Immortal Nyght
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Joined 08-11-05, id: 489961
Author has written 49 stories for Life, General, School, Love, Nature, Politics, Romance, and Family.

To all who read me, here is a little insight into the person whose work you are critiquing and admiring. I am male, 17, and my passion is writing. My personality is very multi-faceted, kinda like a giant Yin Yang incarnated. I'm pretty down to earth, but a bit of a dreamer too, and though intellectual and compassionate, I have my own little twists of cynicism, malice, and sadomasochism that make my personality all the more acidic. Call me bittersweet, I guess.

I'm always open to anyone who wants to contact me, and am always up for a good chat. So, if you come across me on the sight, feel free to ambush me on AIM or email whatever.

As for this sight, this shows some of my poetry from the past two years, as well as a number of conversation pieces with my lover, Nyghts Dark Desire. I may even try and post some chapters from my auto-bio and my novel, as well as short stories, though these, if they show up, will come with no frequent routine or schedule.

Below are my works, some complete, some in increments. Enjoy, or don't, but critiques are always valued.

-Immortal Nyght

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Sight by Dying Rose reviews
What have you seen? Did you see the moon rise? The sun fall? The stars shine? Did you see me at all?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 2/27/2006
I Miss You by Dying Rose reviews
Not a typical I-miss-you poem. A bloody rose screams silently, dying...The killing stroke?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/18/2006
Night's sweet release by lxpetrik reviews
"Loose hair flying, My soul crying. . ."
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/14/2005
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Mad Man's Burden reviews
This is a response to Rudyard Kipling's "The White Man's Burden." Any unfamiliar with it should goodgle it before reading this, because the two are closely entertwined.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 314 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/31/2006
Tonight reviews
This needs critiquing, as I'm trying some things new. So, any who are familiar with sonnets and with submission, constructive criticism is appreciated.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/18/2006
Mistress reviews
My rarely-seen submissive side. Still working on how to capture this paradigm in words, so critiquing is appreciated.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5/18/2006
My Pet reviews
Not your usual love poem. Though on this subject, in may be my tamest poem.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/9/2006
Crow reviews
About the transformation one undergoes under love, this takes a lot of analyizing to make sense and get everything out of. If you're patient, please critique
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/9/2006
Save Me reviews
Read the title if you want a summary
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/9/2006
Lady reviews
To the tune of London Bridge, you may sing this song of a broken house
Poetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Angst/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 275 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4/5/2006
Wakatashi reviews
Watching "Yojimbo" and having to explain the movie to my World Film teacher got me thinking this one up. First poem in too long. Damn writer's block
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/5/2006
Sprite reviews
I can't get the words from an old poem out of my head. "She walks in beauty like the night" This is trying to capture the person I connect with that line
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/15/2006
Heretical Love reviews
Love is like a religion with its devotion, but like all relgions it can become as profane and unholyas it can be divine.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3/14/2006
Immolate reviews
Most people are familiar with the buring alive of heretics during the Inquisition. Well, my first kiss with some one had such a flame that the whole relationship was like that.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 3/8/2006
Torpor reviews
Does a corpse hurt. Nay, it is numb, lonely, sorrowful, but numb from the senses rotting away.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/8/2006
Limits reviews
Still rough. Please critique.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/7/2006
Innocence reviews
I took something I can't return. m Should I regret it?
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/4/2006
Pi reviews
Apparently, Pi Day is a national holiday. I was assigned to do a project for it. Here's a poem, interpretting Pi as the result of the perfect little circle's true identity. Read, and you'll see what I mean.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/28/2006
Welcome Back reviews
Ever feel so stranded you're practically on a desert island? Physically and emotionally removed from everything meaningful against your will?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/27/2006
Weep reviews
This is borderline emo-sounding, so all emo haters, be warned. There is no cutting, but it has the "curled up in a fetal position in the corner" effect. And yes, yes, it is a love poem.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2/25/2006
Paper Hearts reviews
Why do people feel that chocolates and cute cards with witty punchlines express love better than actually doing r saying something from the heart?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/14/2006
Obscene Vision
Describing something I just saw a few moent's ago...anything else gives the poem away.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Published: 2/12/2006
AIM reviews
This was my AIM away message, but some one told me it was one of the best thing's I've ever written. Decide for yourself, if the fact it was an away message doesn't scare you off.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/11/2006
Impaled reviews
This is about sex. I originally began it very, very, very differently so it could have been about rape, taking virginity, Ted Bundy, Vlad Tepes, or a number of other interpretations, but couldn't get the format to flow, so I scrapped it and began again.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/10/2006
Last Supper reviews
