Luna Lapella
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Joined 06-06-05, id: 480081
Author has written 7 stories for Fantasy, Haiku, Essay, Mythology, and Mystery.

PLEASE NOTE: The first chapter of Lost in Limbo was changed severely (only in the second half). I took down the old story, but you can view the improved version as my story Miasma.

Reviews. Reviews are great. Sometimes you read a story and it's decent, but not outstanding, or you only skim it, or you can't finish it, or it's somewhat bad, and you just don't want to spend time reviewing. This happens to me a lot, but reviews are the best part of this site. I post two chapters that total 4000 words of a story I worked very hard on, and I get no reviews at first, but then I get one that tells me it's great, and that makes it all worth it. Review any story you read, because the writer truly appreciates it. If you review a story of mine, I'll definitely review one of yours. So =D

So I guess I'll give you a brief bio on all my stories now.

Miasma-- Basically, the continent has been threatened by enraged monsters, so The Service was founded. It enlists young boys and trains them with weapons to slay monsters. Koji is one of them, a pretty average one. But then, strange visions of an evil misty manifestation begin to haunt him, and a mysterious man named Nevis with something to hide goes on killing sprees using his terrible power. Sprites, bewitching female apparitions, are riled up and lapse into destructive rages, like the monsters, only worse. And Koji's got to untangle it all. My first story, so it has a special place in my heart, even if it's been rewritten several times. I probably love it the most, even if it isn't the most original.

Children of the Unicorn-- Unicorn Children are people with white hair, silver nails, and a silver triangular marking on their foreheads, blessed before birth by unicorns. Kistelle is one of them, though her gifts have led her to be an outcast. Things change though, from a new friendship and mysterious vision. Kistelle learns her peaceful world of Doppel is not what it appears...I think it's the most original of my stories (the others are rather cliche), though it uses the parallel world aspect.

1000 Word Mysteries-- Basically like those mini mysteries in books. It's only one, and I don't think I'll write more, because this one's answer is sort of complicated and inane, but if you want to give it a try, go ahead.

Tantalized-- Really short writing practice. It was a while ago, so I'm sure I'm better now. Basically a bunch of imagery about a Greek myth. (If you don't know the myth, Tantalus was a guy who the gods were going to visit. He wanted to feed them something great, so he made his precious son into a stew for them. The gods were sickened and enraged, so he wascondemned to eternal punishment: he's famished and parched, chin-deep in clear water and with luscious fruit suspended above him. However, the water and fruit retreat whenever he tries to eat/drink them. This is the origin of the word "tantalize".)

Mary-Sues for the Clueless-- An essay on Mary-Sues that has become very controversial. I want to delete it, but I'm too lazy now. Maybe later. It's bad, though. Don't be mean to me. o_o

Storm of Existence, Eddies of Thoughts-- Another cheesy, last minute title. A girl named Aeffi finds herself in another world called Evalo (ooh...creativity!). She makes a little poofy cat-bird thing and makes friends with people named Ceph and Ulea. She learns it is her "perfect world", a world her mind made perfectly for her and, when she got too bored of Earth, got transported there, even though it's totally real. So, she sets on an RPG-esque adventure she's always dreamed of. Still, she finds she needs to make some changes before the world is perfect. Using her newly-discovered shamanism, she learns about bizarre Evalan stuff like color factories, shark-based religion, mindless (literally) slaves, chimeras, and cannon transportation. It's my only story with first-person perspective. Being my second story, I love it too.

Witch-- A haiku. Just read it. It's like 20 words.

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Rants, Raves, and Reviews by SapphireIris reviews
Each chapter contains one rant, one rave and one review. Well, as far as I can get, anyways. From SapphireIris, who is most assuredly not dead.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 13 - Words: 8,499 - Reviews: 111 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 4/14/2008 - Published: 3/16/2006
Toxins by Forever Forbidden reviews
I'll stop hating myself...when I can learn to stop loving you.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/7/2006
Backmasking: Subliminal Messages by Darket reviews
(Long Overdue, finished) This is a four part essay about the study of Backmasking. This is about the legend that playing music in reverse will reveal hidden messages. But are they real? This is a history of the study.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,808 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 6 - Updated: 6/20/2006 - Published: 2/12/2006
The Trans of Doom by The-One-Who-Smiteth reviews
Uhh... two trans peeps.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/29/2005
The End Of Seperation by A Very Disappointed Author reviews
This website has become very seperated, doesn't anyone long for the good ol' days?
Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 7,491 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 9/28/2005 - Published: 7/24/2005
Red by The-One-Who-Smiteth reviews
Sentient weeds are taking over Avalandrea-the elements must combine to save Avalandrea. Cliché, I know; I suck at summaries. The rating is for some violence and language. ;) Fantasy, elements, and I tried not to be too cliché- what do you have to lose?
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,350 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/3/2005
Allison Meta Morpho by Espers reviews
The story of the Magical Cursing Faerie Angel and her adventures with vegetables, assorted annoyances, a clockwork castle, and most of all...cute boys and a little romantic fluff.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,263 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 4 - Updated: 8/19/2005 - Published: 10/16/2004
The Glancey Manor by Vampyroteuthis reviews
The first chapter of a story that I will never finish because the plot is not worth writing.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,418 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/28/2005
Aberdaun by Nera Black reviews
A short one-shot fic I wrote as a bit of an excersize. I may someday make it into a full blown story...but then again, I may not.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/14/2005
4 Seasons: A Collection by Riley Adams reviews
A few 55 word stories we wrote for Language Arts. Constructive Criticism Appreciated. : )
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 287 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/9/2005
Do u use txt spk? by katmonkey reviews
Emails & txt msgs r becoming more popular than ltrs. Txt spk is ruinin spellin & grama in skools. Please R&R
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 221 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/30/2004
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Miasma reviews
In which the group meets a stranger and Dir makes an idiot out of himself. Like always.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,823 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 2/19/2007 - Published: 1/2/2006
Children of the Unicorn reviews
A Unicorn Child is often referred to as part of a race or species, when it is actually an extraordinary human. Unicorn Children were blessed before birth by unicorns.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,809 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/5/2005
1000 Word Mysteries reviews
A collection of mini mysteries. Chapter one features a gardener and an ex-husband as suspects. Oohh...
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 976 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/15/2005
Tantalized reviews
I was just practicing writing, so it's nothing very difficult to comprehend, but I think it ended up nice.
Fiction: Mythology - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 526 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6/15/2005
MarySues for the Clueless reviews
A description of Mary-Sues, how they come to be, and how to avoid them. This will be very useful for fanfic writers who don't know what a Mary-Sue is.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,855 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 5 - Published: 6/14/2005
Storm of Existence, Eddies of Thoughts reviews
What to do today? How about witness the creation of "my" world, create a puffy thing, and become a shaman? Sounds fun.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,539 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 6/13/2005 - Published: 6/9/2005
Witch reviews
I wrote this for a school poetry notebook...I like it, though.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6/9/2005