 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/27/2006 - Complete
Don't try stopping what you fear by Rosemistress reviews
this is another essay, brief, of course. it speaks of many things at the same time, mostly what happens when u try to avoid sumthin
Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 905 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/9/2006 - Complete
Changing Personas by simpleplan13 reviews
::shrug:: im not sure where this came from, but i kinda like it...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/13/2006
Dizzy Point of View by NinjaStoryteller reviews
This is about being bipolar... it's not easy.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/30/2006
Boy by Vyvyan reviews
So filled with dreams, there is no life...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/23/2006
Rose Bud by Forgotten Pains reviews
If you are who you are...then are we not capable of being something else?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/19/2006
bell'anima terribile haikus by miss lavender reviews
Haikus for those with an awful yet lovely soul. I think that goes for all of us, in a way.. May these at least halfway relate to you, so we can all somehow get through this together. A terrible muss of contradictions..
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 68 - Words: 2,580 - Reviews: 433 - Favs: 6 - Updated: 2/14/2006 - Published: 6/23/2005
Kiss Me by simpleplan13 reviews
I originally wrote this will all shes (as in about a lesbian couple), but it was a tad confusing and not really necessary to the poem. So yea another angsty love poem.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 5 - Published: 1/17/2006
Lifelove by Mizamour reviews
A mother and child... love's simple gifts help life's exhausting trials. A cute poem... different from my other work, but me nonetheless... hope you like it!
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/24/2005
One Page Diary of a Hobo by NinjaStoryteller reviews
This is written about a peice of paper that I found at a park during my vacation to Denver. Some hobo was apparently using it as a diary. I forget most of what it said; it was interesting and well written, though it was really sad. I hope he did find a pl
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/6/2005
Not a Young Poet by Edward Savoy reviews
Bad young poets (only the bad ones)
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Published: 12/6/2005
Idols Are Made, Hearts Are Broken by Looking For You reviews
Random thoughts and feelings and dreams.
Fiction: Biography - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 636 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/29/2005
Perfection by Speaker For The Live reviews
I call this piece one of my three masterpieces, and it is probably the piece of writing I'm most proud of. At this point I honestly have trouble reading it it brings back so much.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 803 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/27/2005
Smile by Rosanna28 reviews
About a dream I had that reminded me why I dont wanna have children..Please R&R
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/30/2005
Emo Kiddie by Anthony Tatsumaki reviews
A bad day at Preschool leaves a kid in the fetal position
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 326 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/18/2005
No Name by Klunderbunker reviews
About what I want to be remembered as.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/24/2005
I remember Travis in 97’ by Faithless Juliet reviews
I am so old standing next to my shadow.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 414 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/12/2005
Silence by Moon-Chaser reviews
I lost my voice and I thought that it would be better if it stayed like that. The good things never last. Please Read and Review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/9/2005
The Thief's Conscience by Odi et amo reviews
A good reason not to multitask...if one were an insane thief robbing a museum and having an argument with one's conscience. First story ever on here!
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 418 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/7/2005
so THIS is love by OverTheStars87 reviews
As a writing assignment at school, we were asked to define an emotion. And this is my definition of love. Enjoy...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/6/2005
Cherry Blossoms by Steel Winged Angel reviews
Let the wind take us places, but never change us. Something I wrote in my college creative writing class. I really like it. I hope you do as well.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/6/2005
World by Constant Murdock reviews
Written in an effort to overcome writer's block. Reviews are most welcomed .
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/3/2005
Fireworks by hanfiddle reviews
Ever feel like a Fred Astaire movie...?
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/2/2005
The Boy Who Cried Love by Rouge Fingertips reviews
When you say "I love you" mean it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/26/2005
When My Friend 'The Poem' Visits by CarpeDiem28 reviews
When my friend, "The Poem," comes to visit me, her words are full of laughter and glee...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/16/2005
Mine Forever by Moonlit Waters reviews
Misandry is fun for the whole family.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,742 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/7/2005
Guide For Fictionpress Reviews by ColorCrayons reviews
This is Mack from Clodhopper. My cousin and I have been asked a few times how we get so many reviews. This is our response. I hope it helps!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,744 - Reviews: 113 - Favs: 139 - Follows: 15 - Published: 8/7/2005
Realizations by Astarayl reviews
Sometimes we all realize things too late... "You weren’t the only one with problems for fixing.." [con. crit. appreciated]
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 347 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/6/2005
Great Expectations by Agathon reviews
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Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 582 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/5/2005
Dreamer's Hall by Cristina Ray reviews
a children's story :)
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 606 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/5/2005
Farewell by Nobody-n-Particular reviews
Good luck to writing!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 439 - Favs: 27 - Updated: 8/2/2005 - Published: 4/20/2005
The Player by Agathon reviews
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Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/2/2005
See You Sometime by munchkin21 reviews
Poem about losing friends. Thought of it on teh way home fromt eh cinema one day. I hadn't seen my best friend for months. So yeah R&R
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/28/2005
The Chosen Ones by dustytiger reviews
this is a very spritual piece about holcaust surviors, it is also going to be the submission for contest so all help would be appricated
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/27/2005
Castles by dustytiger reviews
this one was written after i found out my sis was pregnant, it's basically about wanting to go back to how it was but realising it is someone elses time for innocence, read it you'll understand review and i'l be overjoyed!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/24/2005
Listening Isn't Enough by dancingintherain reviews
for you, bff...i never felt that listening was enough...i really wanted to do more to make you feel better...i wish i could have...
