LaLuneD'Argent
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Joined 06-05-05, id: 479805
Author has written 3 stories for General, and Young Adult.

Hey Fictionpress!

My name is Charlotte, and I'm from Louisville, KY. I'm 18, but I've been writing for a long time and I want some feedback on my work.

Some more about me:

I speak French, pretty fluently, though I wish my vocabulary were bigger; I love musicals, listening to and singing in/with them; and I play viola and hope to make that my career.

About my stories:

The two I'm intending to post here are going to be about the same people, but are going to be separate, stand-alone stories.The one chronologically second, but which I started first, is in first person and present tense with long-ish chapters. The other one is in third person and past tense, and I'm playing around with quick, short chapters. On the up side, that means I'll update that one more often. Neither of them are very far along yet, and I haven't shown them to anyone, so be gentle?

Now I have a new story! A present tense, first person thing (I love doing that right now). I think this is a really good story, but, you know, I wrote it, so I'd like to hear what you all think :D

Any and all constructive criticism (or praise ;-)) is appreciated, so read and review! If you want to talk to me on AIM or something, leave me a review saying so and I'll give you my name.

That's about all I can think of right now, so go! Read! Review! NOW!

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La Chanteuse reviews
She shakes, terrified, as the director asks her to sing, but manages it anyway. It's Christine's first audition without her best friend, Kaie, and eventually, her first show. But when she's reunited with an old high school friend, she's no longer lonely
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 13,589 - Reviews: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 10/24/2006 - Published: 6/11/2005
Les Chanteux de L'Opera reviews
My characters, Christine LePrix and Kaie Robinson, singers and best friends, are invited the summer after senior year to play their dream roles in Mozart's The Magic Flute. Actually much more interesting than the summary would suggest.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,174 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/5/2006
Les Chanteux de Lycee reviews
Christine and Kaie are seniors in high school, preparing for their last musical, The Wizard of Oz. As the leads they inspire jealousy, even among their friends. See how it all plays out... Actually much better than the summary would have you believe.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,467 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4/13/2006 - Published: 6/11/2005