A romantic piece blaspheming the Last Supper and the Holy Grail.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/10/2006
Incubus and Succubus reviews
The title should reveal this isn't the most Disney-like love piece ever, but it unfortunately isn't quite an Elizabeth Bathory romance either. I still need more virgin sacrifices and satan worship to get there.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/9/2006
Scalpel reviews
Sometimes a lover is all that can heal you, and the love's pain and cruelty is all that distracts you from the hurting. This takes that concept to a sadomasochistic extreme.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/9/2006
Butterfly Spirits reviews
Yes, its a love poem with a sappy name like some second-grade hippie child on opiates made it. Its not that. I couldn't think of a title and took words from the text. Its one of my few love poems that the sane can empathize with.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/6/2006
55 reviews
In 55 words, my lover asked me to summarize my feelings. It is a scientific law of the universe that I am incapable of being concise, and many have tested their thesises to disprove this law and been proven that their hopes were futile. Here are my 55 w
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/6/2006
Shoes reviews
This is a series of metaphors for ways I've tried to live my life. Rough in format, I admit to having written it to stay awake in Pre-calc, and would like literary critique. Thanks
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/2/2006
Lessons' Secrets reviews
This is written as part of a conversation with another author on the sight. Before reading it, please read Nyghts Dark Desire's piece entitled "Secret Lessons" otherwise this will make no sense on its own.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/2/2006
Razorblade Love reviews
Love at its most sadomaniacal form and the deepest levels devotion and sacrifice for that love. A Valentine's Day poem posted early, for Nyghts Dark Desire. I am experimenting with formatting on the sight, so coment if the formatting is off.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/26/2006
My Desire reviews
This is written about the authot Nyghts Dark Desire, in response to the poem posted entitled "My Immortal" and though anyone may read this, they should first read "My Immortal" for clarity as this is a conversation.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 280 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/13/2006
Doomed Candles reviews
This is about a loved one, but it is written to make reference to anyone who is loved and beyond the grave. I tried not to make it clechéd.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/13/2006
Mountain Climbing reviews
I titled this about life because it's how I live my life. Always facing my inner demons and always running from them at the same time.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 332 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/10/2006
Crimson Jewel reviews
A cheesy love-poem to a Goth chick I dated. The closest to saying something sweet that wasn't total horseshit I ever got.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/2/2006
Angelic Eyes reviews
This was written for an ex, who I told I could write a whole poem about such perfect eyes. I have since rewritten it many times for many people.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/2/2006
Hollow Dawn reviews
Insanity and depression can make one forget feeling, and the nerve-endings of the soul are scorched useless. Only empty memories and meaningless facts remain.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 424 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/2/2006
America reviews
Maybe a bit satyrical, this displays my political beliefs about what America has become.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/2/2006
Remorseless Kiss reviews
This is about love, though not incest as metaphors might suggest. But it is a tale of infidelity and overlapping love, while lovers are swept out of their own control by greater forces.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 585 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/1/2006
Time reviews
Man built the clock to measure time, and our creation has man enslaved.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/17/2005
Ungodly Seven reviews
About the time I was unfaithful to a love-one. Maybe a bit clechéd, but at least emotional.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/17/2005
Sleeping Doll reviews
People often strive for perfection. Some think they've acheived it. Those people only acheived doublethink, illusions.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/17/2005
Painting reviews
Just a twisted piece about masochistic artwork
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/17/2005
My Rose reviews
This saying that the "bad" qualities of some one are just as beautiful and wonderful, as the "good".
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/17/2005
Warmth in the World of Winter reviews
This is about some one who helped wake me up and who I helped heal the hurts of.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/11/2005
F reviews
Failing sucks. But when somebody fails, its usually because of more than stupidity.
Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 4 - Published: 11/10/2005
Bonfire reviews
I think of the soul as a Bonfire. It burns brightly, can be put out, can dull to embers, can be salvaged from embers, and if it is to keep burning then it will need resources.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/10/2005
Hitler reviews
This is very controversial, and no I'm not a nazi. I just don't believe in any human as being wholly evil and I do believe in causality.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/6/2005
Iron and Salt reviews
Happy knife in my life. Happy blood and its flood.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/6/2005
Internal Flame reviews
I describe my passion of life as a fire. All of my love, hate, anger, joy, hope, determination, hunger, and lust burns, consuming my surroundings at times, or diminishing under the rains of external pressures.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/6/2005
Dreamer reviews
I am a dreamer by nature, so this is about following your heart, and is built from simplicity because your dreams may be the only clear thing in your heart at times.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/6/2005