ayounggirlwhopaintedarainbow
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Joined 07-17-05, id: 486139
Author has written 33 stories for Life, Friendship, General, Love, Song, and Nature.

My poetry describes who i am much more acuratly than i ever could. If you read a bit of my work, you might know me better than people who actually know me. I'm somewhat shy about my writting. I like having a acount with a pen name where i can be compleatly anonymous. Everyone uses their fiction press acount diffenertly, so if you are looking for polished ready for publication peices you probably won't find what your looking for in me. I post most things, i tend to feel that things are finished and i don't really like to change them. But i love critisizm. i value that much more than "great poem! keep writting." But really, i hate most all things that are generic. I can't guarentee that i will review you if you review me-like so many others do. But i will do my best.

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stick figure boy by White Tea and Ginger reviews
ferris wheel kiss. [ 4 chapters ].
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 320 - Reviews: 55 - Favs: 11 - Updated: 2/26/2006 - Published: 1/18/2006 - Complete
State of paralysis by sunday night sky reviews
The girls with the larger vocabularies liked to call her 'unorthodox' but everyone else in high school labelled her 'freak'... plz r'n'r - one of my better pieces, I think.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 696 - Reviews: 57 - Favs: 27 - Published: 2/21/2006
The Rose is Crying by Guarded Silence reviews
Her gilded prayer slipped from his hand. Now he walks in the garden alone.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 340 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/22/2006
mermaid lagoon eyes by White Tea and Ginger reviews
i'm suffocating in here.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 5 - Published: 12/12/2005 - Complete
Condemned by Guarded Silence reviews
You smiled as I died alone.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/1/2005
Gravestones and Spidersilk by Plinky reviews
A poem - can't really explain what it is about. Kind of ethereal and a little different to my usual style, though I'm not really sure what my usual style is! Read?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 5 - Published: 9/27/2005
Death of Roses by Guarded Silence reviews
The two of them stood together and lied about life while I wallowed in death.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 257 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/13/2005
Your Name on My Wrist by Guarded Silence reviews
I thought about you today, as a blue flower blossomed on my wrist.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/31/2005
Skin Deep by Celyia reviews
Just a few of my thoughts on beauty. :-)
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/22/2001
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our island of happines reviews
my memory of him
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/27/2006
fire reviews
the words that the camp fire spoke in my ear...
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/2/2006
nest of the past reviews
sentimentality. memories. thoughts...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/2/2006
Doors reviews
the doors of the ghost town
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/2/2006
A comparison of our compositions reviews
what is it that makes you unatainable?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/2/2006
Moon reviews
A molment of solitude on the night after the full moon in Death Valley
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/21/2006
Fall canyon reviews
a short poem written after a grueling hike in Death Valley
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/21/2006
green and grey reviews
things that came to my head on a long long drive
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/21/2006
the last watered down sip reviews
a little something i wrote a long time ago.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/27/2006
hoping for a marigold reviews
a poem about things i canot have.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/27/2006
love poem reviews
a english assignment for valentines day. please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/14/2006
Morning becomes Mourning reviews
i had hoped maybe i could prove that nagging voice wrong
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/12/2006
the lie we live reviews
...the lie we live...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/8/2006
i'm not me i'm ME reviews
i was in a horrible mood. it's hard to explain. just read it.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/2/2006
Who am i on he dance floor? reviews
how do i appear to others?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/18/2005
a girl i don't know reviews
insight into the pain of a girl. a certin girl.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/14/2005
ticktacktoe: my February reflections reviews
just something i needed to get out. Please R&R, i'm trying to improve my song writing skills.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 367 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/30/2005
The view through a mirror reviews
i have a really hard time writting songs, and this may be considered more of a poem than a song. it's definatly not one of my favorites. Anyways, it's very personal, it's about me and the other part of me.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 390 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/13/2005
a sonnet questioning the saddness reviews
another sonnet, these are hard for me so i would love some criticizm. please R&R-Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/28/2005
the sonnet of orderly confusion reviews
i really need help with this! i have to turn in a sonnet for school, and it's been giving me a lot of trouble. So i you could R+R that would be absolutly fabulous! THANKS!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/26/2005
come on in reviews
this is kind of bizzare. It's about someone who was abused by there lover, but can't get over them. Please read and respond! Thanks
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10/23/2005
i am not reviews
and who i am not
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10/11/2005
i am reviews
my views on who i am
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 5 - Published: 10/11/2005
joy reviews
just some of my thoughts on joy. Please R&R, Thanks!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/4/2005
When sorrow blooms reviews
a short piece that i wrote for school and need some imediate feed back on. Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/4/2005
why reviews
this is just a searies of questions masquerading as a poem. Please R&R-Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/20/2005
running in place reviews
these are a bunch of lines about myself put together to create a poem. I need input on this one. Please R&R-Thanks!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/19/2005
all the chaos within me reviews
this is just something that sort of came out. it started as one thing and evolved to another. i would love some ideas for it.- thanks!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/17/2005
forgotten dream reviews
This is basicly a re-write of slouching Ink(both the original and the re-write where for english class). I would love your oppinion on this piece. i feel like this poem somehow has some significance, like i have to get it just right. your comments would b
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/12/2005
eating laughter reviews
this is a chaotic little poem that i wrote after babysiting 25 kids for 3 hours
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/2/2005
Blubbering trombone reviews
This is fairly light hearted, another one for english class. Please review-Thanks
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/31/2005
why love your lemons? reviews
this is a piece that i have been wanting to write for a long while. i finally got it down at camp, so here it is. I would love some suggesions for improvement!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/31/2005
Slouching ink reviews
This is a piece that is giving me some serious trouble. i need to know if it is good enough for my eighth grade english class. If it is not, than please give some constructive critisizm. Thanks
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/30/2005