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 283 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 6 - Published: 2/25/2005
A Twinkling Above by Matthew James Current reviews
This is for Hawke. May she always be able to see the stars.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/10/2004
Damn it Joe by PigOnTheWing reviews
I cannot say it enough. I love this poem. I don't know why- if you knew me, you'd know how strange I am. In any case, it just makes me imagine. I love it. R/R, and maybe you will too.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/11/2003
Meditation by Jessica R Vance reviews
Mumbling.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/19/2001
Jesus Goes to Hollywood by Flutternut reviews
Flutternut is back with a vegeance! So what happens when Jesus gets bored with his gig in Heaven? Like any good simaritan, he goes to HOLLYWOOD!
Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 276 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 4 - Published: 7/23/2001
A True Friend by Ayame Takaishi reviews
A poem about a friend deceiving another and what a true friend is.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 318 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/29/2001
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Attack Of The Haiku reviews
I've been up against the wall in writer's block these days since my accident.Until I get my rhythm back, just thought of starting a little collection of haikus and tankas that i'll be updating regularly.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 10 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 12/22/2006 - Published: 8/19/2006
Her Eternal Whisper reviews
Though I can never have you, your name repeats itself in my head. Maybe you were meant for someone else, but I thank you anyway for showing me what true love for a woman feels like-the first love poem I've done for over a year.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 3 - Published: 1/15/2006
A Little Bird Gazing reviews
I wanted to go back and write simpler poems with a more basic theme that is easy to grasp. I've been writing too many long poems. So I got inspired from a Stan Rice painting, and this is what came out.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 347 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 6 - Published: 12/13/2005
A Wolf Running In The Mist reviews
A lone wolf flees for it's life to escape a looming evil as he battles the winter cold.A metaphorical poem about life,inspired from a book I've read in childhood.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 638 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 12/3/2005
Portrait Of A Writer reviews
This one was a little frustrating to finish, but here are my confessions of being a writer, but most of all as a human being.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 609 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 9 - Published: 11/2/2005
Reminiscing The Angels reviews
On a jeepney there was this little girl that kept on staring at me. That was what inspired me to write this. Unconsciously, I was also writing this for a person I never really said good bye to.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 505 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/13/2005
The Bestest Cure reviews
This was supposed to be my first attempt at horror. It turned out to be more eerie rather than horror...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 47 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/6/2005
Thoughts Of The Progressing Mind reviews
I was thinking of the african savannah when I decided to write this one down. Kinda has remnants of the "Tower Of Babel" story doesn't it?
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 8/15/2005
Speckled Glass reviews
I looked into a fragment of glass and did you know what I saw? A new flow of poetry I'm trying out. Please review!=)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/15/2005
A Philosopher's Ultimatum reviews
What I did was compress what free thinking scientists, philosophers, and theologians have been stating and arguing about for many centuries.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 4 - Published: 8/15/2005
The Big Picture reviews
Try a more universal perspective on things. My first attempts at haiku.=P
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/8/2005
Rain Swayed reviews
I just wanted to see if there were any changes lately.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 21 - Published: 8/8/2005
Clown Face reviews
Who do YOU think this is?...
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 320 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 5 - Published: 8/6/2005
I Saw God Once reviews
Can anyone tell me where God is? I thought I saw him, but he went away.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 350 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 5 - Published: 8/4/2005
The Solitarist reviews
Is there no greater ecstacy than to spend some time alone? Just feel yourself catching up to ya' before routines start all over again.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 6/11/2005
To Ride A Slingshot reviews
A long time ago, I used to have this slingshot i'd play with as as a kid. One day, I picked up a small stone from the ground and fired it to the sun. Strange thing is, I never did see it come down, and on that night I wrote my first real poem. Here it is:
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/11/2005